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Posted: 13 years ago
mish tu seedha padhne nahi baith sakti kya?

kal exam hai aur tennu update ki padi hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Himaniahir

Chup chap Bata kya hua


meko jaane do warna tutio ke liye late ho jaaungi

wo bhi maths ki

bye
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

mish tu seedha padhne nahi baith sakti kya?


kal exam hai aur tennu update ki padi hai

Kya update ki baat kha se ayi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Bye k
Tu toh baad mein dekh ti hu
Posted: 13 years ago
😊
Hey guys the banner of our post

*****chappy 5*****
Sorry for the late update guys i think most of u no the reason so plzz spare me 1c and
ya as usall speakers on kar lo and re fresh wen its mentioned u will really enjoy it i bet u all
Have u guys been to a disco...or club ...if no den i will take u to it ...so have fun reading this u will find how the discos r ..
now update my bak bak bohat hui...
Note kam Warning :Drinking is injurious to Helth Avoid it

Swayam and all the gang was now sitting on the beach and enjoying and den next day the event day ...Now the whole gang was der in the costume room and all wer changing kriya took her clothes and went to change ...the dance was going to be performed in 3 groups as dey wer 12 members ...
kriya , swayam, sharon,and rey-group 1
bharat,vishaka,neha,vicky -group 2
amar ,rinni,nilesh,simmi_group3
now every 1 was ready and the group 1 has to perform at last they wer performing indian dance as it was social event...now kriya was in the dressing room and she got ready ...she was standing in front of the curtains and den rey entered and asked her
re: r u ready(with his sudden question kriya paniced and she moved back and she stepped on the curtain and was about to fall wen rey hold her and when he hold her the curtain fell on his head with the curtain rod...it hit rey 's head and kriya immidiaty stood straight and asked by rubbing his head )
kr: r u fine tumhe lagi to nahi(she was rubbing his head with her hands nd he was jusst lost in her their eyes met and till 30 sec they wer lost in each other noow swayam called them and rey moved towards the gate...and turned bck and sid her s)
re: i am fine dnt worry .(by his answer kriya stood der and self talk)
kr: y was i staring at him like a despo...nd y do i even care if he is hurt ...now they moved on stage they both wer still lost in that incident wich took place in that room and they they wer dancing ...the dance was over and the crowd was hooding 1 name ...
swayam...swayam..swaya...(coz he was quite famous and as he was the son of the richest person ...so he had few plus points for that ) now the manager came near the gang and he said ...
ma: i think u guys wer fab... i am here u to invite to our party at the most famous night club of goa...(sixth elements..der is no such in goe its in hyd its the most posh disco so...)
sw: o ya sure we will come (seeing towards the gana and the gag shouted yaaa)
ma: ok so tody at 8 pm...meet u there...
Now there were lots of kids in the audiance who wanted to meet to neha..as she was so famous in childrans for her sweet behaviour she has been to goa for many time with her trio gang ...so all the kids camee running near neha and she sat on her knees and all the kida hugged her the gang was watching her from a distance and thought she is so sweet ... neha to all the kids
ne: kids how did u like our dance ..
all: it was sooo swettt diii ..now she was playing with all the kids and the gang over der was talking ..
sw: sexy ko itna khush kabhi nahi dekha jitna in baacho ke sath rahati hai...
kr: ha she is so sweet ..
re: was thinking dat she is really adorable...he wish he had a small sis like her ...
vi: i thing she like kids ...dats y she looks cute...(he said it a loud dnt no wat he was thinking about her dat he spoke such words but no 1 hear except rey...)
kr: so suys cahlle we have to go to the party at night and its 5 now so lets have some rest.. wat say..
all headed towards their rooms kriya was in her room and was swayam also ...now swayam was standing near the window and was looking out ... the site in front of him was mesmerising a girl had lots of balloons in her hand and she was running followed by vicky...wen he clearly saw the girl it was sharon ...she was chased by vicky ... and was enjoying.. swayam saw this and said..
sw: wow.. she is beautifull ...(i guess the destiny was dng their work the attraction was began ...but was it worth to )but she have llot of attitude agar attitude ko is se alag kar do to she is perfect... all had some rest and

Now it was 7:30 and all wer ready to go to for the party and we waiting for swayam and neha...as they wer late...now they both came down together and they wer looking super hot and then all headed towards the disco ...
this was the dress of swayam

this was Neha's dress


they all entered the disco except swayam ...the disco was filed with lot of people who was passionate about dance and was dipped in the alcohola and the crowd was hooding and shouting ...and the beats of the sound could make u skip a heart beat
the surounding and the atmospher could creat a havock to dance , the passion pulls u towards dance ...

this is rey's dress

and this is sharons dress..

Now the dj announced hey all u sexy people of goa check out a look who has gave a entry in our disco ...(the focus shifted on swayam ) our very own swayammm...the crowed got excited to see him as he was the most amous dancer in that club ever all the girls died to dance with him ut couldnt
dj: hey swayam this songs for u man ...played the song ...

Please refresh the page so u could match the song and dance...

The song started and he was moving in the crowd giving hi 5 to the people and some guys gave him hand and made him stood on the center stage (a stage in middle of the disco just 2 people can stand on it ) and he started dancing and the girls started to scream swayam . swayam . swayam... den .. the gang was also dancing rey,sharon was enjoying ...but reys gaze wer fixed on kriya
this was her attire ..


tera naam jab di phira... tera naal to sad ke mai java

.he became more passionate to dance and he was just dancing like a manic and the people was enjoying and then the next thing dropped the jaws of all the girls presed in the club he forwared his hand towards kriya and pulled her also on the stage ...they both forgot the world and waa s dancing in der own wayand swayam placed his hands on kriya's waist and was dancing the people in the club was feeling jealous and most irritated 1 was ...ya ya reyansh ... bt they wer completly lost in dance ..

