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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

amazing sarah...

i love the way that this story is shaping up...
i love this possessive n caring arnav..he seem to be much confident with handling khushi nw...

do update soon hon...
hugsss

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

very nice update yar,read twice:)

just one thing now ramazan is here so i would not be able to comment in bold/romantic updates of ss/os etc,as i'll avoid these things! but i'll do press tha like button nd will try to give a encourgment comment:)

hope u understand:)

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dqkytm

@dqkytm

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

LOVED IT!

hope khushi isnt that confused anymore, and i hope whatever arnav says, she wont get the wrong meaning of it!

waiting for the next part! wanna know whats gonna happen next!

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Sarah, thank you for the pm... an awesome update.. you do the intimate yet emotional scenes very well... a really good morning for khushi to wake up to; thank god she has lost a bit of the heartache...

"The one who caused my pain...has eased it..." she smiled slightly...

poor khushi still not getting a grip on her emotions: She didn't want to be in love. That meant giving up too much. She was losing her heart to him... She didn't want to get lost again. this is a painful reminder of how much she has lost and been hurt by this relatinship!

Wrapping his shirt around her, he held her securely in his arms... is such a moving gesture of love on arnav's part... one can't help but feel for khushi: Her mind triggered all her old fears of loneliness and separation.

Hell, why not rebuild the world in a day while he was at it? couldn't be more ironical as it comes from the man who thought he was invincible and could bend the world to his whims! loved how arnav is also not absolutely sure of the rightness of his actions and fears he has inadvertently hurt khushi, so tries to reassure her of his love and his wish to earn her trust... though there are still things that need to be talked of and sorted out between the two, a start has been made... a long overdue conversation without recriminations!

these are the gestures that I find truly romantic, rather than those cliched candlelit, rose-petal strewn rooms: Cradling her like a baby, he pulled her close and kissed her crown. "Rest...I've got you..."

the ending was somewhat of a shocker... hope it is nothing bad though arnav is totally panic-stricken!

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Whhoooppp! That was sooo hot!

So she finally gave in to him. about time!!

Loved it!! :D

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Loved it Sarah hot & passionate. Just what Khushi needed to heal her broken heart. Arnav you dont need to have any guilty feelings over that, you did right babes 😊 😊 😊 x x