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mrunmayi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

this was fab .. do pm me wen u continue .. :D

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tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

amazing...😊

plz continue it soon...!!!!

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Anindita Sengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

wow this was amazing...👏 loved it...their first date was just awesome...😃 n u have described it beautifully from the beginning till the end...u r an awesome writer...keep it up...👍🏼 plz pm me next time when u update...i am adding u to my buddy list...n update soon...😊

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Okay, I'm mad at you for stopping right there and not finishing it, but I really am not in the mood for complaining after reading such an amazing piece of work. So thank your stars for that. :D

This is exactly what any of us would have wanted their first date to be like, Swayam planning something special, without making it much too evident to Sharon and then them reaching a beautiful place, deserted too mind you. :) And the cinderella part, way to add humour to a story.

And I just love the your writing style, you write really well. Just that there was an occasional double typing of certain words, but who cares. :)

Thank you for the PM.

And you better update soon.!

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hey i thought it was an OS. do pm me wen u do the nxt update

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Gaveshni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

u r a pure evil😈!!! gr8 wrk!!! ii loved the end when he calls her cinderella

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Yaar i just cant come out it. Ufff for a moment i thought he will def kiss her. What an arrangement and swayam is always swayam whatever happens. Hey it is an absolute treat to read your OS. Mindblowing. YOu just dont know how many times i read the whole thing. I cant get out this sweet feeling of swaron. Thanks a ton for the lovely update. plz update fast.

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Monica..

@Monica..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

amazing post... deir date was reallie veriee beautiful

n deir almost kiss...aaahh u r seriously evil 😛

it was beautfully written..loved it

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

You are so evil, you know that..But i can't complain much for you have given us a promise of second part and such a beautifully written SwaRon first date.

This made an awesome read, starting from Swayam getting lost in Sharon's angelic beauty and Sharon's outburst knowing the change in plan. Its only Swayam who can handle our diva and you did that just right..

The prefect setting of date, beautifully described. The metaphorically getting in Cinderella along..was awesome. The almost kiss..perfect. Loved how you ended.

Waiting for the second part..and the first SwaRon Kiss 😃

BTW whats your name?

I am Sudha 😊

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Well you are evil for sure😈

But the way you described their first date...the typical unpredictable swayam and the frenzy sharon when he didnt take her to her fav restaurant... i wont mind to wait(but dont prolong it haan😛)...their first kiss will surely be special...just the way they want it...☺️and should i mention how beautifully you write???

pls update soon and thanks for the pm