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ok so now i finish reading
and guess what i don't believe it like ki j scah main ho rha hey
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each nd every update
describe beautifully kya bolu
choolly long comment nahi kar sakti kyu ki abi mere inbox main lots of pm hey

to cholly next time lamba comment karugi ...
nd congo for new thread keep it up
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shonaaa plzzz UPDATEEE !!!!!!
u said u'll update on 1st bt abhi tk update nai hua ?????


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shona aur kitna tadpaaogi

pls update kardo na unwaah!!!!
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Shona ki bachi! Tune update karna h ya nae?
Agar nae karna na toh maine tujhe jaan se maarna h...
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PM ME DEAR...LIKED UR CONCEPT.!!!!
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Omg already page 5
I only created a the thread 2 and didn't even pm anyone
Thank you guys
Your encouragement is truly superb
By the here is the good news
You guys have been waiting for

My college: NIT nagpur
Subject Computer science engineering
Anywhere still waiting for second counselling
Par getting NIT for sure

I m really happy and thanks for supporting me
I didn't even get to give a thank you speech after completing my first FF ka first thread

Firstly thank you alot guys for liking and commenting and encouraging me
I don't wanna specify anyone's name
Hope u guys don't mind especially my really close friend
I just don't wanna offend anyone
Old and new readers
Active or silent
Thank you coz u have appreciated my writing from your heart and taken time from ur busy schedule to read my FF out of so many wonderful FF's of so many wonderful writers
Hope the words and emotions I tried to convey reached your hearts
I know my thankyou speech is not as long as my FF's but I really don't have words to describe how overwhelmed I feel
Thank you
Thank you all so much
I cannot express how much I feel blessed to be able to write story which touches someones heart
I don't know if my FF is that heart touching but I m assuming that it can atleast vibrate a single string of your imagination and emotion.
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Chapter 11:Unattended Wounds of

Broken Trust

Beautiful

Mano meri baho meh koi pari ho

Lying there coulored by the golden yellowish warm light of the rising sun, the cold breeze that felt like it would lift them up to sky.

Rey (pov)

It couldn't be more beautiful

I wouldn't mind if I died now

Kriya as though heard what he had said in her deep slumber turned adjusting herself in his warm embrace and keeping her fingers on his lips as though asking him not to say such things.

Rey smiled plated a soft kiss on her eyelash remembering her butterfly kiss and closed his eyes again remembering their underwater dance.

Sh: Ab kya kare?????????

Sw: Mujhe kaise pata

Sh: Ya right

Etni subah koi nahi uthata

Ab bolo

Sw: Ab mujhe kya pata ki Smriti aunty etni jaldi uthati hai

Sh: Pata hona chahiye

Tumhari best friend ki mom hai

Sw: Exactly mere best friend ki mom hai meri nahi

Na hi mai unka assistant hu jo unka daily timetable lekar ghumugga

U know what yeh tumhe pata hona chahiye

Sh: Kyu mai tumhe unki assistant lagti hu

Sw: Nahi par ab woh tumhari mom hai (chuckles)

Sh: Whatever (angrily)

Sharon was completely taken a back by Swayam's sentence. She was angry but she knew he wasn't wrong. Even if she hated all this she knew she had to put up with it because that was the truth.

Sharon (pov)

Woh meri mom nahi hai

Woh Kriya ki mom hai

Par mai kyu complain kar rahi hu

Like it matters

Mujhe kyu farak padhne laga

Woh meri mom isleye hai kyuki woh Dad ki wife hai

But agar mera dad ke sath hi koi relation nahi hai toh woh meri mom kaise hui

Mujhe laga tha ki kam se kam Swayam meri feelings ko samajhega

Ki kiseke liye bhi uski mom ki jagah koi nahi le sakta

Par shayad mai galat thi

Usse toh yeh sab mazak lag raha hai

Swayam turned towards Sharon feeling the uncomfortable silence. He saw her lost in her thoughts. Unconsciously tears rolling down her cheeks.

His heart ached like someone had shot an arrow though it. His Sharon was in pain because of him

Swayam (pov)

Yeh kya kiya maine

Sharon ka dil dukha diya

Mai bevakuf hu

Gadha hu

Par ab kya

Sw: Sharon sorry, mera yeh matlab nahi tha

Sh: Chalo unhe uthadete hai

Sw: Shar'

Sharon got up from the seat where they were sitting and walked towards the couch where Rey and Kriya were asleep.

