ArHi OS:The ending they never had... - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
beautiful...you are a brilliant writter
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Beautiful.
I just loved the way those two scenes you described...too different yet so similar, in one she was suffering and in the other he suffered, but ultimately they both suffered both the time...
Love ur work!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
awww...thats beautiful..but so sad...my heart aches for them
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
I just Loved the Banner... 😛😆
It was Awesome n touchy😭... Felt so bad for them
Very well written...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Not a word spoken..yet evry feeling got cnveyed..
They drifted in the vacuum between them like wind whispering the happy ending they never had...--it brought me to tears..
d os has such a melancholy air to it..dats so haunting, pressing, pushing..
d two hand holding scenes..such a cntrast..bt brings a sense of doom n despair..
he left her hand d first tym..dis tym its her hand whch left his..
"She was the god he didn't believe in. She was the hope that got him through the darkest days. She was the tear that now rolled on his cheeks."--gave a feeling of loss in a weird way..ah,u broke my heart Ly..
bt i wont cmplain..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
That was absolutely mind blowing!!!

👏👏👏👏👏

I just can't explain how brilliant this OS is!

Absolutely heart breaking, and I've been feeling really emotional these days and this OS really got me! I had tears in my eyes after reading this!

Absolutely beautiful!!!

You are an amazing writer! I totally loved it! Well done 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
as always so emotional and beautiful and heart felt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
You make the tears roll from my eyes without much effort.
It was beautiful how you ended both the scenes with the same line. I love how that is so unique in your OS-s.
My heart just broke while reading this OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Your writing is like poetry: poignantly beautiful! :)
Loved this OS. *sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
it was beautiful...😊

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