ArHi OS:The ending they never had...

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

beautiful...you are a brilliant writter

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Beautiful.

I just loved the way those two scenes you described...too different yet so similar, in one she was suffering and in the other he suffered, but ultimately they both suffered both the time...

Love ur work!!

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

awww...thats beautiful..but so sad...my heart aches for them

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

I just Loved the Banner... 😛😆

It was Awesome n touchy😭... Felt so bad for them

Very well written...

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Not a word spoken..yet evry feeling got cnveyed..
They drifted in the vacuum between them like wind whispering the happy ending they never had...--it brought me to tears..
d os has such a melancholy air to it..dats so haunting, pressing, pushing..
d two hand holding scenes..such a cntrast..bt brings a sense of doom n despair..
he left her hand d first tym..dis tym its her hand whch left his..
"She was the god he didn't believe in. She was the hope that got him through the darkest days. She was the tear that now rolled on his cheeks."--gave a feeling of loss in a weird way..ah,u broke my heart Ly..
bt i wont cmplain..