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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I think its time for that post that every author dreads to write.

So... "You people better COMMENT"

Even if all you had to say was, "Duh! that was cheesy..."

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

This update is as beautiful as the of night sky diti is veiwing right now with her best buddy.

And noodles!!!

I am lovin it.

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

I just love noodles... yummy..

I too love my noodles with a bit of spice,I prefer adding schezwan sauce to it...(just a bit out of topic..😊)

Loved the "tomato-knife" adventure... kiss or not a kiss, finally he brought her out of the slight awkwardness that had set in

He surely will now start seeing the worth of things that are around him...

Looking forward to the further list of your updates...

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UNICORN75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

"That's because you are blind as a bat to what you have around you...", 😉 "Not anymore..." he said, putting a smile on her lips Something is cooking here along withe the noodles😊😊

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: UNICORN75
Something is cooking here along withe the noodles😊😊

😆 We would think so...

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Onir

I too love my noodles with a bit of spice,I prefer adding schezwan sauce to it...(just a bit out of topic..😊)

He surely will now start seeing the worth of things that are around him...

I will try your suggestion of schezwan sauce.

Oh! you think he would pay attention now?

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Sari piC

(I couldn't get Aditi's pic in the sari. Of course, ignore all the jewels the sari model is wearing)

"I have to say, you remind me of Shanta bai who used to help out at home when I was a kid...but you do look prettier than she was..."

"Awh..." Her mouth rounded, her eyes narrowed with a customary scowl that he always seemed to demand a bit too often these days, "This is traditional marathi attire for household functions. You better get used to it...and not be reminded of Shanta bai any more than necessary..."

"And what kind of Kurta is this? Brings to my memory the gaudy digital prints that mom used to stitch up as curtains for the windows..."

He rolled his eyes at her.

She darted her eyes up and down his form and said, "Go, change..." Turning him around, she pushed him in the direction of his closet.

As he stood by his cupboard and racked through his other kurta sets, the real memories, his bad choice in traditional wear had evoked, came back to her mind: it was about Aditya; her first crush; her neighbor from her school days and many years elder too. Aditya, had moved out of Mumbai after he'd married a Delhi dame and they'd never remained in touch with him after that. However, the hours she'd secretly dreamt of wedded bliss with him, as they scream at each other in marathi and went about their day as another normal couple would, had remained with her over the years.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Author's note:

I have removed everyone from my buddy list and only because, I have intended to keep up with regular PMs going forward, but don't wish to go about reaching out to those who are no longer interested in my works. Please add me only if you agree to the following ;)

You don't mind receiving PMs for any of my FFs. It is very difficult to maintain a PM list and sort through long buddy lists to send selective PMs.
You comment regularly on my thread. Seriously, its just not worth your or my time, if otherwise.

Thanks for you understanding.

-H

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago