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sam88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

oh god just read it again 😉

i like wiefy khushi curise abt his food n phone calls😆

specially from MS SAXENA n arnav is vvery well aware of dis

he wants khushi to accept dat she is jealouse

but khushi is khushi

he used her dis weakness when he was on call to win in his game

she seduced him thinking he was busy with ms saxena

i m waiting 2 know wat khushi wants to tel him abt her past

part E was very hot i made me speachless

i m glad dat khushi said those 3 word but seriously wat arnav did she had to say dat😉

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mayad

@mayad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

Hi KC, what can I say this is just so incredible! Loved the idea of her wearing very feminine underwear while wearing his clothing! It is just a real turn on for most men when their woman wears their clothing! I remember forgetting certain items of clothing on a trip and had to borrow off my husband until I coud purchase new things! Let's just say it was a very memorable trip!!!😉

Loved the comradery of them now and the fact that they are comfortable teasing each other. This shows what a sense of humour you, the author, has as well! I now know that you are a bit of a tease yourself! Very refreshing and makes for an enjoyable read!

On the topic of "teasing" you wrote 9000 words and still left us hanging as to what Khushi's secret is about! Please remember my poor weakened heart!!!😊

Please continue writing! You are my sanity these days whilst I am at home recuperating!

Maya Di

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ananya123

@ananya123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

I've read chapter 25 (all parts) so many times now, that I've lost count.

Trust me, I wanted to put in a super-long detailed comment. But believe me when I say this, according to me, words cannot do justice to this chapter. I'm so awestruck by this chapter right now that I can't get myself to write anything. So much in one single update - pain, passion, humor and above all LOVE.

So I'm sorry about not giving you detailed feedback but my reason is genuine.

This story has touched me in a totally unexpected way. You are SUCH a talented writer, you should write a book and get it published. 'Captivating' doesn't quite do your work justice.

I want you to know that I'm in no way a flatterer. I only praise where it's due. This story and your efforts completely deserve it!

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: ananya123
I've read chapter 25 (all parts) so many times now, that I've lost count.

Trust me, I wanted to put in a super-long detailed comment. But believe me when I say this, according to me, words cannot do justice to this chapter. I'm so awestruck by this chapter right now that I can't get myself to write anything. So much in one single update - pain, passion, humor and above all LOVE.

So I'm sorry about not giving you detailed feedback but my reason is genuine.

This story has touched me in a totally unexpected way. You are SUCH a talented writer, you should write a book and get it published. 'Captivating' doesn't quite do your work justice.

I want you to know that I'm in no way a flatterer. I only praise where it's due. This story and your efforts completely deserve it!

I don't know what to say. Your comment has made me speechless. I want to thank you so many times but i dont think that would be good enough. So i am just going to stay mum and re-read ur wonderful feedback and enjoy the moment! BIG SIGH!! Whoever you are - u just stole my heart all over again!! :)

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

awesome update...

thanks 4 d pm

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inluvwivARHI

@inluvwivARHI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Wow...im speechless!
It was simply beautiful
Thanx foh da pm nd cont soon

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

first of all really sorry for commenting late...

loved ur update...

arnav is so patience with her...love him for it...

and loved the way how she gets abgry when ever roshini name comes ...

the way they both played catch me game...cute...

my heart was beating faster when she said she will say him the truth...

what could be it...did she had a baby or something...i dont now...but waiting for it...last part was hot...

update asap...

once again iam sorry...tom i will read fate mate and comment...sorry for that too

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ananya123

@ananya123

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

I don't know why I keep stalking this thread every time I visit IF.
It's like I'm expecting an update to magically appear out of nowhere.
What's wrong with me?