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Posted: 13 years ago
finally caught up with all the parts...amazing twist to the story...am glad you took this route since it gave me a chance to see how the story would have unravelled had the cvs too had taken this route ...tq

also got a chance to see the end of shyam...anjali's duplicity...arnav's realisation to both ...and his redemption...

glad to see the guptas rallying behind khushi...

AND love the murderous glint in khushi's eyes...yes...kkgsr is back...

wonder what else you have in store for us...cant wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Soloperson

First things first, 🤗 for the 3 updates...

Khushi's confession to police yet another slap of reality to Arnav, mighty ASR at the mercy of Gupta household and finally ASR at redemption mode...wow, absolutely loved reading every bit of it...

Thanks again for the PM..


yup that about summarises the 3 chaps perfectly...😉 hmm may be if someone ever asks for a synopsis of my story i may divert themt o you, as i am horrible at summarising anything, they always r tooo long, cuz i feel like everything is important n should be included...😆

nyway thank you for the sweet commernt im glad u enjoyed it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: silvia1999

AWESOME UPDATES...THANKS FOR PM


thank you n ur welcome for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

awesome n brilliant updates n 3 updates thank you loved it very much every bit thanks for the pm


aww thank you...im glad u enjoyed them 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asdfjkl

Thank you for the three updates (and the PM)! I'm also glad you made changes so Anjali didn't get off scott-free and Arnav had to face it all


I felt kind of bad for Arnav when Khushi started telling her story, but he really needed that slap of reality. It finally brought into focus the damage ASR did when he took decisions in anger

Also, I'm glad that Khushi got to go home and recuperate at home. Not just because it would be a punishment for the two ASRs, but she wouldn't get proper rest at the Raizada house. Everybody would be apologizing or wanting to talk, and she needs rest and relaxation to get better. Also, nothing helps as much as a mother taking care of her child when the child is sick

Good think Arnav isn't talking to Anjali - what she did was really messed up. He basically had to relive his most horrid moments due to her, and then Khushi ultimately almost got raped because of Anjali's lie

Keep up the great writing!


thank you...n im glad u liked the changes...but the pat on the back for them go to segad who made me realise that i had skipped that...cuz althou in my head i had it that arnav wasn't talking to anjali n that she was really sorry n guilty n everything i didn't pen it as i began focusing on arnav n khushi n how they must be feeling forgetting everyother character basically n then when sedag mentioned i was woaw wait didn't i pen that...n then when i wnet back n chaecked i saw i had the whole convo of bua ji scolding her n him in the hospital but i didn't have nani ji also admitting her disappointment at anjali n hadn't not shown what arnav felt at the betrayal n i was lik chalo lets fix that...cuz yup she shouldn't go scott-free she basically drove arnav to the depths of disparity causing him to make a hasty decision n not thinking abt its outcome...

n yeah i too felt that he needs to know how everytime formt he day he met her he made a wrong decision that hurt khushi...i hope they do that in the show where he realises just how much humiliation and pain he has given her through his decisions made in anger n that is why i amde her relate the whole story to make him realise...i mean it hurt to put him through that pain now when he was so ashamed of eveyrthing...but i was like no, bcz if i don't now then he would never know n would never correct his ways...so he needs to know in order to redeem n correct himself...

n yeah i was like even though khuhsi doesn't want to go home she needs to...bcz Anrav n anajli need the separation to understand her value, n how much they have wronged her...n then yeah at home no one will be apologising n disturbing her she will get the rest n love she needs while at RM everyone would be all sheepish n hesitant in taking care of her, not really understanding what she needs, when she would them all to just be normal n happy around her so yeah...

im glad u r enjoying it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abeer...sweetheart...1st of all,take a bow...you've full command onur storyline n d characters...all d twists n turns made us glued 2 ur fiction...i really really appreciate ur endeavour 2 entertain d readers like me who always tend 2 grab ur throat,2 throw c**pp*l* n ta**t**s at u😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
3 updates!!!!!!!!
amazing dear !!!!!
loved every bit
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Posted: 13 years ago

thank you n will do 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reniji66

Three updates!!! You're spoiling us. I loved all three. I knew as soon as ASR left that hospital room, he was going after Shyam. Glad he cleared things up with Khushi, but he owes her a lot. Glad Buaji stood up and didn't let him take her home. I'm also glad he's holding onto his anger against Anjali. I would love to see this in the show. She betrayed him and it almost cost Khushi her life. Love may be blind, but it doesn't have to be deaf and dumb. Anjali is unforgivable right now.


that is very true...love can be blind but should not be deaf n dumb...n yeah i too agree that arnav should be angry with anjali, i thought i put it in but had not so...when segad mentioned it i checked n i was like haww...good thing she mentioned it...😊

n yeah i felt khushi needed to go home rather n RM bcz Anrav n Anjali need to realise they can't just say sorry n all willl be well, sory may allow Khushi, Bua ji n all to forgive htem but not forget...forgeting will take a lot of time n love n so they need that space to learn each other's value in their lives n to trully be able to love unconditionally n trust unconditionally...

loli wanted to see how many ppl knew he was going for shyam n how many thought he was actually repulsed thats why did it that way...😊

n no i dnt spoil u, u guys spoil with all ur sweet comments that u make me update faster n more...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update awesome loved how he was in the room to find out how and when snake enter her life and how is started with him poor khushi thought he found her impure loved how he wanted to kill snake totally understand khushi mom pov how can she trust them to take care of her daughter when all they have ever done was hurt her and again no one asked her glad asr is not talking to anjali she used his most hurt against him and that cause him to bring back snake to the house putting khushi in danger loved the update thanks for the pm


aww thank you

n yeah i felt that he needed to know everything from the beginning, in order to know every mistake he commited n the extent of damage on khushi due to his decisions...because then he will truly repent for everyone of his actions n make things right with her n the family...
n yeah i felt it was high time the family stood up n protected their khushi n not let the Raizada's have there way...yeah khushi will not like it bcz she has forgiven n just wants to move on, n not stay in misery, the family don't want that either but they see that if they just hand her over then they won't learn their mistake, bcz they will feel k o we said sorry n all was oki khushi ji is back, but no it doesn't work that way you commitied a grave crime n you have to pay for it by being punished n not getting khushi back, even if it is for a small amount of time...but they need the separation to understand just what they have lost or nearly lost...😊

thank you for the pic as always is perfect 😊

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