Pehli Baarish!!!!!-Last part - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Recap:
AB were dancing in the rain in order to celebrate the first rain of their wedding and in the morning they both catch cold and everybody on the breakfast table next day gave them meaning ful gestures and statements(Suraj,Manasavi,Khushi and Baisa)After that:-


In the noon Arjun is sitting in his office doing some work on his laptop he heard the sound of thunder he close his laptop and go the window on the other side Bhoomi is also standing in front of the window and enjoying the rain Arjun smiles and remember the last night and Bhoomi also they both smile and sneeze.

Cut short to AB room where Bhoomi is still standing in front of window smiling than Shefali comes.

Shefali:Aa...aham.
B:Aray bhabi aap(she saw shefali has a bowl and spoon in a tray in her hands.
B:Yeh kya hai?
S:Mainey soocha key aaj saara khana main banao itna acha mausam hai tu koi mazay ki cheez bana loon is tarah khana banana bhi seekh jaon gi.
B:Acha kya kya banaya hai aap ne.
S:Biryani,Bharta,Kheer,Pakoday aur bhi bahut kuch... aur tumharay liye yeh soap.(By saying this she smiles)
B:Soap!!!!!
S:Haan woh tumhein itna zukaam ho raha tha aur zukaam ki wajah se tu bukhaar bhi jaldi charh jata hai na is liye mainey tumharay liye soap banaya hai ab tum biryani yeh sub kuch tu nahin kha sakti.Hai na.(says meaningfully.
B:(cinfused)Haan!! a Ji.
S:Ab zara pi kar batao kaisa bana hai.
B:She did.(drink one spoon)
B:Bahut acha bana hai Bhabhi aap ne baqi saara khan bhi bahut acha hi banaya hoga.
S:O thanx Bhumi phir bhi itna acha tu nahin jitna tum banati ho bas koshish ki hai.(Bhoomi smiles)
S:Aur is baat ka bahut afsoos hoga mujhe kay pehli baar sub ghar waloon ke liye mainey saara khaana khud banaya hai laken tum aur Arjun kha nahin saktey.

B:Bhoomi looks surprisingly at her.
B:Bhoomi gives a fake smile and says:Koi baat nahin hum soap hi peelangay yeh bhi bahut.........(she sneezes aaaachheeee!!!!)

Shefali smiles "acha main chalti hoon soap bahut sara hai tumharay aur Arjun ke liye bahut hoga aur raat ko bhi chal jaayega.

B:(Murmurring)kahin Shefali bhabhi ne mujhay aur Arjun ko dekh tu nahin liya tha dance kartey huay????
Shefali is still standing out of the room she smiles and than walk away.

Arjun calls Bhoomi on her cell phone Bhoomi picks up her cell phone and says:

B:Arjun ji aur kaisay enjoy kar rahay hain aap humari shaadi ki pehli baarish ko.
A:(He sneezes)kaam kartay kartay itna nahin thaka jitna chicktay huay thak gaya hoon.
B:Chuch..chuc..chuch bahut bura hua.Ab jaldi se ghar aajao Shefali bhabhi nay hum do bimaar logoonke liye khaas khaana banaya hai.(Ironic)
A:Acha.Ok main jaldi say apna kaam khatam kar kay ata hoon.

Cut short to AB's room Bhoomi is waiting for Arjun it is 11:00 and Bhoomi sits on the sofa than Arjun comes sneezing.

B:Aray tum jaldi say apna kaam khatam kar kay aagaye.
A:Sorry bhavri woh meray kuch clients aagaye thay tu unsay baat karnay main zara der hogayee.

B:Haan sirf ggayarah to bajay hain zara si der bilkul sahi ab jakay fresh hojao.
A:Aray shefali ki woh special cheez kya hai jo usnay humaray liye banayi hai.
B:Pehle tum fresh ho jao phir khud hi dekh lena main lekar ati hoon tum jab tak change karlo.

To be continued..........

Edited by Lois_Lane - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
WONDERFUL PLZ WRITE MORE! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 work.keep it up. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx a lot for your gr8 response guyz sorry for late posting i have some cable network problems that's why.

So hear it goes:

Bhoomi comes into the room holding a tray with a bowl and a spoon in it.Arjun sees it quetioningly.

A:Yeh kya cheez hai?
B:Khud hi dekh lo.
A:(He removes the cap from the bowl)Soup!!!!!!!!
B:Haan soup ,bimaroon ka special khana.
A:Main koi yeh soup woop nahin peenaywala.(Becomes angry)
B:Arjun....Shefali bhabi nay itney pyaar se banaya hai aik baar pi kar tu dekho bahut acha ha.
A:Nahin!!!!!!
B:Magar kyun?
A:Baday pyaar say usnay sab logoonke liye itne ache mausam main pakoday,raita aur na janey kya kya banaya hai aur hamaray liye yeh soup.(Becomes even more angry)
B:Dekho Arjun mainey yeh soup piya tha aur is say meri tibiyat main bahut farq aya hai.Chalo moon khulo.
A:Mainay kaha na.....(Sneezes-aaaaacheeeee)
A:Mujhe nahin(before he says anything bhoomi put full spoon of soup in his mouth)
A:Hmmmmmmm...soup tu acha hai.
B:Hai na.
A:Haaan   ;   ;   ;   ; B:Tu ab jaldi say khatam kardo.
(He finished)
(After sometime)
A:Hahhhhhh....waisay ab main kuch better feel kar raha hoon.
B:Main bhi.
A:Tu khanay khaain?
B:Abhi aur kuch bhi khana hai tumhein?????
A:Tu apka kya amatlab hai bhavri ji kya main soup pay guzara karonga?
B:Waisey bhook tu mujhay bhi lag rahi hai.
A:Tu phir aik kaam kartay hain.
B:Kya?
A:Pehlay yeh batao sab so gaye hain?
B:Haan.
A:Aisa kartay hain chupkey se kitchen main jatay hain aur kuch pait pooja kar kay ajate hain.
B:Haan ab tu yehi karna paday ga.Aaj tu ghannu kaka bhi chutti par hain.
A:(Becomes happy)is ka matlab hai kay raasta saaf.
B:Chalo chalo.
to be continued...........

