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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
That was really cute,...
Sensual,...but i wont say guttery...nicely written...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Awesome!!! Plz continue and pm me!!! I luved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Awsum today more gutter plz lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
BAM that was hot!
I must insist, continue soon, even though our gutter-minds have worked over eternity *winks*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U left ppl high n dry...u do realise!!! Don't u??? Beautiful oS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
that was fun!
want more!!

the scenes that you portray are amazingly detailed and very well thought out.👏..
yet the language seems to be a problem for you..
get someone to proofread before you post..
i love your ideas..and the story was really hot!

will you please write more?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
loved it, awesome, you can surely write more, storyline supports
please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
WHAT,. NO GUTTER YAAR.. awww

haha. good one though ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Can't say abt gutter but the way u wrote is a delight to read dhak dhak...plz continue

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