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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

a lovely os smita..!!

the anger part made me smile..

too good..

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Shaz

@Barunkidewani

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Woow smita...👏👏

you write the besttt..OS's..⭐️.loved it !!😳

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

This fic left me feeling all warm and tingly inside [And I bet you didn't need to know that😆]

I loved it. Khushi will always be a self-sacrificial lanb. Arnavji needs to stand up for her because she will never stand up for herself.

I loved his teasing at the end

Beautiful OS Smita. I loved it!

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice smita! 'thoda dard hoga' has been used in so many IF conversations yet it's effect never diminishes ...☺️ love your writing you know that!🤗

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s s nair

@..SSNAIR..

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awesome one dear... loved it...

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

As usual you write the best OS/SS around Smita ... they are a delight to read 😊

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Smita, awww this was perfect, hoping to seeing this in the show...you write soo beautifully..

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spurthi

@spoorthi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

simply awesome os
loved the way u have written
great job smitha
thanks 4 the pm

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Crazy44um

@Crazy44um

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Loved it..thanks for the PM.

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Awesome..Loved it
Thanks for the pm..

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