]OMG I ALMOST HAD A HEART ATTACK YAAR! I started this fanfiction last night and this morning I almost had a mini heart attack, who cares if I have a test tomorrow this is WAY MORE INTERESTING! :)
Thank you fOr writing such an amazing story, the familial love, the chemistry, the future of two of my all time favorite couple has brought a smile to my face :) this is the first fanfiction that I read by you and it is SO BEAUTIFUL! you got everything right in this story: the chemistry, the character development, the conflict.
It doesn't seem like a fictional family to me at all, but rather people that I have known fOr a long time, people whose lives I am invested in! To make the reader feel as if she has a connection with her characters iS what differentiates a good writer from an AMAZING one! I also love Akshay and Priyanka's story because he seems like one of the tortured angst filled heroes that I have always loved. []Ok that's the end of my fangirling and now I wil go back to the story :)
That was the end...tears... ;(...that was Such a beautiful story. Even the suhaag raat was special, especially because of the way their wedding was used as a flashback to create more emotions in this scene. You could tell that it was such a special night, not because they waited for so long for this night to happen... Finally... But for them their love was made stronger because of their family.
Ayaan is his father's son, he has the passion, the dedication, the love that Arnav has fOr Khushi. I
also love that Anjali has risen as did Akshay like a Phoenix rising from the ashes, more glorious
than ever before. It woul be wonderful to get a husband like Ayaan and to have a family like his.
Thank you again for sharing such amazing stories with us, I really appreciate it :D
Also if and when you feel comfortable in letting me know ur blog info that would be AMAZING! While this is just the beginning of my love affair with your stories, I know I will be with you fOrever and always support and appreciate such works of art
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