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ok now here's the update...
Chapter 3
In Max Hospital
After deciding that she will go back to her dil dosti dance...she saw telephone on the near by table...and walk towards it...(her muscles are paining while walking)...she sits o the couch...and dials rey num...bell is ringing but no one pick up the phone...then she dials sawayam's num...again no one picking...and it goes same with eaverynumber...now she's tired physicaly and mentally by calling them again and again but no one pick up the call...and tears started flowing from her eyes...then she come back to her bed...and manofying her heart by saying...that they were be in class...
Here in Rey's house...
After knowing that kriya's was dead...they held a small hawan in rey's house...some pandit come...start the hawan...while hawan was going on...rey's cell's started beeping...his heart saying him to pick up the phone but hawan is gong on...so he switched his phone to silent...and all's cellphone is already on silent...thats why no one notice the call on their cell...
back to max Hospital...
Kriya is lying on the bed...and staring at the cieling...doctor came and doing her regular checkup...and then door of the ward open and the man come panting heavily..and a lady also came behind him..then he come towards her
Man :kriya kriya tumhe hosh aa gya...
Kr :aap kon hai...aur aap mera naam kaise jaante hai...
Man :tum tum mujhe nhi jaanti...(kriya nodes her face negatively)...geet dekho...meri choti behan keh rhi hai...wo mujhe nhi jaanti...
(geet place her comforting hand on her shoulder )
Ge :maan kriya ko abhi sach nhi pata hai...aur ab waqt aa gya hai use sach batadiya jaaye...
Kr :ye aap log kya baate kar rhe hai...konsa sach...aur choti behan...par koi bhai nhi hai...
Ge :hai tumhara bhai hai...aur ye hai tumhare bade bhai...Maan singh Khurana...aur tum kriya ghai nhi KRIYA SINGH KHURANA HO...
Kr :ye aap kya keh rhe hai...mera naam kriya ghai hai...Kriya singh khurana nhi...
Maa :tum kriya sigh khurana ho...aur jinhe tum apni maa kehti ho wo tumhari maa nhi...humari maasi hai...humari mom ki chothi behan...
Maa :ha main sach keh raha...main 7 saal ka tha jab tum paida hui thi...(ab guyz yahan se aapko main short main batati hoon...)
past story from maan's pov
maan 7 saal ka tha jab kriya hui...kriya k birth k 4 mahine baad raajveer singh khura aur priya singh khurana(their mom dad)ki car accident main death...saare khurana gum main khoye hue the ki...na wo kriya par jyada dhayn de paate na...unki company Khurana constructions par...aur company loss par ja rhi thi...aur ye savitri singh khura(their daadi)...nhi dekh paayi...aur fir unhone company join kar li...aur jo thoda bohot dhyan bhi wo kriya par deti wo bhi kam ho gya...aur maan bohot chota tha...sab sambhalne...k liye...daadi bohot tension main thi ki wo kriya aur company kaise sambhale...jab unke mindmain smriti ka naam aaya...(priya younger sister)...smriti ne bhi apne husband...aur unborn baby ko us accident main kho diya tha..aur wo bhi depression main rehne lagi thi...daadi smriti ko Khurana mansion le aayi...aur fir smriti maan aur especially kriya ki ek mother ki tarah care karti...aur jab maan 12 saal ka hua..aur kriya 5 ki.toh ko london bhej diya further studies k liye...aur smrithi bhi jab tak normal ho gyi thi...aur wo apne parents k paas dehradun jaana chahti thi...saath main kriya ko lekar...lekin ye bol nhi sakti thi ki wo kriya ko bhi apne saath lejana chahti hai...lekin daadi ne...kriya ko smriti k saath dehradun bhej diya...aur khud maan k paas london aa gyi...maan humesha kriya se baath karne k liye smriti ko phone karta lekin smriti kisi bhi call ko ignore karti..(reason aage pata chalega)..lekin wo kriya k har birthday par maan ko kriya ki ek photo jaroor post karti thi...aur jab maan india aaya toh wo sabse pehle dehradun gaya lekin nanaji ne bataya smriti aur kriya mumbai hai...aur jab wo mumbai aaya toh unka ghar lock tha aur fir nanaji ka call aaya ki dono dehradun aa rhe hai...aur geet aur maan dono dehradun k liye by car nikal pade...aur rad par unhone dekha ki accident hua hai...toh dono ne help karne ki sochi...toh fir maan ki nazar smriti aur kriya par padi...aur usne dono ko hospital shift karadiya...
End of story from maan pov
Kr :par maa mujhe aap se baat karne kyo nhi deti thi...
Vo :ye main batata hoon...
(all look towards the door where a old man standing)
Kr :nanaji...(all greet him)
Na :smriti ne tumhe maan ya savitri ji se baat isliye nhi karni deti thi ki use lagta tha...ki wo log ek din tumhe usse dur lejayenge...isliye smriti ne tumhe tumhare asli maa baap k bare main bhi nhi bataya...sabko lagta tha wo normal ho gyi hai lekin sach toh ye tha ki use tumse itna jyada lagaw ho gya tha...ki wo tumhare sage bhai ko bhi tumse dur rakhti thi...yahan tak ki...usne tumhe dance se bhi isliye dur kiya kyonki...use lagta tha ki dance tumhe usse dur lejarha hai...
Kr :par nanaji aisa nhi tha...
Na :par use lagta tha...jab tum der der tak dance main lagi hui hoti thi...aur use saath jyada tym nhi bitati(spend) thi...toh use laga ki dance tumhe usse dur lejaraha hai...aur fir usne tumhara dance mana kara diya...
Na :par beta tumlog kabhi use galat at samajhna..usse nafrat mat karna.wo tumse bohot payar karti thi...isliye usne ye sab kiya...
Kr :jaanti hoon nanaji...aur main kabhi maa ko galat nhi samajh sakti...bhale hi unhone mujhe janam nhi diya...par wo meri maa hai...
Maa :aur nanaji main toh maasi ko galat samajh hi nhi sakta...kyonki jo parvarish maasi ne meri behan ko di hai...wo main aur daadi nhi de paate...
(after this all family hugs...kriya accept maan and geet as his bhai and bhabhi...)
(ok guyz aap soch rhe hoge ki kriya k nana yahan kaise aaye toh maan ne unhe call kiya ok)
now tell me
howz it..?
i know BORING & FILMY
bohot pakaya na maine aapko...
par kya karti ye part dalna jaroori tha...
aur maan & geet k Character sketch baad main dungi..
Iknow guyz itna boring part tha toh mujhe Likes and comments expect nhi karne chaiye
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kriti
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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