*KR SS*Circle of luv is never ending.check pg. 69 - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
i really love it!!

cant say anymore ryt now!!

pls ek kripa kro jaldi update krdo bas ! nd ya pls pm me! maine aapko buddy req. bhej di h! ;) pls jaldi!! pls pls pls pls pls pls pretty pweesh!
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CS for new characters

PRESENTING OUR VERY OWN ARJUHI GUYS 👏






ARJUN PUNJ- Arjun is a business tycoon of singapore, cute, naughty and a funny guy but serious when needed. he is a very nice person from heart not all arrogant, respects each and everybody
married to arohi, his love. treats kriya as his own sister loves her a lot , kriya's jijz


AROHI PUNJ - Kriya's di. A naughty and cute girl, maried to arjun, she's kriya's neighbour bt her parents died when she was in college, she treats kriya's mom as her own mom even smriti loves her as her daughter and she's elder to kriya and loves her just like her baby- sister supports kriya in everything she does even in her dancing .


Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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hey guyss me backk tum logon ko pakane k liye 😆
i noe i noe tum log dande, hockey sticks and al lekar meko maarne ko tayyar ho
ho bhi kyun kitne tym baad update de rahi hun na 😛
ookk my bak-2 khatam warna pataa nxt update tk main bachu hi naa
thannx to all the ppl who liked and commented 🤗
luv you all



Chapter 3
Rey P.O.V.
Flight landed nd now finally I was in dehradun, I came out of the airport and winds started blowing and I started feeling the same way when kriya was around'''..Mujhe aisa kun lag raha hai dat woh yahin hai aas paas hai
Looks here and there but does'nt find anyone there were only ppl unknown disappointed , he turns around for a taxi.
On the other hand a beautiful girl on airport was searching for someone
Girl's P.O.V
Gosh I was on airport and searching for these ppl important ppl bt look at them they r no where to be seen''huh ghoom rahe honge yahi kahin
kahan hai yeh dono'' Uugghh' mom ne bhi mujhe hi kyun bheja, she noes na I dnt feel lyk going anywhere now''.bt still she sent me can't she come or tell them to come directly they r no new ppl around they know everything about here nd plus they r no less than family wat!!!! They r my only family after mom''
Slowly wind started blowing, I was havin da same feeling wen he was around
yeh kaisi ajeeb si feeling aa rahi hai mujhe, aisa kyun lag raha hai woh yahin kahin (looks here nd there, disappointed) main bhi kaisi jhalli hun, who yahan kaise aur kyun aayenge ??? (a drop of tear fell from her eyes) Ab tk toh woh mujhe bhul bhi gaye honge
She immediately wiped her tear as someone called her.
arohi- hey kriyu, hum yahan hai (waving )

