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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Abeer...sweetheart...1st of all,take a bow...you've full command onur storyline n d characters...all d twists n turns made us glued 2 ur fiction...i really really appreciate ur endeavour 2 entertain d readers like me who always tend 2 grab ur throat,2 throw c**pp*l* n ta**t**s at u😕


hahaha its oki i dnt mind the chappals n tamatars as they tell me how much u all love me (remember im a closet sadist 😉) lol well bcz when u get angry at me then i know that i have made u attached to me ss that is why u are angry at me when i bring in a twist n stuff soo...n im glad u r liking it i hope i make u all happy with my ending too...although am thinking will make a few more changes before i end it...so hmm will see
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

3 updates!!!!!!!!

amazing dear !!!!!
loved every bit


hehe well as happy as u all r with the 3 updates u should these are the only ones u will get this weekned from me 😛

im glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa

gud tat kushi tld d whole ting to d police wid arnav...

he really needed to knw wat happnd 4rm d beginin to knw hw much damage he did to her...
am glad tat kushi went to laxmi nagar than shantivan...
a mother s always d best person who takes care of her children
she does need smetym alone...
3 updates?? imean it was unexpected...
tanx a lot 4 d updates a 4 d pm🤗
anjali deserved d treatment wich shes gettin nw...hes really hurt...
wats gonna happn nxt...
awsum n emotional updates
continue soon


yup like u said aranv needs to know everything thing that he has done n he doesn't well not in the show for he still doesn't know everything from the beginning...so yeah i was like cuz im making him redeem in my ss here so will get him to know everything...

n yeah no touch like a mothers to heal one so laxmi-nagar it was...n yeah they need the separation as much as khushi doesn't like it is for her best in order to make arnav realise her importance in his life n fight for her, for all the right reasons n not the wrong ones as he often does...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smdosi

Awww that was really nice...thanks for the pm..


thank you im glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ah finally after all that mashaqat I read the chapters...phew🤢And now I'll begin my analysis😆

Chap 15:That was a bang on.😎 The emotional turmoil that was evident in there had me reading it again and again.And I loved that you caught hold of the mental disturbance that Khushi was going through that added a sense of reality. And Arnav losing all his control(well there is nothing new in that) for his Khushi and the tussle between Khurana and Arnav was amazing.It really caught me on and I loved it.
Chap 16:I loved that the family came in to play.Any family under such situation wouuld think of their daughter and with Khushi it's an added responsibility for she is an adopted daughter and in that aspect needs more emotional care and support. I could'nt help but praise the Raizada's as well for they acknowledge that if the roles were reversed they would do the same.Anjali repenting and lamening over her mistake shows she is really grief sticken but her wrong can'y be overlooked and you so brilliantly potrayed that.👏 But the star⭐️ was of course Arnav.He is changing and that is what I think counts.He readily accepted his folly and is looking forward to repair the damage done and..
Chap 17:Well it spoke volumes that somethings never change.😵 Arnav can't stop being possesive about Khushi and Khushi can't stop stressing over her relationship status with Arnav.Arnav's decisive nature should come down a notch or two(or maybe ten) and for Khushi she needs to understand that Arnav has branded her as Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada☺️ and that nobody in their sound mind or health can pull her away from him.It was an enjoyale update nonetheless.
I have a gut feeling that you have something up your sleeve and that Shyam might be planning something.Guess will have to wait tto see how it unfolds.And considering all I(and you as well) had to go through to read this update, it was worth the wait.Muah!!!!😳! You made me read it and today you simply were the epitome of BEAUTY IN SIMPLICITY!!!!
(Wait patently my love 'cause I'll come up with more names😆)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivani_Priyam

Ah finally after all that mashaqat I read the chapters...phew🤢And now I'll begin my analysis😆