.the gang was standing near to the stage ony ..now some 1 passed a shampain bottle to swayam...he shook and gave it to kriya to oped in and she flew away the cock and drank half bottle from it and then swayam did the same now swayam got down from the stage and went to have some thing bt she was still on stage and she was about to get down but the effect of alcohal didnt let her stand stright so she tripped and fell but i guess her wellwisher mr . j ...or u can call reyansh hold her in his arms...
She was drunken and she was blabering something...
kr: y u look in my eyes like a despo..
re: wat me ?
kr: ya ur eyes drive me insain ...see even now ur looking at me (she said like 2 yr girl as she was drunk she didnt knew wat she was speaking ) u r so cute...
re: do u really thinkhe was on cloud 9 dat she praised him...despo she was drunk even den)
Neha came and said rey...
ne: u can put her down i will take her ...
re: ookkkayyy..(he placed her on her feets and gave kriyas hands in her hands and she took her )
here swayam was also drunk but was acting like he is nt ...and ow the trio was standing close to each other ...both wer drunk and was pissing neha with der idiotic tacktics neha said to them..
ne: now ajar tum bono chup nah hua to mai tum dono ko ghar nahi le jayungi ...chup raho...
sw,kr: mai sharabi mai sharabi...both wer singing like and idiots
ne: (shouts ) enough chup raho...
sw,kr: both kept finger on der lips and was standing like kids ...
Now the gang joined them ...
nil: ye dono ko kya hua hai aise kids ke jaise kyu khade hai ?
ne: they both r drunk?
the gang wat?
ne: yes and they r pissing me to the core?
then they decied to leave and all wer about to leave they had 2 cars ...in 1 they wer amar,rinni,simmi,nil,bharat, vish..
2nd ..swaron.kriyansh,viha..
sw: i will drive...
ne: shup up sam no way i will drive u will sit back...
re: neha i guess u should sit back and ytke care of them and i will drive ...
ne: ok
rey and sharon sat in front and trio at back seat...even now they both wer singing like maniac and neha was dng her job same ..
rey was pissed and they wer irritating him so he shouted ...
re: enought(he applied the breaks and stopped the car) now both of u shut up...did u get me...(b hearing this kriya had tears in her eyes and den swayam couldnt see this and he said)
sw: r u mad y r u scolding my mrs cheezy see she is crying (by hearing this kriya started to cry like a baby loudly which was fake) sexy iss ko bol de mai ise marung...(pointing towards rey)
ne: rey is rite u both keep quite plzzz
kr:ok ...(made a lame face and put her head o swayams shoulder and slept )
Now they reached the hotel and all went to there rooms except these 2 drunken mads ...neha was tired and stuck with them and den rey came and said..
re: can i help u ?
ne: dekho na hume kal jana hai aur ye dono ...(they wer running and playing )
re: i think i have an idea ...he goes and ask them weather they wanna go or no so they both tell him no ...re to neha u see wat i do ...he pickes up kriya in his arms and say neha dat be with swayam he will lock kriya in the room and come and take swayam ...
he picks her she hits him and screams bt he run and place her in her room and locks the room from out and come to take swayam...and says to neha...
re: now u can go i will meet u tomorrow bye and he pulls swayam to his room and den he sleeps off bt rey thinks about wat happened wen he was talking kriya to her room ..
*Flash back*
rey picked her and she was beating him bt she stopped suddenly and said..
kr: y ur eyes always pulls me towards u ...
but rey didnt answers as he had to drop her...she asked him again..
kr: tell me y u save me always y do u care for me i to dont no u so?(making a baby face...)
*end of FB*
re: y was she asking like this does she also feels the same way i feel ...
Next day all leaves for mumbai again

Phew over guys plz plz hit the like button and do comment plz ur comments r important for us and ya
Again ...Drinking is harn full it looks pretty in first place bt sink a person till death do spread thos message..and sorry for such short updaate seee wat i am talking it was long i might have took lot time of urs
Precap: i think it should be suspance so guys wanna no wat happens next so stay tune ...
ok guys do tell how it was plzz its imp and will update soon pakka

Song in the post was tera naam jab from cocktail
Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update

Kriyaansh are soo cute

So is neha

I know why neha loves kids

Kriyam drunk nice

Poor neha

Rey is so bad made Kriya cry

Swayam is the coolest best buddy anyone can ever have

Thanks for double pm

Will be waiting for the next update

Long update long comment

Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update guys
lovd it...

Mein sharabi n tera naam are top on my list this days...just love this songs like hel...

Kria started liking rey woww thats gr8

hehe swayam n kria running here n there was funny...

Bichari neha...

Dint understand sharons part.?running with balloons

all in all awesome part
lovd it to the core

thanx 4 d pm
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm... thanks for the pm... loved it... bt kriya woh bhi fully talli... hehehe i luv those car scenes nd d scene where rey becum jealous bcz of kriya nd swayam inc.proximity... wondrful upddate...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update...
Mr. & Mrs. cheezy drunk... 😲 hehe...
Bechaari neha...
Kriyaansh *so cute* 😳
thanksh 4 the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
super awesome!!swayam and kriya are just so adorable..they really were behaving like kids..the cutest drunk people ever!!!and please kuch to batao agey kya hone wala hai!! eagerly waiting for the next update...please update soon!!and please a longer update next time..i am just loving this ff!!😊

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