SwaRon SS|One Way [part-12 1/12]

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Swayam is so not Swayam in this FF !!! Please tell me that Shivam is still the Baddie in this story cause I can't take Swayam being mean to ppl just like that !!! Besides that, love the fights that are occurring between SwaRon !!!

hey!abby can i call you that?

here swayam threw shivam's passport just for fun not intentionally and here shivam is not a baddie infact he is a comic role!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

PART-3

the flight has landed

swayam follows sharon

swayam snatches sharon phone and clicks his photo'

swayam:here...take it!if you find any beautiful sweet girl then show her this pic and hand her Rs.1 as shagun...cz i dn't want to get late!

sharon:i surely will show her ur pic and tell her not to ever marry a person like you!

swayam:ohh! really...DOOMNA?(guys doomna was the exact word used in the movie nd i think no other word can suit best in its place and DOOMNA means beehive)

sharon:what? so u r calling me beehive...well,what are you----DANGAR!(dangar means donkey)

swayam:whateva'

they both turned to opposite sides and started walking with both their backs facing each other!

swayam to himself:thnk god! aapne mujhe iss doomne se bacha liya!

(turned around to see sharon walk away)

sharon to herself:thnk god! aapne mujhe iss dangar se bacha liya!

((turned around to see swayam walk away)

after a while sharon chooses her dream appartment and goes to the atm to withdraw money for the appartment...while she was counting the money some blacks snacth the money from her hand and ran away!!!!!

shhe got worried ..and talked to herself:what the heck! i from where would i bring more money now...! despite the fact i'm sharon raiprakash the sharon raiprakash i'm short of money...if i called home for money mom would call me back! so i think i would have to rent some cheap appartment.!

she looks out for a cheap appartment and reaches one of the address!

she rings the bell and an old lady comes out:yes!

sharon:mam..i'm sharon i saw ur advertisement in the newspaper...u are looking for a renter..?

lady:i'm so sorry but actually i already got a renter this evening!

sharon:ab kya karu.kal se university jaana hai aur koi bhi appartment mere budget mein nhi hai!

lady:excuse me..did you say anything?

sharon:nhi kuch nhi.i mean no nothing!

lady:you are an indian?

sharon;yeah...u too?

lady:yeah!well,there one solution to ur problem!

scene shifts to swayam's room

swayam sticking jennifer aniston's wallpaper in her room and talking to "it":hey!jenny its been 24hrs since i talked to you!

you know what... tomorrow is my first day of university! hope it starts good and finishes awesome...i hope i'll find my better half their!

no need to jealous... jenny, you'll always remain my first love!!!!

you know that how much i love you!

sorry guys! i didn't have enough time so posted a small part...

do comment and like it! because ur encouragement may lead to longer updates!

i hope you like this part!

Edited by Ananya.SwaRon - 12 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Small update..but koi bath nahi its an awesome update.

Loving SwaRon tiffs. Poor Sharon she lost her money..poor gal. Swayam is so different in this FF complete casanova..he talking to jennifer pic was cute.

So hopefully SwaRon are going to meet in the University.

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

awesum concept!!i loved d update!!LOL swayam threw away shivam's boarding passes!!:D truely deserving!!
now swayam-sharon wud be togethr in d same place..eagerly waiting to read dat!!update soon!

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Jenny ??? 😕

Oh God! these two are soo cute to imagine even while fighting! 😍

thnku for d pm luved d update even if it was short! 😈

i think they'll be living in a room! i mean they'll share d room for sometime! m waiting...😍

tab tak soch ke hee kam chalana padega!

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

nice update...thanks for the pm...

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neetha

@neetha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

wooow...ananya ths was too gud..haan chotu tha...but well penned..n i gus sharon aur swayam ek hi ghar main toh nahi rehne wale uss indian aunty ke ghar main:P:P..well well..waitin fr the update..thanx fr the pm..soryy maine tumhara scrap nahi dekha..i went offline soon..extrememly sorry dea