All this while she didn't once look at swayam.

She was angry but she knew it was not his fault, he would have never hurt her intentionally. So, she thought it was better to not face him rather than shout at him.

Swayam got up and went behind Sharon trying hard to apologise.

Sw: Sharon tum aise mat karo na please

Chaho toh chilao mujhpe ya tum marogi toh bhi chalega

But plz aise chup mat raho

Sharon

Sharon didn't pay attention to anything that he had said she simply ignored him. She reached Rey and Kriya and tried waking them up but in vain.

She looked up at Swayam who shrug his shoulder indicating that he too had failed in the task. They both looked in the direction in which Smriti was coming. They turned pale they both feared the very thought of what the outcome would be if Smriti saw Rey and Kriya like this.

Swayam looked at Sharon, her eye had a new twinkle. He knew she had some idea and was about to ask her when he saw her push the couch. What was she up too.

She hinted him to push the couch too. He followed her instructions.

He turned in the other direction to see Smriti approaching.

He was so nervous, he shifted his sight back on Sharon who was trying hard to push the couch.

Swayam believing in her put all his force into her plan of action coz right now he was in no position of questioning her plan neither did he have a plan himself.

Finally, both Rey and Kriya fell on the ground.

Rey: Ouch''''.

Kr: Ouchiii..

Sw: Esss zor se lagi kya

Smriti hearing them screem ran towards them

Sm: Kya hua''

Sh: (on top of her voice pretending to be angry)

What the hell guys

Rey, Kriya tum log aise takra kaise sakte ho ha

Dekhta nahi tumhe

Aur tum dono abhi bhi neeche ho

Utho

Rey, Kriya and Swayam just starred at Sharon.

Sh: Jaldi utho guys

Rey plz jaldi

Hume sab ke liye scuba diving ki tayaari karni hai na

Finally when the shocked trio understood that Sharon was framing a drama to get them out of trouble so that Smriti would have not seen them like that.

Smriti was at first angry on seeing Rey and Kriya

together. But afterward when Sharon spoke she got the

jist of the situation the way Sharon had framed it, thus

calming her down.


Sharon then pulled Rey up and started to drag him along

with her.

Kr: Rey (she shouted)


Sharon and Rey turned back to see Kriya with a terrified

look on her face.Rey ran towards her

Rey: Kya hua kriya tum thik toh ho na

Don't worry mai yahi pe hu


Kriya slowly held Rey hand and turned it. It was red. He

was bleeding. The blood had spread on the shirt's sleeve

this made Kriya shiver with fear. Kriya gulped hard and

in a shaking voice.

Kr: Aap thik ho na Rey


Sharon bit her lower lip realizing that it was her fault. If

she hadn't pushed Rey and Kriya off the couch Rey

wouldn't be hurt.

Swayam felt equally guilty.

Rey immediately at Kriya's sentence flinged and pulled

away his hand.

Rey: Its okay Kriya

Zyada choot nahi lagi hai

Tumhe bhi kahi lagi hai kya

Kr: nahi

Par aise kise zyada nahi lagi khoon beheraha hai

Rey: Ab come on

Ladhako ke liye itni choot normal hai

Sw: Normal (shouted)

Rey gave swayam a stern look.

Sw: ha woh normal hi hai(gives a fake smile)

Swayam(pov)

Pata nahi iss Rey ko kis angle se yeh normal choot lag

rahi hai

Kitna khoon behe raha hai

Ladhakiyo ke saamne itna macho behave karna zaroori hai

kya

Rey ke isse behaviour ki wajah se na humare group ki

ladhakiyo ki hum ladhako se expectations badh jati hai

Yeh ek din marwayega hum sab ko'..

Sala macho

Swayam bechare ko choot lagi hai aur tu usse gali deraha

hai

Ja uski madat kar


Swayam reacted in the direction of his thoughts. He ran

toward Rey but rey said he could manage on his own.


Rey went towards his room. Smriti took Kriya with her

saying that she had something important to speak.


