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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
aashi not again yar, i hope its not aashi update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
The 32nd chapter was unbeatable dear...matchless...
I would really wanna appreciate you for showing something apart from romance,love and all...you know some kinda school feeling came into me wen i read that athletics part...the sportsman-spirit...then the cringing pain of being the 2nd winner...the friends pacifying...it was all so real...actually connected...hats off for pulling a realistic scene so well...applauses for you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Coming to chapter 33...now m back in mform with my detailed comments to bore you...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kria went downstairs and saw her Mom going to answer the phone but then she shouted. "Mom, it's for me. Sharon said she'll call." Kria said. "Oh okay." Kria's Mom said, and went back into the kitchen, smiling. Kria took the receiver in her hand. Kria answered. "Hello." The voice on the other side replied back with a "hello" but not in a very happy tone and the voice called Kria by her nick name Krisi. People hardly called her by that name now. People now either called her Kri or just Kria. People stopped calling her Krisi from 8th grade. Kria first smiled on hearing her old nick name because she loved it that much but Hearing the voice, Kria realized it wasn't Sharon. "Why did you call now?" Kria asked, her smile vanishing. The voice replied something to which Kria got very angry. "What do you want? Why do you want to torture me like this?" Kria said, not being her usual self. "Kriaa!!LISTEN!" the voice shouted, making Kria stop. "I don't want to listen to you. Do you wanna ruin my life? Oh, no wait. You already did that, didn't you? Why did you even call? If you hate me so much then why did you '?" Kria started but the voice cut her off. "I don't even know why I called. It's of no use." "That's exactly what I said. Why are you wasting both my time and yours? Just hang up already. And if you want to talk, why can't you face me?" Kria asked, now very angry and she was being very rude. She was never that girl to get very rude with anyone but sometimes people get on her nerves that she has to change her character. She can't always be the sweet Kria. Then people would want to take advantage.







What was that...Firstly the name Krisi...thats cute...adorable...But who is the one on the line...Kria seriously was never the one to get into tiffs on just hearing a voice...Why did she lose her composure/...and whats with the line-if u hate me so much then why did u...
Yeah...goin gout of character and out of form is needed...some idiots just dont understand any other language as seems here the case with the person on line...
But still...am blanked and zoned out,,itna gussa...some kind of haunting past or what...šŸ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago
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When she was young, she never knew to say "No!" but now she knew when and where to say no, even to her best friend. Hearing that voice saying stuff, she wanted to keep saying "NO." Soon the both of them started fighting on phone. The fight went on for a long time and they used swear words against each other not bothering that her mom was listening to her swearing. Kria's mom was hell shocked. Kria never used swear words. She always knew how to control herself even when the situation was at its worst. It had to be something big otherwise Kria would never swear at people. And didn't she tell that Sharon was the one calling her. Kria and Sharon are inseparable. They would never in their lives swear at each other. Kria's mom was getting more and more puzzled as the fight went on. "Why is she shouting at Sharon like this?" was all Kria's mom could think. "I have to talk to Sharon later." Kria's mom said to herself. Just then someone knocked on the door. It was Kria's dad. Kria was still on the phone. She had stopped swearing but she was still screaming at the caller. Kria's mom didn't want Kria's dad to listen to anyone because Kria's dad didn't like anyone screaming on the phone and that too in the house number.


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Swear words...temme u r kidding...kria using swear words...thats the least and last i could think of...but still an effective way to show the real anger built out in kria...m sure thats not sharon...



ouch...kria's dad came...umm...i guess trouble...hope she doesn't get a punishment for this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤢Soon after sometime, Kria hung up the phone. She didn't know why she said all those things. She definitely didn't mean to. And what would her mother and father be thinking? Her dad would kill her because he didn't like anyone screaming. She got up from the couch and tiptoed to the stairs but her parents heard her. "Kria? What happened honey? Why were you crying and screaming?" Kria's mom asked. "Daddd, I'm so sorry. But I don't know what came over me. I couldn't control myself. Please don't be angry at me. Please please!" Kria said, tears forming again. "Kria, my daughter, I am not going to ask you anything else other than who you were talking to?" Kria's dad asked. Kria didn't want to answer the question because if she did, then her mom and dad would get mad at her. "I was talking to'to'to'to'" Kria started, wondering what to say, but the wonderful oven saved her. "OMG!! The biscuits will get burnt!" Kria's mom screamed and ran to see the condition of the biscuits. Kria's dad also followed her. "Phew!" Kria thought, and went up to her room. But she didn't feel like being in the house. So she went to the place where she went when she was upset, happy and everything. Yes, the BEACH. The beach had been with her through all times, starting from when her parents had left her. The beach was like her best friend and she felt that the beach was the only place where she shout out all her feelings. So she took her car keys, and went to the beach. She found tears running down her cheeks. She didn't want to cry. She tried to control herself but she couldn't. She got out of the car and sat on the sand and cried her heart out.


