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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
wow so fabulous update
arnav can feel khushi near him and talking to him
so nice and amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Firstly sorry for.not.commenting on d last part because i just got chance to read dem. Both parts were very emotional :-( why did u kill khusi? I was literally crying (i know sounds silly ) so m i right in.saying that Arnav is talking to khusi's soul? Is she lyk teaching him how to look after the baby? I have a feeling that d baby is gonna look exactly like khusi when she grows older :-) eagerly waiting for the next part x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

hello darlings..i cant thank u guyz enough for ur lovely comments...🤗

thnk u al sooo muucchhh...


CHAP 4

"Di...y are we here again??"

"chotte...I thought of having our annual check up...dtz all" she smiled

arnav has been a restless...since they ve left his daughter at home wid payal...he kept darting here n there..as if searching for someone..

he dint realize dat dey usually ve d check up done at home...he ws too lost to notice anything else...

anjali had to use all of her strength not to breakdown infornt of him n tell him dt his wife is nt der anymore...

but dr raj had advised against it..he wanted to study arnav n only den he can reach to a decision n start wid d treatment...

dr raj ve known d raizada family pretty well...he was aware of al d troubles n losses of dis family...wat dey ve gone through over d past few years...

when anjali had called him up d other day n discussed her brotherz condition he ws shocked...he ve never seen a strong willed n practical man like arnav before...n now...what can love make u do...in dis case..wat can itz loss make u do...

Dr raj had treated anjali...n helped her come out of her depression...n made her feel positive bou her pregnancy..

When she saw arnavz condition...dr raj was d 1st person she called up for help'.

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"hello arnav" dr raj greeted him "how r u feeling today?"

"hi..umm...raj right??"

"yes datz right"

n den it occurred to arnav dt anjali used to visit raj for her sessions "di r u ok?"

raj signaled her to remain silent...

"yes...she is fine bt I insisted on having a visit..." he saw arnavz eyes drifting away...staring into space...bt immediately turned to his right...n again on d left'

raj observed him silently n carefully...not to make him suspicious...it ws gud for him to thnk dat he ws nt d patient here'

raj was now convinced n gave a slight nod to anjali...she sniffed... "di kya hua?" n placed his arm arnd her...

"raj is something wrong?"

he simply smiled n nodded a no'

raj had thought of examining him at his clinic bt now it dint look like a good idea...

he dint know how deep arnav mind ws effected...n when confronted ll he accept it or deny it...

to conclude on both the conditions he had to b very careful..some patients take it positively n some live in denial...n loose their minds forever'

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"der is stil a ray of hope anjali...I wont lie to u...but we might loose him forever in d process.."

Anjali nodded

Raj n anjali were sitting in a restaurant

"I ll ve to observe him closely for few days..bt not at my clinic dat ll lead to alot of questioning n v wont be able to answer any of them...

"hmmm"

"I still ve to know if he is only hearing or'"

"he is seeing khushiji"

"u r sure?"

"yes"

he dint say anything further...lost in deep thoughts...when she asked... "is dat bad?"

"any form of hallucination is anjali"

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"u think der is something going on between them??" she asked arnav...he looked away from raj n anjali n stared down at khushi...she was sitting down on d floor playing with their daughter who ws lying in his laps...

"wat?dnt look at me like dat" she said before he cud reply "do u ve any explanation as to y he drops into our house every other day??i m nt complaining ...I m happy for di...js preparing u...u knw..."

arnav asked her to shut up'

raj observed each n every tiny detail of scene playing infront of him'.

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"remember anjali I told u der were mostly two conditions..either they deny it or accept it...

here arnav ve accepted dat his wife is gone...bt again..he is not letting her go out of his mind..dat way he is keeping her alive

n surprisingly dat has helped him come out of this

datz a good sign anjali"

"so wat ve u decided...how r u planning to treat him?" she asked

"look at him..." Anrav ws tickling d baby n her giggles filled d entire house' "u realy thnk he needs a treatment?"

"he knows it anjali...he knows it very well..bt stil...he wants her around...to hlp him...to bring up their child...n who knows may b somedsay he ll let her go..n start living on his own..."

"wat if he does not raj?wat if...wat if he goes mad..." losing her patience..

"anjali I m telling u al dis after observing him for a good whole month'.

He is nt gona go mad...he ve already started going to d office has nt he?

He is behaving normally...n all dis ve been possible only cuz of u knw who..."

THE END

hmmm...

how was it??

hope u al njyd...

do leave ur commnts if u want pmz...

bye


Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Neel great update, I actually saw a movie based on this update...your OS is getting interesting like a psychological thriller...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
this part is touching 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Interesting update!!
Continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Wow - maybe Khushi is helping him from the grave? I believe ghosts are all around us! Khushi could be one ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...

thnx for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

intersting😃

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
interesting cuming in da story...continue it..

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