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Next scene:

Bhoomi is sittting on the bad Arjun took her into his arms.

B:Kaisa laga khana?
A:Hmmm acha tha..magar utna nahin jitna tum banati ho.
B:Waisey maza aya choroon ki tarah khana khanay main.
They both heard the sound of clouds thundering.
B:Yeh baarish tu lagata hai ruknay ka naam nahin legi.
A:Acha hai na rukay(getting romantic)aur maza karnay ka dil chah raha hai.
B:Arjun koi nahin dekh liya na "shaadi ki pehli baarish"main maza lanay ka anjaam.Ab please aur nahin.
A:Aray main kab keh raha hoon phir se dance karney ke liye.
B:Tu?
A:Aray baarish honey do waisey hi itna pyaara mausam hai main tu woh doosra wala maza laney ki baat kar raha hoon.
B:Kaun sa maza?
A:Woh humari jo baat usdin adhori reh gayee thi.Beta bhi chahiye beti bhi chahye....
B:Haan aur mainey tumhein kamray se nikaal diya tha.
A:Kyunke main office ke liye late ho raha tha is liye chala gaya tha.Laken aaj tu main kisi cheez ke liye bhi late nahin horaha kunke kal Sunday hai.
B:Tu phir?
A:Tu phir yeh ke hum usdin tu mehnat nahin kar sakay tu abhi se shuru kar detay hain.
B:Mehnat.
A:Haan(he kissed her on the cheek, and than switch off the light)

To be continued............

Edited by Lois_Lane - 19 years ago
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Next morning in heritage house Arjun is sitting in the garden with keshav.

K:Wah kya mausam hai aisay mausam main tu loog ghoomte hain tafreeh kartey hain mauj udatey hain bhale puri khatey hain......
A:Bus bus bus tafreeh hum baad main karengain pehley kuch kaam ki baat karlein.
K:Hum nahin sirf main tum tu bahut tafreeh kar chuke main tu aponi baat kar raha hoon.
A:Arjun raised his brow(he blushes and murmers...)kahin isay pata tu nahin chal gaya kay main aur bhavri....
K:Kahan kho gaye?
A:Aaah...hmmm kuch nahin.
(They dont know that Bhoomi is stnading behind them and she overhears their conversation)
K:Aray bhoomi.
B:Apki chai.
A:Aur meri?
B:Tumharay paas do haath hain khud banalo.Humh.
She goes.
K:Isay kya hua?
A:Pata nahin.
K:Pata nahin.Laken mujhe pata hai.
A:Tumhay kya pata hai?
K:Yeh hi kay tum duno ka koi jaghra hua hoga.
Arjun says nothing.
K:Hain na(meaningfully)
Arjun hide his face in the file.

In the night Bhoomi is standing in front of the window and the moonlight is comming direct on her face.
Arjun comes and stands with her.
B:Aaj kitney dinoo kay baad chand nikla hai na.
A:Mujhay kya farq parta hai mera chand tu har waqt meray saath meray paas rehta hai.
B:(She smiles)waisey mujhey na tum pay bahut ghussa a raha hai.
A:Kyun mainey kya kiya?
B:App nay yeh kiya hai kay usdin Baarish main dance karney wali baat subko pata chal gayee thi.Na tum baarish main dance karney ki zid kartey woh bhi ghar kay bahar aur nahi....keshav bhaiyya ko bhi pata nhain kaisey pata chal gaya.
A:Bhavri ab dekh liya tu dekh liya.Hum husband wife hain.
B:Kuch bhi ho tum wada karo kay aaj kay baad...
A:Aaaj kay baad...
B:Kabhie bhi baarish main....
A:Kabhie bhi baarish main...
B:Dance nahin karengain....
A:Ghar kay bahar dance nahin karengay.
B:Ghar kay bahar kab kaha mainey.
A:Laken mainey kaha hai.
B:Arjun....
A:Aray bhavri Baarish main loog kya kya nahin kartey hum nay tu sirf dance hi kiya tha na.
B:Tum nahin mano gay.
A:Theek hai meri jaan ab jo bhi karengain ghar kay andar karengay.
B:Haan.Thanx.Waisay kuch bhi hai tumne hummari shaadi ki pehli baarish ko bahut yaadgaar bana diya Arjun.
A:Haan is main tu kher koi shak nahin hai.

A:Tu karay?
B:Kya?
A:Jo bhi humain karna hai.
A:Jaisay dance.
B:Dance!!!(she laughs)
A:Dekho ab Sunday khatam honay main sirf aik ghanta baqi hai phir 12 baj jaayenge aur bajay ke baad time kitni jaldi guzar jata hai so lets start.....
He took her into his arms and she put her head on his shoulders and they dance.
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That's all friends "Howzattt"like it please post your comments.Whether it is good or bad.



Edited by Lois_Lane - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very very very good n sweet..
u shud keep writing.. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great !!!!u must def continue to write cause u do such an excellent job!!!!
kitu 😛
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yeah i am agree 100% with tunna and kkituu
u should continue ur fanfic!!

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