Okk u all mst hav guessd by now its none other than our kriya.
Kriya- di, jijz hiii
She went towards dem nd hugged dem
kriya -kaise ho aap dono ???
She greeted dem with a fake smile so dey dnt cum to noe about anything
Arohi- aww my kriyu we r fyn , hw are you ????
U look soo weak dear , kya tum bimaar ho???
Is everything alrite??
Kriya- offfo di kitne sawaal puchti ho aap huh
Main bilkul thik hun mujhe kya hua hai ??
M all fit nd fine ,
Arjun- agr aap dono ka ho gaya ho toh main bhi mil lun apni saali sahiba se
Warna tum dono toh mujhe bhul hi gayi thi huh (showing fake anger )
Kriya- aww jijz main aapko kaise bhul sakti hun aap toh mere world k bst jijz ho.
Arjun- huh, tumhari yeh buttering se kch nai hone waala hai huh
Hamesha aisa hota hai jabhi bhi tum dono milti ho mujhe toh bhul hi jaati
Iss baar main nai manne waala huh
Kriya- aww cum on jijz gussa chodd bhi dona ek toh aap di ko leke kitne saalon k baad aate ho aur'.. pataa hai maine aapko kitna miss kiya
huh (showing anger nd started crying )
Arohi- yeh kya kiya tumne meri pyaari si kriyu ko rulaa diya, jao main tumse baat nai karti
Arjun- arey main toh mazaak kar raha tha, tum toh ainvayi gussa ho gayi
Arohi- huh'''..
Arjun ' sorry sorry dekho maine kaan bhi pakad liye sorry
(yeh toh poora ulta ho gaya kaun kisko sorry bolne waala tha nd kaun kisko bol raha hai )
Kriya started laughing hard on this.
Kriya- di, jijz aap abhi tk nai badle
Aap hamesha gussa ho jaate ho aur jiju aapko manate hai
Arjun- kriyu bolona apni di ko plzz
Kriyu- okk okk
Di ab maaf kar bhi do jijz ko dekho kitne pyaar se maafi maang rahe hai
Arohi- ok ok agr kriyu keh rahi hai toh hi warna''
Arjun- aaccha baba sorry ab chale yaa phir yahin khade rehna ka irada hai???
Kriya- haan chalo chalo warna mom mujhe maar dalenge
They go to find a taxi.
Here rey is searching for a taxi and kriya also the other sides to find a taxi for dem
Rey's POV
I was standing at the taxi stand searching for a taxi so I culd to go to my destination nd start my mission bt look m waiting here ugghh''.what is this weird feeling... why do i feel like that someone or better to be prescribe kriya is over here. no way. she cant b here. lekin agar hui toh? i have to find her...
i just scanned the whole taxi stand but s**t she was no where to be seen.
oh gosh where are u kriya! god dammit i want my answers.
Kriya's POV
i was there on the taxi stand with my di and jijz dont know why i feel if someone was here. someone close to me was here. i dont noe who it is but dont noe why my heart says just go to that person and hug him. dont knoe why i feel to just never let dat someone go away from me. it feels lyk its rey!
oh wait wait wait kriya! how could it b rey? he's in mumbai duffo. he cant b here.
me di and jijz took a taxi and went to our destination. dont know why i feel lyk going back to that taxi stand as if someone was waiting for me over there. god knows whats it
St.louis
All were presnt in class bt our dear gang were lost in their own little world
Nilesh was usually making faces nd Vicky munching chips hiding frm da lecturer, simmi was usually texting nd rinni sitin confused as to wats happening around her , neha trying to tell Vicky to pay attention , vishakha playing with her pen , amar writin sumthing nd taking glances at rinni, poor bharat trying hard to undeestand wat the lecturer is sayin'' sharon nd swayum were lost in their own thoughts
Swayum POV
I was sittin in the class bt I culd'nt pay attention today as to wat happened in the canteen oh maahhhn why did these guys hav to send rey on a blind date , abhi abhi toh normal hona shuru hua tha ab agn aur aaj toh uska atta patta hi nai hai
Hope woh thik ho''
Kaash yeh sab kuch na hota, kaash kriya tum yahan hoti toh yeh sab problems hi na hoti, kaash tumne rey ka dil na toda hota toh rey ki yeh haalat na hoti