Smriti and Kriya were now in Kriya's room. Smriti

signalled her daughter to sit beside her


Smriti: Kriya mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai

Kr: Haa


( Kriya was not basically paying any attention to her mom

coz she was more worried about Rey's injury)

Sm: Ok, mai janti hu kit um abhi bhi uss Rey ko pasad

karti ho

Par beta maine tumse zyada duniya dekhi hai

Aur mujhe woh ladhaka thik nahi lagta

Meri baat mano aur usse door raho

Woh ladhaka thik nahi hai

Woh Akita ka beta hai, mujhe toh kabhi bhi Ankita

pasand hi nahi thi

Dekho na Anshika kitni pyaari thi aur yeh Ankita uski puri

opposite

Koi sapne meh bhi nahi soch sakta ki dono behene hai

Beta aap samaj rahi hai na

Kriya was on complete vibration mode, tapping her pointer

finger on her thighs, shaking her legs vigourously.


Her eyes staring at the door. She didn't pay attention to

a single word her mom said. All she cared was Rey's

injury.

Sm: Kriya( shouted which caused kriya to come back to her senses) Tum sun rahi ho na

Kr: (phir khogayi) Ha

Sm: maine tum se kya kaha

Kr: (irritated) ha suna jo bhi kaha ( Waise mom ne kya

kaha tha, job hi koi lecture hi hoga) khatam ho gaya na

ab mai ja rahi hu


Saying so without waiting for her mom's reply she

stormed outside. Then she started searching here and

there and suddenly she dashed someone.

Both fell


Kr: ouch'''''..

Voice: Oouch'.what the hell

Kr: sorry

Voice: miss baatcutter

Rasta katna bhi aapka hunar hai kya

Kr: Angel'..oops mera matlab Alisha

Al: Angel mera pet name hai koi gali nahi hai jo tum oops

bolo

And its ok tum mujhe mere pet name se bula sakti ho

We are friends right

Kr: friends (wondering when they became friends)

Al: (raising one eyebrow)

Kyu mai tumhari dost nahi hu'

Kr: Nahi aisa maine kab kaha

Woh hum dost kab bane?????(Puzzeled)

Al: Hmmm

Mujhe nahi pata tha ki

Aise waise logo ko hug karte hai

Aur strangers ke liye choot khate hai

Kriya then remembered the way Alisha had helped her

with Shivam and his Gang and when she hugged her in the

rehersal hall.

Kr: toh hum dost hai

Al: ha miss baatcutter

Ab kya mujhe aapko official court papers dene padhenge


Kriya like a kid shook her head and Alisha hit her head

with her palm.

Al: tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta

Kriya seeing Alisha's reaction remembered the day when

She and Rey were standing outside the abandon corridor

and even after Rey tried not to envisage on Swaron's

conversation, she did and rey got fed up and hit his head


Kriya (pov)

Kitne similar hai dono

Sachi Alisha almost har cheez meh Rey ki duplicate copy

hai

Arre ha Angel ko pata hoga ki Rey kaha hai

Mai ussi se puch leti hu


Alisha was just about to leave when Kriya called her


Kr: Angel

She turned back

Al: Ha bolo

Kr: Woh' Rey kaha hai''..mera matlab tumhare bhai

nahi I mean bro kaha hai

Al: Mujhe pata hai mere bro ko sab Rey bulate hai aur

ye bhi pata hai ki brother ko hindi meh bhai bolte hai

Kr: (bit her tongue slightly) woh mai bas clear kar rahi thi

Al: ha ha thik hai

Bro apne kamre meh honge

Kr: ha toh unka kamra kaha hai

Al: upar wale deck meh staircase se 3rd room toward left

Jaha se outter sitting area clearly dikhta hai

Woh wala


Saying so she pointed up towards the her brother's room.


Kr: thanks'.


And ran up towards his room.


Alisha(pov)

Yeh Bro ke room ke bare meh kyu puch rahi thi

Au raise bhagi kyu

Aur tabhi Bro isse aise kyu dekh rahe the

Kya enke beech koi chakar

Nahi nahi aisa kaise ho sakta hai

Yeh ajeeb ladhaki toh bilkul nahi

Humesha upar dekhkar apne aap se chila chila kar baat

karti reheti hai

Accha ab taani jitni ajeeb nahi hai par phir bhi ajeeb hai

Pata hai ki bro ki pasand simple hai

Kya simple aur ajeeb bhi hai????

