ArHi OS:The ending they never had...

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Read it thrice... Its so beautiful... Hope you continue this...😊

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow.. Wonderful.. 1st her pain of him going away from her and then his pain of her going away from him.. Absolutely fabulous. .

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Riya Dutta

@RiyaDutta

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

WOW...This is beautiful👏👏👏

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This tugged at my heartstrings. It was so beautifully written. The pang of the emotions running through Arnav palpable. Lovely contrast between the airport scene and the hospital one!

This one line stood out to me the most! -

She was the god he didn't believe in!

Lovely OS! Do you intend a continuation?

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Amazing one.! It was beautiful the way you wrote two completely different scenes and emphasized how their love is so different yet so similar to each others...always yearning for that happy ending.!
Thanks for the pm..or else would've missed this one..somehow i've become a fan of sad ones... :P

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

This was so beautiful lyraa..!!

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow hun

that was so beautiful👏 n painful😭

lovedd it😃

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ipkkndholic

@ipkkndholic

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow ! That was beautifully written.. sad but the emotions were portrayed beautifully... I really hope they don't have to go through this.. but somewhere I feel ASR should regret as much as he regrets in this...saddistic me..