..A Caged Life.. :: NOTE Pg 7.. 26/08

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!!.. A Caged Life..!!


NOTE :: Story written for mature reader's... reader's discretion advised


Prologue


Falling back on the bed she closed her eyes as silent tears made their way out... cut and bite marks were clearly visible on her naked body as she lay their controlling her breathing... slowly opening her eyes she looked over at the figure standing by the window smoking... it was one of those evenings again..


Standing with great difficulty she covered herself with the bed sheet n quietly made her way to the bathroom... once inside she cld no longer control her tears and bust out crying... it wasn't the first time tht she had been raped by her own husband... rape yes tht's wat it was no love no pleasure just plain brutal sex to satisfy his male ego as and wen he wanted...


She winched in pain as the cold water touched her bruised body... her body burned n ached bcoz of his constant physical torture... ther wer deep cut n burn marks all over her body... she remember the day wen all this started...


"Riddhima kitna time lagega... jaldi bahar aa is ladki ne mera ro roke dimak kharab kar rakha hai" the sudden loud bang on the door broke her trance n she heard a small child crying loudly... n instantly realization hit her as she rem her 18 month old daughter who was now crying bitterly... fearing tht he might hurt her angel in anger she quickly got dressed n came out...


Running to the baby's cot kept in the corner of their room she saw her angel crying uncontrollably while he sat ther on the bed watching TV n once again her eyes got moist seeing her... holding her in her arms she moved out of their room to the kitchen to make milk for the baby...


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!!..Quote..!!


"No more truth. Bells ring no more in me. I am all alone singly. Lonely rests my head. O my God! I am dead."
- Jose Garcia Villa


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P.S.S.S :: Pls read the Author's Note Below m sure it won't take u mre thn a few min's :)
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Index

Prologue :: Page 1

Chapter 1 :: Page 5
Edited by crazy_4_karan - 13 years ago
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Author's Note

Hello everyone, for all the new member's of IF m Deepa, have been an IF member for quite sometime now... bt bcoz of studies was inactive for the past few months...In Past i have written a few AR fan fictions n One-Shots... in the last few months i had missed IF a lot n now since m on a lil break frm studies i m back on IF with a new story that came in my mind while i was studying one day...

This particular story that I m abt to tell u is a dark love story n different frm anything that i have written ever bfr (i hv always written cute romantic love story)... since this is my first attempt to write a dark story i hope u all forgive me for any error's that are bond to b there...

P.S :: Well I have arnd 250 ppl in my buddy list bt nt all of thm wld b actually reading this story soo i have made a separate A/c zoo anyone of u who wants Pm for this or any other story that i write in future Pls add ..PM.AC.. to ur buddy list :)

P.S.S :: If anyone of u thing that the story is a bit too rough or extreme for IF level pls let me know i will make sure to either alter it a bit or wld well discontinue it...

Here is the List of All My Previous Work

OS Gallery http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1423539

Waiting To Be Love http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1212469

Whisper http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1227324
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Deepa! welcome back! i've read ur prev works nd loved them! can't wait 4 this one! do updt asap :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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intersting Prologue
plz dont make armaan as negative character
thanks for the pm
continue soon
eagerly waiting for ur next update
do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey loved the introduction ... quite different from your earlier stories...loved it ... pls continue soon... want to read more of your beautiful story... pls pm mee if possible ...take care...love aish...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii
welcome bck
me sooo happy
congrats on ur new ff
interesting start
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahaan. Liked the prologue will love to read moreee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Start =)
Waiting for the next Part Deepa =)
Continue soon :D
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Oye!! Yeh Husband Armaan nahi hona chahiye...:( I just so hate that man who ever he is...😡

Coming towards the prologue... It was fabulous!! I am so glad u r back and that too with a bang!!!!

Add me to your pm account as i can't see it???i mean i don't know whats your pm acc id...

Aur haan please isse jaldi jaldi continue karna beech mein mat chor dena pichle ffs ki tarah!😕

Will be waiting to read more...



Continue soon..
Love,
Sameera
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