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tata_tata

@tata_tata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Poor little babies... "you are here"!! quite like... i still cant believe it... i am saying it again, but how can professional story writers not see the need to add a few moments of relief/disbelief at the eventful last few weeks.. making it evident that it was a stop gap till BS returned from movie shooting!! unprofessional!!

As for Anjali and the kolkatta/lucknow confusion.. how did i miss that??? clearly we dont pay enough attention to the words of the snake-wa.. no wonder villians get away with so much.. they dont matter enough 😆

I'll wait for the next update to see what Anji does to settle her doubts.. to see what NK and his cop friend do to the snake-wa.. and so much more about the cop whom you have hidden from us for so long!!

Cheers!

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Aww, the Arhi moment was adorable. He fixed the stars back and he comforted and reassured her. Finally some comfort and relief for two people who have gone through so much. Loved it! <3

Oh and Anjali has a brain in your story. Yay for that! Looking forward to read what you have in store next. Btw, the blog looks really nice. :)

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desisoaps05

@desisoaps05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Love the story! And how Anjali has the brains to figure things out!! :)

Can I have the blog link? I would love to continue reading the story.

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Yay! A smart Anjali! Also, the update was short and sweet. Very nice. 😊

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Krani

@Krani

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Alright, so finally got around to catching up to your updates, and boy am I glad I did! That was beautifully done. The fact that I read the past 3 updates back-to-back, I can tell you that each part flowed so smoothly into the other, that it seemed that you never took a break. The emotions were high, and i felt I was getting drowned in them, it felt like I was khushi and I could feel her exhaustion, her relief, her pain, her happiness, her everythign as she stared at Arnav and realised that he was here. He was finally here.

And what I loved even more was how you brought about that tiny...trigger which made her realise this. The bed. Their bed.

I mean usually in life, it's often something small, something very meaningless that acts like a great trigger. And for her it was the bed, it was the room where she had spent such a great amount of time without her Arnavji.

I also understand the hesitancy coming from Khushi and the guilt from Arnav. They did not really resolve the problems of the past. However I am really liking how you are progressing with this.

Wish the creatives would read this, because you have taken the element of ASR's character, and managed to make him repent for what he did without making him look OTT.

Great work! :)

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! THIS IS WHAT SHOULD'VE HAPPENED! Amazing!!!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#767

where was this beautiful piece lost till now? God! I wish I'd found this earlier!
nevermind, its absolutely brilliant, you made me cry in the part where khushi confessed her love for arnav, how she would die if he does because their hearts beat together! thay was so very beautiful
please add me to your pm list
cheers
Sonia

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Hey Rae,

Firstly, Sorry for the late comment, Will now be checking my PM's on the weekends, I get over addictd to IF and Ramadhan as well! ..😛

Back to the update, It was fabulous!

I just remembered Anjali doesn't know the truth about Shyaamu!? 😲 Oh no, Poor Anji! :( Super scared at her reaction when she'll find out the truth :( Aww! Great she clocked on though, Detective Anji! 😃

Awww! Awww! Awww! The Arhi bit<3 <3 How i missed Arhi! ...😳

Please update soon! Your a phenominal writer and thanks for the PM! 🤗

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#769

hey,

i totally am in love with this story, love the way u write, and u just goo deep into Arnav and Khushi and then bring out the best in them, totally awesome..

update soon!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#770

This one got plagiarized!? What the!? Who dares?? I hope its sorted out now Rae..

The update was as usual FAB! And I love that your Anjali catches her husband's lies and does not forgo them as a minor discrepancy to never remember again! :)

The ArHi portion was super fantabulously brilliant! I almost had tears when I read the end bit. Well done man! :)