Ab chalo bakwaas mat soch angel

Waha Sharon di kachummar bana degi


Kriya knocked at Rey's door more than thrice but there

was no answer. This began to worry her and she applied

all her force not knowing that the door was already open.


Due to the force she applied the door flung open and she

was thrown inside due to an inertial reaction.


She tripped and fell when Rey caught her but he too

tripped due to the basketball lying on the floor. And

both fell on the bed Kriya on top of Rey.

Kriya lifted her head to say sorry but she was awestruck

by the rooms beauty.

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Kriya looked around it was such a marvelous room, she

was actually surprised to see that even guys room can be

this neat, but then she realized its not impossible after

all it was Mr. Reyaansh Singhania's room oops I mean

Mr. Perfects

It had a sea view she ran towards the edge like a kid

who had never seen the sea and hit her head to the glass.

Rey hurried towards her and rubbed her fore head to

ease the pain.

Kriya looked up to see his wound still unattended.

She quickly pulled his hand and became furious


Kr: yeh kya hai Rey aapne abhi tak iss par first aid nahi

lagaya

Kitna khoon behegaya

Aap apna dhyaan kyu nahi rakhate

Choote bacho jaise behave karte rahete ho

Rey: ha woh''''

Kr: ha woh kya

Rey: phone'..important call tha

Kr: Important call tha

Aapko aur koi bahana nahi mila

Itna important ki khoon beheraha hai aur aapko important

call ki padhi hui hai

Aapka mai kya karoo


Rey slowly moved away kriya's hand

Rey: tum chinta mat karo aur neeche jao

Mai aaraha hu

Kr: par isse bandage

She tried a lot but to bandage him but in vain.

Kriya felt something different about his behavior, he

was not like before, she felt like he was not the Rey she

once knew, kiddish, jovial, shararati. Yes he was caring

and he loved her more than life but something was

missing.

Just when was about to climb down the stairs she heard

Someone speak loudly

She decided to take a quick peek

It was none other than Sharon and Gautam.

G: Beta aap hume batayiye ki hum kya kare ki aap hume

maaf kar denggi

Sh: Plz Mr. Rai Prakash aap mujhe akela choodh dijiye

G: Beta hum wada karte hai agar aapne hume sirf ek

auur mauka diya toh hum aapko nirash nahi karenge

Hum aapko kabhi shikayat ka mauka nahi dengge

Hum aapka trust nahi todhenge

Hum aapko kabhi hurt nahi karenge

Sh: Kaise yakeen karu mai aap par

ki aap mujhe phir hurt nahi karenge

Kisi par bhi trust karna aasaan nahi hota

Aur aapko Dhoka denewale par doobara trust karna toh

bilkul nahi

Hum kitni bhi koshish kare

Par jo koi bhi ek baar dardh deta hai na

Uss par dobara bharosa karneke liye bahut himmat

chahiye hothi hai

Nahi hai mujhme doobara bikharkar apne aapko sambhalne

ki himmat

Kisi ke diye huye dardh ko maaf karna alag baat

Usse apnana, woh bhi kiya ja sakta ha

Par firse uspe vishwas karna namunkin hai

Sharon said this in a stern voice, her voice would shake

and probably she wanted to cry but she held herself

together.

She believed that there was no point of crying before a person who couldn't wipe your tears.

Then she walked away followed by the Gautam who was

disheartened by another failure to be able to win his

beloved daughter back.

Kriya hid herself, she didn't want them to see her.

She was in tears, endless tears rolling down her soft

cheeks.

The question she was trying to frame and the answer to her unframed questions were placed right before her in black and white.

Sharon's words penetrated her heart like arrows.


Kriya: He doesn't trust me anymore

He can't trust me''''''''''( whispered

and sat down on her knees)



Okii

So finally Chapter over😊

2nd thread ka first chapter👏😳

Chapter 12: Exposed

( 60 likes ke baad hi aap sab ko

update milega😉)

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chapters just kidding 😆

but plz do leave ur comments

Do ignore spelling mistake😭

Love u guys keep supporting me


Guys since many of you are finding Rey's reaction a little confusing

Refer to page 6 for explanation concerning Rey's behavior.



Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 13 years ago
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Awesome update waiting for the next part 😊
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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awesome part
but
plz clear their MU
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago

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