I dnt believe dat kriya can break rey's heart something must be wrong and I need to find out bt first I need to talk to rey
Sharon's POV
God yeh blind date ka plan bahut bura hta, I shuld'nt have listened to Vicky and nilesh, I hope swayum is'nt angry with me and rey also, hope he's fine
Kya karu aisa jisse main swayum ko manaa paun , (looks towards swayum nd sees him thinking sumthing deeply) disturbed lag raha hai, I need to talk to him after class
Soon the bell rings, everybody sigh in relief and leave.
Sharon texts swayum to meet him in abandoned staircase nd rushes out of the class
Swayum gets the text and gets confused as to why Sharon wants to meet him now as they have to go to rey's house, he too leaves to go the abandoned staircase
Sharon's POV
I was waiting for swayum in abandoned staircase, I was soo scared , if swayum's angry den???? I know I have done a mistake bt I culdn'nt help it.
Soon I saw swayum entering, damn I was soo nervous wat shuld I say???wat shuld I do ??? oh god help me. He entered with a confused expression on his he does'nt knows that why I have called him here, ohhh the gr8 swayum shikhavat culd'nt read my mind now huh??
Finally he spoke
Swayum- uumm.. Sharon why did u call me here ???? humei rey k ghar jaana than na ???
Sharon- yaa swayum I noe humei rey k ghar jaana hai bt mujhe tumse kuch karni hai issliye maine tumhe yahan bulaya hai
Swayum- haan sharon bolo kya baat karni thi tumhe???
Sharon- uumm'..woh'..woh ''.uumm''. swayum kyat um mujhse naraz ho???
Swayum- huh?? Sharon yeh tum kya keh rahi ho???
Sharon- I noe swayum tum mujhse bahut naraz , I noe maine job hi kiya who bahut galat tha bt wat culd I do ???? I was soo tensed for rey aur mujhe kuch samamj nai aa raha tha kya karu to cheer him up and upar se tum bhi nai the, so maine Vicky aur nilesh ki baat maanli bt andar se I was'nt willing to do
I noe rey bahut hurt hua hai and tum bhi. Pls swayum m really sorry
Please gussa mat hona tum please.
She said all this with tears in her eyes, Swayum was stunned as he culd'nt see tears in sharon's eyes, he cupped her face and said
Swayum- Sharon yeh tum kya keh rahi ho, kisne kaha main tumse naraz hun???? I know tum rey ki care karti ho nd wateva u did it must for his good only , den why will I be angry with you ?? bt tumne jo kiya who toh tha bt stil I can't be angry on you'. Stp crying now
Swayum wiped her nd tears and indicated her , Sharon smiled and hugged him, he too responded her with a smile on his face
Swayum's POV
Gosh Sharon ne socha main usse naraz hun, main apni Sharon se kaise naraz ho sakti hun haan manta hun main when I heard about the blind date main thoda naaraz hua tha bt still I noe Sharon kuch galat nahi kar sakti hai nd plus I can't see tears in my sharon's eyes.
Suddenly their beautiful moment was disturbed by a phone call. Vicky had called him to tell them they were ready to go to rey's house .
Swaron and the gang left from the college to go to rey's house
Soon they reached rey's house
They ring the door bell and a servant opens the door
Servant- arey Sharon madam aap yahan ??
Sharon- haan mujhe rey se milna tha, who college kyun nahi aaya aaj ?? is he okk??
Servant- madam kya rey baba ne aap logon ko bataya nahi kuch??
Swayum- kya nahi bataya nahi hai rey ne humei and where is he ???
Servant- sir who rey baba achanak subah apna kuch luggage lekar chale gaye nd mujhse kaha ki who kch zaroori kaam se jaa rahe hai''..
*phew* finally khatam
sorry for the typo errors
i noe poora bakwaas tha nd isme bhi kriyansh ko nai milvaya bt bacha log sabra karo
sabra ka phal mitha hota hai
kaisa lagaa accha yaa bura ??????
zaroor batana
all jhutas, chapppals , rotten tomatoes and chocolate pastries r welcum 😆
nxt update after 40 lyks and page 55 😈
thanx k for helping me 🤗
luv you