Chap 15:That was a bang on.😎 The emotional turmoil that was evident in there had me reading it again and again.And I loved that you caught hold of the mental disturbance that Khushi was going through that added a sense of reality. And Arnav losing all his control(well there is nothing new in that) for his Khushi and the tussle between Khurana and Arnav was amazing.It really caught me on and I loved it.
Chap 16:I loved that the family came in to play.Any family under such situation wouuld think of their daughter and with Khushi it's an added responsibility for she is an adopted daughter and in that aspect needs more emotional care and support. I could'nt help but praise the Raizada's as well for they acknowledge that if the roles were reversed they would do the same.Anjali repenting and lamening over her mistake shows she is really grief sticken but her wrong can'y be overlooked and you so brilliantly potrayed that.👏 But the star⭐️ was of course Arnav.He is changing and that is what I think counts.He readily accepted his folly and is looking forward to repair the damage done and..
Chap 17:Well it spoke volumes that somethings never change.😵 Arnav can't stop being possesive about Khushi and Khushi can't stop stressing over her relationship status with Arnav.Arnav's decisive nature should come down a notch or two(or maybe ten) and for Khushi she needs to understand that Arnav has branded her as Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada☺️ and that nobody in their sound mind or health can pull her away from him.It was an enjoyale update nonetheless.
I have a gut feeling that you have something up your sleeve and that Shyam might be planning something.Guess will have to wait tto see how it unfolds.And considering all I(and you as well) had to go through to read this update, it was worth the wait.Muah!!!!😳! You made me read it and today you simply were the epitome of BEAUTY IN SIMPLICITY!!!!
(Wait patently my love 'cause I'll come up with more names😆)


BEAUTY IN SIMPLICITY!!! I THINK THAT IS MY FAVOURITE YET!! THANK YOU I AM TRULLY HUMBLED 😳

I love your analysis of all 3 chapters, really makes my chapters seem like they were so well thought out n what not, even though they weren't i just wrote what i felt would seem right in the situation n half the time i think i was writing in some sort of a trance bcz when i go back to read it or when i read urs n others comments im like wow did i really do that in the chapter, was it really that good...so hmmm or may be cuz i write it so then i don't appreciate it or something i duno...but i am glad you guys are enjoying it...n so now im actually fearing for what I am about to do next, i think then you all will seriously locate who is closest to my home to come n kill me...n no you probably have not even thought of it as you probably didn't think it would happen so soon, but it has...nyway you shall find out in the next update what it is...sooo yeah...nyway coming to your chapter responses

ch 15: that was a difficult chater to write to try n bring Khushi's emotional turmoil out, i'm glad it managed to come out well so that you all could understand it...n yeah Aranv loosing control is not new, n it was is something we all expect for him to completely go berserk if anyone even eyes khushi, she is his n only his so... i love that possessiveness in him...😳

ch 16: exactly khushi is orphaned n adopted so she is added responsibility n so yeah i had to have them take a stance n do waht is best for khushi, as she would not have thought to do that cuz she is an optimist n so just wants to move on n be happy not realising that it is important for the Raizada's to repent n realise that a sorry won't fix their mistakes that they need to learnt he value of khushi n how wrong they have been to her...and yeah i had to show anjali repenting too...n yup yup for me the onlywa y to show arnav changing was by showing him backing down, not stopping the guptas from taking khushi, by agreeing to their demands and by acutaly putting himself in their shoes n realising that he would do the same thing n he is wrong n so khushi should go with them...

ch 17: lol yes somethings never do change...n well u can't blame khushi for doubting her status as aranv keeps on giving her mixed signals n aranv can't help being arnav n not stayin away from her so... 😆

n its all good, im just glad you got to read it in the end, other wise i would have been really upset if you didn't get the chance to...n not just bcz you baptize me with every update but bcz i wouldn't want u to miss it so am glad it worked in the end...😊

thank you sooo much for your detailed comments really appreciate 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, three updates, that was brilliant.
i felt sorry for arnav but so glad he heard khushi's story from the start, how he was responsible for everything that has happened.
loved how buaji and garima stood their ground and took khushi home with them, beautiful narration of her feelings by garimaji.
love how arnav has been outside khushi's home every day, cant wait to see what khushi is going to say to him.
please update soon, im dying to read on, and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank yo so much for the 3 updates for the weekend...i think buaji and garima did what they thought was right ..but nobody thought of asking khushi what she wanted...one way it is good will make arnav repent and renew his love for khushi and it will also make khushi more demanding of arnav...well written
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LilaUK

Loved all 3 updates!!


thank you 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby-red

wow, three updates, that was brilliant.
i felt sorry for arnav but so glad he heard khushi's story from the start, how he was responsible for everything that has happened.
loved how buaji and garima stood their ground and took khushi home with them, beautiful narration of her feelings by garimaji.
love how arnav has been outside khushi's home every day, cant wait to see what khushi is going to say to him.
please update soon, im dying to read on, and thanx for the pm


yup i felt it was about time the family stepped in n protected their daughter...arnav n the raizada's needed that to know jst bcz they are the groomside doesn't mean all their mistakes will be overlooked...they need the separation to realise their mistakes...realise khushi's value and to trully redeem themselves...by giving her the honour n respect she deserves...😃

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