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btw ppl dnt res its not for update...
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update will be directly posted mostly tomorrow dearies...

get ready to fall in SECOND LOVE!!!!!!!!!

i bet u will love this
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kal tak wait karne padega aj de dena plz😔
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deetha!!!!!!!! plsh jaldi update karo! 😆 😳
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chudail tune 3 din se latka ke rakha hua hai... *super angry*
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Originally posted by: ..tulip..

update will be directly posted mostly tomorrow dearies...


get ready to fall in SECOND LOVE!!!!!!!!!

i bet u will love this

Fall toh tab karenge na jab tu update karegi... :/ ... 3 din se ek he baat bol bol k tadpaing tu..bas... Aur kuch ni... Aaj b tune kya kha tha ki update kar degi... Haina... Tujhse badi dhokhebaaz to maine aaj tak ni dekhi... Huh... Hate u... :/ :@
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Kya hua... Tera vaada... Woh kasamm... Woh irrada... 😭 😡
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deetha ji app kab update karegi...
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banner kaisa hai guys??

she looked at him!!!!! he too looked at her!!
"hungry!!!!!"both laughed...

"par maine toh sabko bhej di "rey said pouting...

"aur hum bhi kuch bana nahi sakte..."sharon said pouting more...both looked at each other...
winked and both rushed for phone but rey got it...
"meri fav restaurant se aayega"rey said smirking...

what to say abt this girl!!! he would forget his world and worries when he is with her ...HIS BESTIE!!

"kkk ,...huh!!!!!!"sharon replied with fake anger...

rey was abt to dial when the doorbell rang...sharon went to open as rey looked confused who will come to his house at noon...

as soon as sharon opened vicky along with the gang waved to her with a stupid grin..rey was taken by surprise...

"guys??????"sharey asked together...

"not again!!! i m leaving"vicky said irritated dramatically...il pulled him back ...

"what???"sharey asked together again...

"dobara ek saath baat kiya toh mai chalajaunga...poori raste mei un donon ne aisa hi kiya...ab tum donon??"vicky said irritated..

"koun donon??"sharey asked again and bit their tongue when the gang glared at them and pointed backwards...

*at the car*

"swayam not fair vicky ne mujhe diya... "kriya argued running around..

"i dnt get vicky ko tujhse itna pyaar kyun aane laga..but u already ate 2 not any more "he said running back of her trying to pull the chocolate...

"kk...khalo ...i give up... mujhe help toh karo sb chelgaye"swayam said helplessly...

she smiled...

"ye pakdo na"swayam gave her a big cover containing food packets ... "ye bhi "he gave another one... she caught the chocolate by mouth and caught the both each in one hand... before she cn move swayam took the chocolate and said..

"ab chalo"by keeping the chocolate in his pocket and taking another cover ...

"ye cheating hai"she whinned

"i dnt care"he said paying least intrest to her words...

***

"guys ye sab??"rey asked when all came in...kriya was simply checking out her crush's house and smiling to herself like fool when tried hard not to look at her...

"arey humne socha saath mei lunch karlete hai"swayam said smiling..

"i wanted to see ur ok!! "he sid looking at rey "u too "at sharon when she smiled back...

all smiled and settled for eating ... as per planned all sat leaving behing the chair next to rey ...i.e btw reyam for kriya... kriya who came last washing her hands stood feared...

rey ke bagal mei??

for her its a big deal... sitting beside her crush!!

for him its hard to control himself from breaking down sitting beside his love!!

but with no option left they somehow managed to complete the lunch...rey trying hard not to let his emotions out...and kriya trying hard to feel consiuos and stopping her blush and that shiver of sitting beside ur crush!!

after lunch all were sitting on the couch ...kriya went in to have some water...when rey switched the channels and ended up with a music channel...but as soon as he switched to it it started playing

o re khuda!! ye tune kya kiya??
gham de diya!!! gham de diya!!!!

"ab har koi mere situation pe mazak uda raha hai!!"he said sarcastically with a chukle and stood up to go when he was abt to clash into her...

both started at each other for secs and looked away .. rey saw sharon when she pleaded with eyes saying

give it a chance rey...please...

rey sighed...she wants him to let his feelings take control over his actions...he just looked at kriya trying to find that love for him in her eyes when she slowly shyly looked at him...they started for a min when rey broke and asked hesitantly...

