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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
awesome update...
finally taani's truth reveiled...
and love that slap...
kriyansh convo was nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Awesome update...gosh uss taani ki toh mai🤬...glad to hear from sharon's mouth my sister...eagerly waiting for the nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
really update was superb i kust loved d way u sorted out the things btw rey and kriya and the way kriya said she will gain is trust back was the most sweet and cute and adorable thing
and taani god finally atleast someone came to know about her...
really so nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Really loved this update
Loved sharon's slap Taani deserved it
Nd kriyansh talk woz cute
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ShonaSparkzz

Thank you guys

for waiting
sorry for the late update can't help i m busy with the counselling work
But enjoy


Chapter 12: Exposed


Alisha ran and hugged the person tightly, causing that

person to almost choke.


Alisha: Awww you are so cute

Voice: Mai tujhe puppy dekhti hu

Al: Hwww di tum duniya ki peheli ensaan ho jo apne aap

ko puppy bula rahi ho


Sharon broke from the hug and stood before Alisha with

her hand on her hip and one eye brow raised


Sh: What did you say


Alisha gulped hard she knew that she was in a soup now


Al: Kuch nahi di just that how beautiful you look

Sh: puppy ke bare meh kuch kehe rahi thin a

Al: puppy kon puppy kaisa puppy

Mujhe aapko puppy bula kar thodhi apni kabar khodni hai

Hai na

Sh: Abbacha

Just then as if a savior sent from heaven Swayam

Shekhawat appeared.


Alisha thanked her stars and then went off to her

beloved brother.

She was climbing the stairs when she crashed into a girl


Al: What the hell

Voice: sorry '..

Alisha raised her head to see

Al: Kriya''

Alisha was surprised to see kriya crying

Al: kya

But before Alisha could finish her sentence Kriya stormed

away


Alisha (pov)

Esse kya hua

Yeh baatcutter humesha mujh se takarati kyu reheti hai

Aur woh toh bro ke pass gayi thi na

Kya bro ne kuch kaha

Nahi nahi mere bro kabhi kisi ko nahi rulate

Jab gayi thi tab etni hyper thi

Ek cheez ho sakta hai

Ki Kriya bro ko pasand karti hai

Aur madam ne confess kiya

Aur as usual mere mahan bro ne mana kar diya

No again plz

Ab mujhe dar lag raha hai

Mere bro normal toh hai na

What the hell

Apna thought prossess control meh rakh

Alisha Singhania

Koi apne pyare bro ke bare meh aisa sochta hai

Idiot kahiki

But I gez aisa hi kuch hua hoga

I have decided aaj


Alisha:

For the first time in history

Mai Alisha Singhania

Apne Bro ko lecture dunggi


Saying so she went up to Rey's room

Dashed in, she saw him struggling trying to bandage his

hand with the other

She went up to him and started bandaging it for him.


Rey: Angel mai kar lungga

Al: kyu mai thik se nahi kar rahi hu kya

Rey: its ok I will do it myself

Al: ha dekh liya kitna aap urself kar pa rahe the

Rey: par

Al: enough mera concentration deviate mat karo

Rey: bohot ziddi ho

Al: Obvious behen kiski hu

Rey: Tumhara matlab mai ziddi hu

Al: Bratashri do minute ke liye plz shanti se bethiye


Ok now Rey hated it when Angel called him that

It sounded so whatever, so not him

And whenever she did that, it only meant that she is

hyper irritated and one more word and she would start

speaking in shudh hindi

Now that is more of torture so whenever she did that

Rey would shut up with a pount

Gosh he looked so cute

Just like a kid

And this was Angels favourite part the only time he

would behave like kid

The only time she get the boss


Alisha bandaged her brother and then put on a stern look

of a college professor who was about to give a lecture.

Rey saw that stern expression and was confused.


Rey: what

Al: what what

Rey: arre ab kya hua tujhe

Al: Mujhe jaana hai ki aapko kya hua hai

Aap etna normaly kaise behave kar sakte ho

Waha woh roo rahi hai aur aap'''''

Seriously Bro agar kisiko mana kar rahe hai toh rulate

kyu hai

Bechari usne kitni himmat jutayi hogi

Bro ko apni feelings batane ke liye

Bevakuf Bro kash unme thodi akal hoti

Ladhakiya kitni sensitive hoti hai

Unki feelings samjni chahiye na aapko

Mana ki aapko woh pasand nahi hai

Who ajeeb hai phir bhi aapko uski feelings ki respect

karni

chahiye na


Rey (on top of his voice): Tum kya bol rahi ho


Rey (pov)

Taani

Kahi Angel taani ke bare meh toh nahi baat kar rahi

Par usse kaise pata chala

Mai ne toh kuch nahi bataya

Infact swayam ko ya kisiko bhi nahi pata

Roo rahi hai

Yeh Taani phir se roo rahi hai

Omg now what

Seriously ab yeh sab nonsense kab khatam hoga

Al: Aap ko acchi tarah se pata hai mai kya bol rahi hu

Bro aap sun rahe ho'..

