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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Chapter 28:

I am loving Arnav <3 So he is also determined to have Khushi in his life forever! Very happy about that.

The guy in the second paragraph is Aman isn't he?! What's up with him? :/

And I was right about the guilt eating Khushi up :/

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mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

What an intense chapter!

Khushi slept with the pikachu that was sooo sweet and the way she held the bullet in her hands you wrote that part sooo well!

Arnav killed two men.. and his fight was awesome you described it really well on that part too

And the guy manipulating Aman.. Oh dear i can smell something strange here, i hope Aman dosen't join his gang but im sure he would anway to take revenge maybe?

Nice update! it was very interesting and i had so much to take in on this pat.. I loved it!

Continue soon ;D

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

I'm gonna continue reading for a bit! Liked the arhi moments very much :) Just read the part where Khushi says those 3 words <3 It was beautiful Rachel. Perfect! I'm just too tired and sleepy to post a longer comment :P I will just read on now ;)

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

I'm a new reader of this Fic as I just ended up finishing it yesterday. And I was happy to see an update!

Well getting to it; it was wonderful! I could feel ArHi's pain and that just cut me.

The sniping and the mafia scenes are very well written as well.

I love your writing and this concept.

Continue soon. :)

Cheers, Avi.

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kriti_angel1819

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Yayayayay loved it!! Please update soon!!!!!! I hope something happens again to bring Arshi together!!

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Jenni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Awww, both Arnav and Khushi are suffering, feel so bad for them.

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Kushi's heartbreak is breaking mine too!

Aman is successfully brainwashed!

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Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Rachely! it's almost 5 in the morning here and im still reading! So u can imagine how much im loving this. im reading chapter 44 now. too too sleepy to even type out the words. so apologies for not typing out a heartfelt long comment ;)