"u ...u okay??"he asked...she nodded looking down
"excuse me"he excused himself and dashed out...

kriya felt bad and thought that he doesnt like her so trying to ignore her...

her face fell down...but swayam came to rescue..

"kriya...chalo rest tym"he insisted and finally sharon took her to his room ...and left..

kriya was feeling that first teenage crush feeling ...she scanned the whole room before pulling the comforter and drifting into lala land...

she checked herself again in mirror!!!!!! she blushed to core..she was wearing a beautiful pink gown...her hair tied up in a bun...wearing the gloves matching to her dress she pulled out her purse ...wore her matching heels and headed down hearing the car horn...she expected that someone who gifted her the dress and sent a note saying to get ready and he will pick her up in the evening!!!!


she clutched her gown and ran down the stairs hoping to see was HE!

but no for her dissapointment a driver opened the car door...she immediately slid in...after sometym he stopped and opened the door and bowed in front of her his left indicating her to go front...

she smiled wide clutched her gown and ran down the road ...she gasped at the sight in front of her...the whole shore was covered with pink and red heart shapped balloons...she smiled wide and ran front through the balloons!!!! soon she came to a halt when she saw a big bunglow ..she smiled and ran in with excitement ...desperately searching for him...as she stood in middle of the living room she heard some sound...she followed it and went to the bedroom ...there in the balcony stood HE...facing his back to her towards the waterfall...she desperately wants to see him ...clutching her gown tight...already her body giving goosebumps...she walked front looking at his perfect body!!!!! she was amazed by the sight...she noticed his hair gelled up ... as she stood back of him he slowly turned...she gasped as seeing REY standing there in the best look a man could posses...his hair gelled up and pushed back showing his clean forehead making him look super sensuous and that black suit isn't an exception either!!!!
and the revealed chest as he left the two buttons open...she felt a shiver run down her spins as he looked at her intensely...
she was abt to move back but he pulled her by waist and both fell back...both were lost in each others eyes when they finally ended on a cloudy white bed!!!! he rolled and got upon her said I LOVE U and took her lips into his giving her the utmost level of pleasure...after few secs he pulled back and their eyes locked...he drank her faminine glory and was abt to reach her zipper...kriya got tensed as his hand went to the zipper...

she felt a tight grip on her hand as she tried to push him...

"rey!!!"she said breathing hard with a flushed face...

"rey???"swayam raised his eyebrows getting the fact she is dreaming abt rey !!! the teasing look twinking in hie eyes and that naughty smile...
"huh??? kuc...kuch nahi!!!"as soon as she realised she was day dreaming abt rey and reality struck that swayam was gripping her hand trying to wake her up...she said trying hard to hide her blush!!!!!!

"ooo... toh koi romantic sapna tha??"swayam teased..

"sapna??? k..koun si sapna??"she tried being herself but failed and soon her cheeks turned to her blood colour...

"sach sach bata warna sabko"he was cut
"nai!!!!"she cut him shocked

"hmm toh batao...kya sapna tha "he teased her nudging her shoulder...she pouted and blushed not able to say him her dream ...he laughed and said...

"bohut sogayi ab chal ...masti ki tym"he said pulling her down...when she was shouting to stop and go slow...

swayam finally stopped in front of rey...both rey and kriya looked confused at swayam who soon was joined by gang...

"swayam! tu.. *cough* tum mujhe yaha kyun laaye ho???"she asked feeling conscious in his presence...
"wo ...wo"swayam fumbled when sharon quickly said

"rey tumhe garden dikhayega!!"sharon spitted out

"what??" both said one with nervousness and one with fear of breaking down...

"kyun rey?? tum kriya ko garden nahi dikhayega??"vicky asked...

"haa.haa nahi dikhayega?? nahi dikayega??"soon the whole gang started their blabbering when rey said frustration

"haa///...dikhaunga...b chup hojao sab"he shouted...

cant these ppl understand he dnt want to be around her...she hates him...and he cant bear that..

all grinned like fools when kriya glared at rey...

yeh hai teri masti?? u know what i hate u swayam... i mean rey ke saath ??? mai kuch silly kaam na kar baitun...sab teri wajah se... mai rey ke saath kaise i feel soo nervous!!!!!!! swayam i will kill u akele mei mil mujhe batati hun...

swayam slightly gulped as he knows what is going in her mind but gave his stupid smile

"ch...chale??"rey said hesitantly...
kriya nodded shyly looking down when rey thought she doesnt even want to look at him...

they were walking silently with two hand distance between them ...the gang was following them like eagerly waiting to hear their conversation...rey glared at them in between when kriya gave a nervous look

After 5 mins Vicky started bugging swayam…

"wo donon baat kyun nahi kar rahe???"Vicky asked scratching swayam!!