Rey was lost in his own thought and was brought back to

reality when Angel snapped her fingers before him

Al: Bro aapne kuch bhi suna

Rey: Ha I will talk to u later

Saying so he stormed out of the room towards taani's

room leaving Angel confussed.

There he dashed into Sharon who was also going to

Taani's room for some reason.

Sharon and Rey were about to crash into eachother but

managed to balance.

They heard Taani speak actually shout on top of her

voice.


Taani: Ab meh kya karu

Sab kuch tumhare stupid I idea ki wajah se

Hey Krishnaji pata nahi muje kya ho gaya tha

Jo tumhari baat maan kar maine waha oil dhala

Mujhe laga kriya ko bas thoda sprain hoga

Aur who dance nahi kar payegi

So meh team meh rahunggi

Par yaha toh sab ulta hi hogaya

Maine dekha bhi usse girte but

Don't know why

Uss ek minute meh

Mujhe laga ki marjati toh mere liye sab kuch kitna aasaan

hota

But aisa kuch nahi hua

Woh bach gayi

Aur bachaya bhi kisne

REY ne

Tumne wada kiya tha ki yeh plan kaam karega

Agar pata hota ki Rey

Cruise par hai toh mai yeh sab kabhi nahi karti

Aur darne wali baat toh yeh hai ki

Kriya ne mujhe dekh liya tha

Agar usne sab ke saamne apna muu khol diya toh

Tab mai kya karungi

Shivam

Batao na ki mai kya karu

Iss kriya ke wapas aane se mujse sab chin jayega

Aum mai kisi bhi kimat par aisa nahi hone dunggi

Usse kuch nahi dunggi

Team meh 6th dancer ki jagah

Aur nahi REY

Mai Kriya ko Rey ke paas nahi aane dunggi

Rey mere hai

Mana ki abhi woh mujhe pasand nahi karte

Par karna padhegga

Mai Kriya aur Rey ke beech etni mu create kar dunggi ki

woh dono ek dusre se pyaar nahi nafrat karengge

Aur Shivam jaisa tumne promise kiya tha

Tumhe meri madat karni padhegi

Sharon looked at Rey in shock, who was himself in shock


Sharon (pov)

Taani

Yeh sab taani ne kiya

Aur Shivam

Shivam ke kehene par

Aur rey

Rey kyu

Kriya aur Rey ko alag

Kriya Taani ki wajah se sea meh girri

Swayam ki behen aise hogi meh soch bhi nahi sakti

Swayam , jab usse pata chalega toh who kaise react

karega


Rey was so confussed he didn't know what to do

He got the shock of his life


Rey(pov)

Tanni ne kriya ko hurt karne ki koshish ki

Meri wajah se

Rey don't know why started blaming himself, he didn't

know how to react. Sharon kept looking at him, but no

reaction.

He took steps back and stormed out to find Kriya.

He was worried for her, coz it would hard to digest the

fact that her best friends sister tried to hurt her. Come

on hurt seriously


SHE TRIED TO KILL HER DAMMIT


Location: lower deck sitting area


He saw her sitting there and wipping her tears

Rey cursed himself for asking Kriya to leave his room


Rey(pov)

Shayad Kriya tab

Mujhe yahi bolne aayi thi

Reyaansh Singhania

You don't deserve to live dude

Kriya (pov)

Universeji

Mai toh bahut bhadi jhalli hu

Par aap toh muhje eshara de hi sakte the na

Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi hai ki Rey

Kitna hurt hue hongge

Kitna dardh hua hogga unhe

Aur sab meri wajah se

I hate myself


Location: Taani's room


Taani: Shivam aage ka kya plan hai


Sharon who stood shocked outside the door now had

recovered the shock mode but now she was in state of

being able to give don't know how mant volts of shock to

Taani.

She opened the door with a bang and dashed in

Sh: Aage ka plan meh batati hu

Taani seing her jumped back in shock

Ta: Sharon bhabi

Woh kya hai na

Meh apne cousin ke se kuch surprise plan discuss kar rahi

thi

Sh: wow had no idea ki Shivam tumhara cousin hai

Amazing na

Ta: nahi woh

Sh: Shup up Taani

Maine aur Rey ne sab sun liya hai

Ta: Rey ne bhi

Sh: And you know what

He is so disgusted that he doesn't want to see your face

Ta: par maine kya kiya

Sh: Oh really

Tumne kya kiya

Yeh apne aapse pooch Taani

You are disgusting

Tum apne fayed eke liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho na

Unbelievably ridiculous

Sharon was about to leave

Ta: Ess meh galat kya

Jo kiya apne pyaar ko pane ke liye

Apni ek pehechan jo banayi thi who bachane ke liye kiya

Aur pyaar aur jung meh sab jayaz hai

Sharon's furry was over the top now

Especially now that it was her sister that was hurt

K Ya though Sharon had not accepted all of it

But somewhere

In the depths of her heart she, the process of

acceptance and already initiated and was taking up pace

She turned towards Taani with rage in her eyes, she

walked towards her

SLAP

The room echoed with the noise of the slap

Sharon was in tears and shouted in a shaking voice

Sharon: SHE COULD HAVE DIED ''.

