OS: Thoda Dard Hoga!

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Awww..it was lovely😳

Very sweet os.

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

omggg!!!!! loved ittt!!!!!😊

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Naughty Smita!!!!
U really had my imagination going on an overdrive with ur title and i started imagining something like that VM created by Zoha!!!

Beautifully written (as always) and it is now not too hard to imagine his naughty smirk with the last two episodes that we watched.

Do write something on how he makes her stay or come back plz.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

awesome OS loved ittt...

the way he is tlaking to her was awesomeee...

and he is hiding laugh while seeing reactions on her facee🤣...

khush is such inocent soul🤣

bicharii khush😆😆

last dilouge was superbb😆😆

thnx for pm😆

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Sumi

@mumz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

You have woven such magic out of just a single scene...superb!

I'm lovin' it!

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

oh wow the beauty of romance...nice...

He raised his right hand, and cupped her right cheek. Her eyes fluttered shut and her breath left her in a rush, her face automatically turning towards his hand to enjoy his touch to the fullest as though she were a sunflower and he the only sun in her sky.

that was an awesome description...she always seem to do that,doesnt she?...