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I dont like Kria crying...next time be aware...and to top that she has parents to handle...


but why she dint want to tell them...who is the dark secret caller whom she wants to handle herself...and why would they be mad at her...i guess this has certainly to do something with kria's past..bet my life upon that...and that too a mjor one...a grave past...

why is she crying...🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kria's parents noticed that Kria was not at home. Kria's mom thought of calling Sharon up and asking about why Kria was screaming at her. She dialed Sharon's number. Sharon answered in the first ring. "Kria, girl! I kept calling you and it kept coming busy." Sharon said. "Sharon, hi, it's me Kria's mom." Kria's mom said. "Oh, sorry aunty. Hi." Sharon said. "You said you tried calling. When did you talk to Kria last?" Kria's mom asked. "2 hours ago. The battery in her phone was dead so I said I'll call on the landline but when I tried, it kept coming busy." Sharon said. "Okay, She was screaming at someone on the phone for an hour and a half. Just ask her and tell me who it was. She'll definitely tell you. She's not at home now. She didn't tell where she was going. I think she's coming over to your house." Kria's mom said. "Really? Okay, then!" Sharon said. "Give me a call when she gets there. Bye. " Kria's mom said. "Okay. Bye." Sharon said, and hung up. She waited for Kria to come, but then she didn't come. She thought Kria had gone to Rey's house so she called Rey up. "Hello Shar!" Rey answered. "Hey, Is Kria there?" Sharon asked. "No. Why?" Rey asked. "She's not at her house and she didn't say where she was going. Did you talk to her?" Sharon asked. "Actually'" Rey said, getting worried. "Don't say anything. I'll call Sway and ask him whether Kria's there.If she's not there then we'll have to search for her." Sharon said. "Do that. Bye." Rey said, hung up the phone and tried Kria's number again but it kept coming switched off. Meanwhile, Sharon called Swayam and Kria wasn't at his place too. If she wasn't at anyone's place then she would definitely be there at the beach. Because that's where she went when she was upset. Swayam picked up Sharon and then they went to Rey's house and went to the beach to find Kria there, sitting on the sand. During their drive Sharon asked Rey if he had called Kria on the landline and if she was shouting at him. Rey was puzzled and said that he tried calling Kria but it kept coming switched off. She asked Swayam the same thing but he asked about why he and Kria would fight? "Then who was she screaming at?" Sharon wondered.



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this dark secret now engulfs all of them...since they are all close to her...i wish they cud console her and ease her off...dont know what has gotten into her and affected her to the extremes...😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The three of them walked up to her. "Kria?" Sharon called. Kria turned back and looked up at them, but then turned back to face the sea again. Her eyes were red and swollen and she didn't know what to do. Should she tell her three best friends or should she just keep it from them. Keeping it from them would be the best thing. "Why are you guys here? Please leave." Kria said, having no idea why she said that. "Kria, why are you crying? Please stop. I can't see you cry like this." Rey said, sitting down beside her and hugging her. When Rey said that, Kria hugged Rey tight and cried harder. "Kria, it's okay. Whatever it is, we'll sort it out okay? Please stop crying. Please, for me." Rey said, patting her back to make her feel better. But it was of no use. Kria kept crying. The three of them tried consoling her. Deep down, the three of them knew that Kria was hurt. Very hurt. They wanted to know why? Sharon was the one to ask. "Kria, you're mom said you were shouting at someone. Who was it?" Kria looked up at her. "uh'n.n..no..on..onee'." Kria stammered but Sharon was determined to make Kria tell. "Kria, come on. We're here to help you. We're your best friends right? We can't see you hurt like this. Please tell us." Sharon said. After a lot of pleading from the three of them, Kria finally told. "Who were you screaming at Kria?" Rey asked. "My sister." Kria said. Sharon, Swayam and Rey looked at each other.



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Best part of the whole update...hurt,anger,friendhsip,love,trust...everything in a small bundle of words...

rey hugging and comforting her and kria loosening up her tears b4 him was commendable...
sharon-the one with the go-getter attitude...ready to make kria tell everything come what may...wow...

THE FINAL BLOW...my sister...and then shareyam asking .ashi...
nope...this cant be aashi...becoz now they shared a beautiful bond b4 that rey fiasco and that was not so big to be brooded upon.and they had made it to each other...it cant be aashi...

m sure its kria's real sister ...and i guess now there would be a curtain raiser as to why kria's parents left her...just a thought...awesome part...splendid...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yet again...no precap...

u r a devil

u wanna torture us na...


de diya ek freaking amazing update and uske bad kuch nahi...


thats simply not fair...


*pout*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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by the way..did i tell u ever that u had a subtlety in ur writing...a kind of breathing space...a calming continuity that makes it an all the more beautiful youth story...i have been observing this from the chapter wen rey-aashi-kria triangle started and that was certainly applausible...

a composed story...even in the last update here...a shocking revelation came in a smoother way...just the way it had to be...keep up with that...dont know why but felt like sayong this too you...

anyways m back with my angry mode that u dint give a precap...update soon now...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜ˆ

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