MY SISTER COULD HAVE DIED''''''''.


Location: Outside lower deck sitting area


Kriya was in her thought when a drop of single lonely tear

with no other to accompany emerged from the conner of

her left eye and slowly made its way cleansing the path

over the soft checks ant then her chin and waiting to

decend to a safe place .


This was probably the last tear drop left after crying

her endless tears.

It fell, the tear fell but this time not down on the teak

would noe in the sea in soft cozy hand.


She felt someone closing up from behind and hand that

tightly but gently pulled her into his embrace.


She didn't have to turn back to know that it was him.

Kriya tried to act normal but in vain

Kr: Kya hua Rey

Rey: sorry

Kr: kis liye

Rey: Mere behaviour ke kiye

Kr: Nahi rey I understand maine jo aapke sath kiya uske

baad mujh par trust karna mushkil hai

Rey was shocked at Kriya's words.

Rey turned her towards himself and looked in her eyes

Rey: kriya tum yeh kya'''..

Kr: Kya aap mujh par trust karte hai

Rey: ha kriya.ma''

Kr: jhoot plz sach bolo

Rey fumbled but said coz he knew in a relationship

honesty was important

Rey: well kriya listen

I trust you but not in way that I can share my feeling

completely

Mujhe pata hai tumhe bura lagega

Par kriya give me some time'''.

A tiny smile crept up kriya's face

Kr: I will make u trust me again

Rey smiled back , even thought it was an unexpected

reply but it was the most pleasing thing to hear

Kr: Thank you

Rey: for what

Kr: for being honest

( turn on your speakers guys)

She stepped forward and hugged him tightly, tucking her

head in the crook of his neck.

He looked at her with all love. He wondered how

adorable can she be.

Looking at her now his mind played abhi mujme kahi

And as if it reached her heart she also swayed along

with him gently


Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
( kissed her head over her hair gently)

Yaa ro loo'n :'( zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi

Ho.. dhoop mein jalte huey tann ko, chhaya perh ki mill gayee
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise, phuslaane se phir khill gayee
Kuchh aisa hi abb mehsoos dil ko ho rahaa hai
Barso'n ke puraane zakhm pe marham laga saa hai
Kuch ehsaar hai, iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoo'n yaa jee loon zaraa

Dor se tooti patang jaisi, thi ye zindagani meri
Aaj ho kal ho mera naa ho
Har din thi kahani meri
Ik bandhan naya peechhe se abb mujhko bulaaye
Aane waley kal ki kyun fikar mujhko sata jaaye
Ik aisi chubhan iss lamhe me hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera aa
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoo'n ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoo'n ya jee loon zara

Here romance , there fight both were being witnessed by

two silent viewer.


Here true feelings were exposed there the criminal.

Okiii guys finally chapter over
hope u like it
Do give lamba comments for the chapter and also don't forget to like as well
( Demand 70 likes this time)
Okii luv u guys
Chapter 13: Blue Heaven
( sorry guys while writing i swaped the chapters)
Love u loads
with hugs🤗



Awesome update loved it
Waiting 4 nxt one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
huh! read it all!
at d 9th ch i cudnt believe wat i felt! i cudnt believe i was crying 😭 nd that to bahut zyada! i cant just express mah feelings!

der is no need to say that i luv dis ff! its like stating d obvious! nd i love d part where taani's behaviour is disclosed! i really want that bcs i hate her like hell! 😈
really i am soo into dis ff i cant even get myself out of it! just love it to d heights! pls pm me pls pls!
nd pleaseee pleaseee pretty pweesh update every day! nd that too would be like waiting for a year to know the story! pweeesh ?? update soon! will be waiting! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

OMG, i loved the update..

Taani ki bachi, uski toh mai🤬

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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Amazing Updatew Shona.

Loved it a lot.
This wasa fab part.
Kitna acha tha.
Finbally all came to know the truth.
And Kriyaansh moments were cute.
Thankls for pm.
Nice song in bg.

Updte soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
amazing update so sweet and yeah taanis now gone come on sharon kill taani
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just WOW part 👏...
Rey and Sharon ne sab kuch sun liya 😃...
Sharon slaped Tanni 😎...
She deserved it 😡...
How could she think to KILL Kria or even harm her 😡...
Kriyansh scene was cute 😳...
Kria said She would make Rey trust her again 😃...
Update soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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