"use kaise pata hoga???"Sharon asked

"arey wo toh kria ki be.st ….f..r..ii..e..n..d haina??"nil dragged the word best friend

Swayam thought yeh log kabhi nahi sudrenge…

"shut up guys kuch bhi???"swayam scowled….

All were silent and went behind kriyaansh…

After a long tym rey thought of breaking the silence he was abt to call her when he noticed the whole gang leaning and trying to hear them *u ppl can imagine ri8 ki gang kaise behve kar rahi hogi ek doosre pe girke sun ne ki koshish*

Rey asked "what"by raising eyebrows

All nodded a innocent no and looked away while kria was looking here and there trying hard to stop her blush and nervousness,…..

"aise hi raha toh poora din beeth jayega"neha said …

"hmm kuch toh karna padega guys "vish added

"idea"Sharon said with a twinkle in her eyes and whispered something to them…all agreed and started executing their plan..

"babu kiska msg hai??"neha acted…

"kiska??? Kisika nahi toh…..kisika nahi"Vicky too joined..

"babu cell dikhao"she said chasing him when he started running and intentionally Vicky pushed kriya onto rey who inturn caught her but due to the sudden force both fell down rolled down the grass and ended up with rey half upon her…. *like new year wala *

As soon as usual continued their LLHH

Aaj bhi utni hi innocent dikhti ho mujhe baatcutter jaise uss din thi…

He remembered the new year day's roll…he was abt to smile when it struck ….she may remember it too…but it was too late as she already frowned as the past things started playing in her mind…..he quickly got up made her sit and tapped her cheeks calling her name when she clutched his shirt tight and the other clutched her hair..

Soon the gang rushed to them when rey lifted her and took her to his room and placed her on bed while she started crying out of pain ……

"rey…plzz..kuch karo I cant ….i can't take this…ahhh!!"she ws going on blaberring his name and crying hard as her head pained as she saw some faint scenes playing in her head…

"tablets!"rey shouted …

"sorry wo Sharon ke ghar mei reh gaye !!"swayam answered tensed..

"WHAT??? Are u mad swayam I mean itna bhi dhyaan nahi rakh sakta??" rey couldn't help it… he was too tensed to check what he was speaking..

"tum log itne careless kaise ho sakte ho ….. "rey shouted again trying to calm her s she ws pulling her hairs out of pain…

"mai abhi laata hun…."swayam said as he already started blaming himself and tears formed…

"nahi tu yahi rukh she needs u … mai laat hun "rey said…

Yes she needs swayam coz she always prefers swayam over me

"par"swayam was cut

"baat karne ki tym nahi koi jao"Sharon said frustrated…

Rey rushed out…

Swayam took her in his lap and started soothing her by sweet nothings…

"rey!!!! I m sorry rey….aap ki jagah meri zindagi mei aur koi nahi le sakta.."she said as she slowly started drifting to sleep….

"koi nahi……le…..koi…."she kept on blaberring till she totally slid into deep sleep …

"dekha Sharonye phir se wahi bol rahi hai…. maine bola na kuch hua hai…. Isne kuch kiya"swayam said tensed again…

"not again swayam tumhe ho kya jaata hai har baar…..and dnt u dare kuch bolne ki coz now I can afford loosing her okay??? Ab chalo yaha se.ye so gayi …..i think tumhe yaha rehna nahi chhiye"Sharon said seriously and pulled him by hand….

But swayam froze at the door….

"swayam I said cha….."Sharon too froze as she turned back to call swayam as he stopped …

"REY???"she said slowly in shock see him who stood shocked to core outside the door….after few minutes he looked up and walked down to the living room…

Everyone silently followed and sat on the couches as rey sat on a chair….

"wo kya kehrahi thi guys??"rey finally spoke out!!

"wahi jo tumne suna hoga if im not wrong "swayam said looking away

"tu aisa kyun bol raha tha ki wo phir se bol rahi hai?? Pehle kb bola???"rey asked still looking down ….

