ARSHI FF: BONDED 4 D Womb2 Chap 8 Pg 158 01/08 - Page 72

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Posted: 13 years ago
i guess First option is the best

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm...interesting...

K if you go with current track...it will be a great way for them to understand and acknowledge their hidden feelings for each other...

BUT!

If you keep it as a FB...you'll have lots of suspense and many more tracks which can be introduced...either way the story will turn out awesome...so go with your gut feeling...im sure it'll be amazing!

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Posted: 13 years ago
id like it to be seen now...so we can understand their feelings as the story progresses...etc etc

but either way im sure it will b amazing...im loving this FF...

they are in love but dont realise it...i wonder when they will realise.
Edited by x.Heena.x - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think 2 would be interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
flashback nai chalegi...varthman mein hi dikhao yaar...curiosity kills...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
apply awooop trpsss...bhot ala...hmmm...i think 2nd option is good due tooo my curious nature...ok well plzzz update jaldi kiya karooo i m waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm fine with both option
But I like option 1 better
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Posted: 13 years ago

appy dear plzz...

i want option 2. I should write on thier loving making part as the story moves ahead (no flashback)...

cz u have told tht u will give FB at the end of the story...so curiosity ki agey i don't want to die...

as ur per update...i m too enthusiastic...to know wht will hpn on next part wht twist wht turn hw move...

so plzzz...i want option 2 but it all depends on u...its my opinion option 2...


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Posted: 13 years ago
i think 1 one is great idea but u'll hear lot of gali's frm me with appreciation and y give fb later on give in middle of chap like khushi remembering the spark wen thr lips touched in 1 chap and how his hand touched her in another this will make us more crazy but dont reveal the whole thing in 1 go.

oh god i m asking u to torture me

but now my brainwaaa worked more if u give getout now that means thr will b more getoutwaaas.
so option 1

or best make a mixture of both.

sumuuu whr is sheee😡

Edited by oops-whoops - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i would love it both ways..do as you want sweety pie😃

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