The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#271

ummm u didn't pm me...😔

very nyc update...

ooo on lift both r stuck...

hope some romance ...

waiting fr next part...

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

what???? over already

i loved the elevator meeting plus the rain and no electricity!!!!

i am glad arnav is comforting her

i wonder what will happen next

and i read this before getting a pm...that's a first

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

i haven't received PMs for this one or the updates in true colors.. did you stop sending them?

about the update.. it is fabulous.. both alone in the lift.. it is late.. and she is terrified of dark.. wow...

i like the story a lot..

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

ahhh that what i call romantic...wonderful!

i wish cvs show sumthing of this kind in this show...it would be so exciting to watch!:)

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

This is good.

Coming to read this after True colors - Really helps. So, whenever I receive a PM from you, I read this second. My reason is logical na?

Lift romance! That was so cool. I loved his care - When she placed her foot to stop the lift or when he was talking something to avoid her panic! :)

Thanks for the pm dear!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

awesome update loved it so cute but why stop there that was so bad loved how she is crushing on him so cute and the are stuck in an elevator together first hug very cute thanks for the pm

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Nice one. Arnav is very caring! Thks for the pm and awaiting further updates.

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

amazing update - the last part specially ahem nice

sorry i completely forgot to comment on the previous update

i'll make sure i comment now on all the updates next time

both are equally nice

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

woah amazing update

me feel like singing

hum tum ek lift me band ho aur light chali jaye😍🤣

awesome update rima

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-SI-

@-SI-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

OMG I read all 6 chapters at once and I am so in love with this... wow, Rima this is brilliant...Can't wait for the next chapter... I have to start reading your true colors tonight.. Aw, thank you Rima...