"aaj subah jab tu nikal gaya tha waha se…"Sharon replied looking at him…

"she does have feelings for u ….and if im not wrong wo pyaar hai"swayam said trying to convince rey….he wanted their love to start again … he wanted to see the same love between his two friends which he used to adore a lot…

"nahi .,.wo mujhse pyaar nahi karti…..mai kabhi believe nahi karoonga"rey said as a tear rolled down…

"kyun rey??? I dnt know tumhe kaise manaun..but mai try to karna chahta hun…. Agar wo tumse pyaar nahi karti toh wo apni naam tab bhoolne ke baad bhi tumhareliye feel kyun rahi hogi???"swayam asked …

"what??"rey asked surprised

"haa usne mujhe bola ki she has feelings for u ….like "crush "type but im sure its love…."swayam ended his words..there's nothing more he can tell….he cant think of anything more to convince rey now..

All looked at rey but he was silent..expressionless.no reaction….they called him twice or thrice but NO…..no reaction at all!!!

All were now getting tensed for him…

But he was still sitting frSMIozen.looking down ….

Suddenly Sharon noticed a change…

"tu has kyun raha hai "she called rey confused…

All looked at him …..swayam understood what's cooking in his mind…..he is happy but…..tensed too…

he got that naughty smile of rey…

"rey!!!! Dnt tell me ki/…."swayam traailed of as rey looked up smirking and said

"Mission Kria Raiprakash!!!"he said giving his oh-so-sexy smile…

"rey no…u cant stress her mind….doctor ne bola ri8??"swayam tried to convince…

"doctor ne bola ki wo past ko yaad karke apni mind ko stress nahi kar sakti …….wo apni felings se confuse hoke apni mind ko stress toh kar hi sakti hai "rey said smirking …..

"then tu use patayega??"Sharon chirped…

Rey nodded …

"par rey"swayam was cut..

"tu agar mera saath dena chaht hai toh de warna save ur friend from me "rey said

"ye galat baat hai….i want her to fall in love with u but tera ye route galat hai….i wont agree .mai naahi support kar sakta hun aur na against jaa sakta hun ab"swayam whinned

"toh mere saath dedona pleash!!"Sharon fluttered her eyes..she knew it would work and as expected swayam said ok lost in her…

All giggled as swayam realised what he did and pouted…..

Rey jumped out of chair with excitement and with hands on hips he looked up

"so Miss. Kria Ghai…"he was cut

"Raiprakash!"Sharon whinned pouting….

Rey smiled and sid"okay kria raiprakash??"he nodded asking okay to Sharon when in return she smiled wide

"here I come!!!"he said with a evil smirk looking up ….

After few secs he looked at all smiling but one thing is odd…rinni was looking at him and upstairs frequently he sighnalled "what ??"to rinni

" jao na wo wait kar rahi hogi "rinni said

"kya??"rey asked confused……

"tumne hi toh bola ki kria raiprakash here I come….wo wait kar rahi hogi jao"rinni said innocently….

All looked at each other and burst out laughing,……..

Rey looked up laughing hard and wiping his tear and thought

"The game starts now baatcutter……" he smirked!!!!!!

Okay someone asked to kickstart the story…

So here u go hero ne toh start kardi bike heroine ko aake peeche baitna baaki hai….ab usme kitna tym lagega I cant say!!!

Hehe hope u liked the part!!!!!!

Enjoy

Like and comment please

Love ya

-deetha😳

Edited by ..tulip.. - 12 years ago
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resss

unress...


OMGGG... the bg musiccc... mummaaa...
mera saara gussa chala gaya sunke...widin a fraction of sec...😭
meko iska download link de na... pleashhh... 😭 😭

nywaz... now getting back to your update...

well...it was definatly not wat i expected it to be...

der walk... uske bad kria having severe headache...uske baad wat she said to swayam.. morovr... Rey heard it... OMG... 😲

and uske baad jo hua...

Rey having a smirk on his face anddd... hailaaa... kya hoga is ladke ka...

Mission Kria Raiprakash... Phirse... he bhagwann... wohowww...

bechara swayam...i pity him... hahahaha... 😆

ab to asli maza aana shuru hoga... yyaaayyy...

waiting for the nxt update... 😃

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago

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