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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"We'd doubted that it was Epidural hematoma injury which causes the bleeding between the dura mater and the skull, that's the reason we'd kept him under observation but I am glad to tell you the latest scan report confirmed that there is no major head injury, yes there is lots of bruises which cause of bleeding and swelling. He is still in coma and we can't say exactly when he'll get conscious."

Dr.Shah informed them about Mayank's condition and Rajeev and Shilpa took breath of relief, tears slipped from Nupur's eyes , "Thank GOD" words could barely slipped from her lips

"One more thing Mr.Rajeev,the way someone had hit Mayank its clear he wanted to take Mayank's life, 'its an attempt murder case'."

Nupur cocked her head towards him in shock, her feet got freeze at that place and she felt out o breath, "someone tries to kill Mayank" words dies in her mouth and her body shivered badly,Shilpa pressed her hand on her shoulder seeing Nupur's condition.

"Who wanted to harm Mayank to that extent" Rajeev mumbled in shock. "its serious matter Mr.Rajeev and I hope Police will get the clue soon, you've to be strong for him and for your family." Dr.Shah patted Rajeev's shoulder slightly "excuse me" he was about to move when Nupur's voice stopped him, "Doctor can I meet him??" she forced down the resentful lump that burned the back of her throat, she gulped it and finally words slipped from her lips almost in whispering tone, he whirled back, "Ermm, Mrs Mayank I am sorry but at this time we can't allow you to meet him, you can meet him when he get conscious"

" I just wanted to see him, I promise I'll not disturb him" Tears burning in her eyes desperate to came out of her eye lids. "I am Sorry Mrs. Mayank but I can't allow you, I can understand your condition and'"

"Please doctor just once, I want to meet him"

"Doctor Shah Please let Nupur meet Mayank"Rajeev voice came from the other side as he could not keep quite to see her condition and Dr.Shah took deep breath nodding his head."Okay you can meet him but please be careful"

"I'll be..Thank you" she spoke weakly and tears rolled down on her cheeks.

"your welcome" he smiled and turned back towards other side. Shilpa gave Nupur side hug squeezing a bit, "he'll be fine very soon"

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Her heart spasmed so hard she found it difficult to breathe. She holds the knob and gathering all her courage push the door slightly and it flung open. She stepped slowly towards his bed her heart had beaten as fast as a hummingbird's wings and something pricked in her heart so sharply that she found herself out of breath as she saw the blood on his swollen forehead though it was covered with a bandage but still she could see that, she sucked in her breath as she dragged her body near to bed, her arms raised and then slowly moved towards his face, she tenderly touched her fingers on his forehead.

"Mayank!!!"a whisper escaped from her lips as she bent down beside him, she called out his name but he didn't move. "Why don't you listen me? Why don't you open your eyes when you know I am calling you Mayank Sharma" her voice choked and she gazed at his face.

"You're so stubborn Mayank Sharma,so stubborn. You always do what you want. You don't think about others.i can still remember your words when you came into my room"

Mayank caressed her skin with his knuckle and Nupur tried to swat his hand away, "what do you want to me?" she turned her face towards him, "break this marriage"

"Why did you come in my life without my permission? Do you remember when you'd kissed me without my will..i know you can remember it. You are so stubborn Mayank you'd done what you wanted".

"I said I want you..i want you at any cost and I will make you mine 'get ready for our first night "placing his lips over her once again he kissed her

Tears shimmered in her eyes; she moved her hand and took his hand in her caressing her palm against his skin.

"You know, I tried hard to hate you but I couldn't. You won this time again and now you're again being stubborn not looking at me, why don't you open your eyes and look at me, I am waiting for your answer Mayank"

She caressed his cheek with her thumb but he didn't move, she waited for him to flicker his eyes once but he didn't..

"I know you're so stubborn Mayank Sharma I know you'll not open your eyes until I accept my defeat"

She cupped his face with one hand tenderly and gazed at his face for long moment..

"I confess Mayank Sharma I can't live without you" she looked at him with tears spilling from her eyes and laid her hand against his handsome cheek caressing lovingly, tenderly.

"Now please open your eyes, please Mayank"

She leaned down her head at his hand and the fluid of tears that she was holding inside her finally came out, she burst out in tears holding his hand..

His mind was getting conscious as a slow,broken,grief filled voice hit with his ear drums, he felt sharp unbearable pain in his skull as his mind tried to recognize that voice and then he felt someone caresses his skin, a warm, familiar touch had rushed the blood in his veins. His head was too heavy to react at that touch but his heart said he should open his eyes and slowly the voice was getting clear and now his mind could recognize that familiar voice, it was her. She was calling him, he could feel something wet on his hand may be it was her tears, his brain told him. His heart felt great urge to look at her face but his body was feeling helpless, too weak to react. He fought against his mind that was saying him to stay like this because he is too weak but his heart could not bear her broken voice anymore he tried'..again Tried and finally he flickered his eye lashes but then he felt unbearable sharp pain and he felt himself helpless.

"Mayank..Please come back..Open your eyes"

Her broken, grief-filled, pleading voice again and again hitting with his ear drums and he tried again and finally he got succeeded to open his eyes. He felt again that sharp, unbearable pain but this time he could not accept defeat'He saw a blurry, light, dimly image.

"Mayank!!!"she lifted her head up as she felt moment in his fingers and saw his eyes were finally opened.

He could recognize that blurry, dimly, curr image, she was Nupur..His Nupur and the movement of her lips told him she was calling his name.

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Precap..

"Shiv uncle,i know i'd made mistake to broke marriage but i want to repent my mistake,i want Nupur back in my life"

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here is next part..i really hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part...felt so bad at Nupur's condition and finally Mayank recovering...
continue soon
Edited by --Sanchu-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
beautiful n emotional update Maria...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
what an amazing update dear
i loved thhe way you pinned down Nupur's feeling with memory lane.
it was the first time when she poured out her heart what she wanted
and you have written it brilliantly
you are an amazing writer dear
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Brilliant update dear
Speechless
finally Nupur's expressed her feelings
cant wait for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
that was fabolous part
you have portrayed Nupur's emotions so beautifully that it brought tears in my eyes
i so so loved it
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Superb update Maria
you are amazing writer👏loved the way you are showing love blossom in their heart
it was beautiful and emotional update
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
very beautiful n emotional update
LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what an amazing update superb dear
you have written it exceptionally
loved the way you portrayed Nupur's emotions and Mayank helplessness to feel her pain
amazing
continue soon

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