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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

even though the beginnin is like jab we met, i can sense that we're abt to get a vry different n splendid story hereafter. can't wait to see how khushi will melt arnav's heart. pls update soon n send me a pm.

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

LOVED it!!! And I love Jab we met so I can't wait to read more!!!

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

loved it

absolutely fab

cont. soon😊

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

you've got me hooked 😉- can't wait for story to unfold.

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Shivana

@SNR7

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼! Do continue - wud like to know very much wat u have planned for the actual storyline...interesting...

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pyrarkh

@pyrarkh

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

gud strt...khushi's character is like of a jhakkas type gurl..ii mean spontaneous..and the last few lines of the character sketch..make me even more impatient towards this ff..😆😊

rohan ws so friendly tht ws a reallly nice scene..tht hw he senses the discomfort of khushi and kept quiet fr the entire time...i think he is related to arnav..may be his best friend like brother...will be waiting fr his next scene...

and gosh when khushi kick ttht guy with her chappal i ws like so happpy..and tht line ws great 2..did u love the touch of my slippers also..and while she ws sleeping in tht train ..there also she ws great...i just love her dialogues there.

and the way khushi analyze arnav tht he luks nice although a little grumpy(tht ws funnny btw)..ws reallly gud...and its feeel so gud to know tht they will be each other strength..and thn wht abt weekness..acc to me nthing cn beat the fact when ur weekness and strength is frm the very same person..

and they both hv sum prblms in the past..khushi didn't believe in relationship...so i guess she must have ditched by her closest friends or family..like u said..im waiting to knw what happpen with her family..

and ya i forgot to mention the first few lines were amazing as always...i read them like so many times..😛and waiting fr there story to strt in a different way...

continue soon..

thnx fr the pm...