aacchaaa dekhu toh zara koi hai toh nai

nai hai acchaa me bhaging warna meko padegi
byee guyss

- cookie

check the note on page- 44

Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayy me first

Really bad update sissy

Just kidding

Maar na mat

Awesome update sissy


Thanks for the pm 😃

New characters are awesome I love them

Demand will be complete after all I'm also a devil


Poor Rey & Kriya they don't know that they near each other But it's ok jaldi milao dono ko

Poor louians don't know ki Rey toh Mumbai hai hi nahi

Waiting for the next update

Lamba comment acha laga meri sissy
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Kitthe hai tu

Teri toh

Kitni baar bola tujhe maine

Phir bhi nahi sudhregi rite?

Chal jaa main baat nahi kar rahi tujhse

Katti
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres... main janti hu m very late maaf karde...

ek second main kyu maafi mangu... itna piddhi sa update karke u trying to escape...

mujhe jaldi se next update chahiye

well the update was good😛
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Hah!!! kya hogaya hai kiddo??

kaise likha hai??

itna bura update??

look main kbhi kisi ko bad comments nhi deti may wat come but u to my sissy right?? isliye telling...

tune not thinking kya b4 writting???

me very disappointing very bad...

sachme plzz next time think b4 writing warna aise toh...

sorry...
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i really am sorry for such a comment but just the truth...
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its that upar jo bhi i've written is not true...me joking...

gussa aying????? don't be angry abhi i had to take the revenge also na...

accha to i hve to comment about the update...

ummm...

ok so amar reached dehradun wow...

wow they feeling each others presences...n that wind was ausum...

uaannn kriyaansh cudn't meet again...

new characters are ausum loved them...

swaron were soo cute...n their POVs ausumly described...

kya baat kya baat kya baat...

ab jaldi doing n milwaying kriyaansh ko n updating soon...now me going...

bye kiddo...
Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago
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Awesome update cookie

loved it

the airport scene was amazing

awww both of them feeling that some one close to their heart is present

Arjuhi were soo cute

and loved swaron tooo

update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Himaniahir

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Yayy me first

Really bad update sissy

Just kidding

Maar na mat

Awesome update sissy


Thanks for the pm 😃

New characters are awesome I love them

Demand will be complete after all I'm also a devil


Poor Rey & Kriya they don't know that they near each other But it's ok jaldi milao dono ko

Poor louians don't know ki Rey toh Mumbai hai hi nahi

Waiting for the next update

Lamba comment acha laga meri sissy


haaye sissy
thnxx for the long comment
luv u

will try to update soon 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
what the hell is this cookie ha
samaj kya rakha hey tune
ek to itna late update kiya
upar se wo b itna bakwaas
chal kya rha hey
kham kha muje tang kiya asha bla AJS k bare main scoh rhi thi ...
u know dil to kar rha hey tuje bomb sr ura doo
nahi to kaat dalo
mere haath to a ja
juttas , chapples , galiya sab ready hey ...
bas tere ane ki dair hey ...


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haha me devil ...
badla bohat tang kiya muje see mane b kiya
gussa a rha hey
marna hey muje
pakar to le pehley
agar tune j sab scoha k j jo upar likha scah hey to bhool ja
vese gussa to bohat tha muje but is baar schor deti hoo tuje
tu b kya jaad karegi ...
first rey pohanch hi gya ...
nd wind n all ha kya baat hey
arjun nd arohi ki entery...
then kriya look to gud
kriya ko to feel hoga hi rey k paas se to wind cross ho k ayi hey ...
nd arjun arohi ki fight to cute
kriya thinking about rey
rey kriya k bare main
hawww rey kriya ko finding but kriya already chali gyi
kriya kaash vapis chali jati taxi stand pey
then st lo. gang
sab kya kar rhe hey
viky to as usual chori chori eating
bharat kitni mehnat karta hey
vish pen k saath lagi thi
amar ki to baat kya kro
omg blind date haha
sab pagal ho gye hey
rey na kisi ko btaya hi nahi
then swaron scene was cute
rey ghar pey hey hi nahi
or precap kon dega ha mere dad
haw itna lamba comment ho gya
main faint ho jaugi
megical
u roke it kya baat kya baat kya baat
next time jaldi update karna
nahi to bhagne k mooka b nahi doogi
ok love u
me going ok

this is for u bohat tang kiya na cholly nahi bolugi tuje tang nahi kroogi to kise karoogi ...
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago

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