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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aishasully
kya yaar nimiie where do u get thessee ideas frm mujhe bhi bata plz nt fair yaar u shuld hav cnitnued i was waitng well i hope there is another part2 this warna!

sholly jaan!! sirf aik hi part tha :( :'(

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Its one of the most heart touching Os i have ever read. Way to go. Loved it. Superb writing.

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

wowww bful update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bt sad ending😭😭

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Nice one nimmi.

i new this was a sad one from the name itself.

gr8 try in diff style.

Continue writing.

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sapnaarsha

@sapnaarsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

amazing os

but sad ending

but atlast kria atleast met rey n her frends

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Mind Blowing OS nimmi
its absolutely amazing...loved it

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Neel

@neeliyer

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

super intense n emotional OS, if reading the OS I can feel the sadness so intensely, then i can remotely guess what was ur state of mind while writing this.. nyways Cheer up .. picture abhi baaki hai mere dost .. 😉

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esha

@ArShaAngels

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesome os...

written so well...

but y is ur mood off nimmi..??

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Nimmi . . . . Tune kriya ko maar diya 😡
ye to achha hai ki meko pata tha ki sad ending hai,,, nhi to isse zyada roti . . . 😭
kriya tried to suicide . . . Shit 😲
she's depressed & in pain . . . . . But she could'nt hold it anymore . . . . So she decided to give up 😔
swayam has got the biggest shock in his life . . . Followed by the gang...
for rey,,,, his life is on her last breaths 😒
& her heart brokes when she heard dat he did'nt show up . . . . 😳
& she died atlast in his arms . . . . 😭
I just hope ki CV's galti se bhi tera ye OS na padh le . . . . Vo to hai hi pagal,,, yahan se ideas chura ke show me laga dete hai 😡
aur kriya ka marna hum afford nhi kar sakte 🤢
anyways . . . . Mindblowing OS . . . . The pain of hearts was clearly visible . . . Wether it be mom,, bestfrnd,, or lover 😊