|OS|Their Rain Encounter 2(based on Spoiler+promo) - Page 4

so well written, it was fab, an applaud for u for that 👏 loved the way emotions of both of them were described, just awesome

wow that was amazing

i lyked it...i ws angry initially 4 d story going dat way...but luved d ending..yes khushi din't forgive him...😃😃

PART 1 & 2 , F.A.B.U.L.O.U.S .

hmmm i didnt like the ending though & on the whole nice OS

SUPERB!!!!!!

But...

Now you have to continue writing this!
Its very interesting.

Plz
Plz
Plz
Plz

Continue this.

If he does ALL of that in the show that is goes through with it - the complete act, I will get inside the TV and kick him swiftly where it hurts a lot.

omg i love this...

and yeah i don't want her to forgive him just lik that.
he messed up with her a million times..
the serial itself shud give us a proper redemption track...

and for u sweety...
such an amazing piece of work..
i loved the way u portrayed her feelings...
the way she tried to build a wall of resistance...and how it broke into pieces proving the fact that shes a mere mortal...⭐️⭐️
i adored the whole update..
can u write a 3rd part please???

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and this one's for u 🤗🤗

wow...superb update...loved it. so much...waiting eagerly 4 next part...thanx 4 pm...🤗

Nicely written.. He made matters worse...