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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Siva--

Res


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Nice start. On the word marriage, he became grim? Why? Past? Parents or his own broken relationship? Thank you! well lets see

Collided with Kushi? well lets see?

Thanks for the pm. You're welcome. 😃



Originally posted by: nazleef

that was very intriguing!!!



Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: johnangad

pls let khushi not be the wife who died!



AHAH! lets see?



Thanks. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saarah96

i hope that khushi wasn't the wife that died=/

keep up the good work=]



well lets see? Thank you :D

Originally posted by: Crazy_1001

Ohhh! Sounds interesting! Now Im wondering if Khushi is new one or the old one ahahahh maybe both o.o



aahah! <3 thank you! how bizaare? 🤣

Originally posted by: flowers4u

lovely update and congrats for a new ff ...keep on writing...



Thank you!



Thanks

Originally posted by: sunshine23

Ahh, it sounds so good! and man the cliffhanger!...can't wait for you to update again 😃



Thank you! :D 😃 😃

Originally posted by: --Aartzz--

Ohhh sounds amazinggg!!!

You left us there! :(
I demand an update soon!!
Loved it :) Thanks for the pm!!!



ahah! Thank you very much :D

Originally posted by: Crinklez.

You cant just leave it like this, your such a tease.

Oh this is so interesting, cant wait to read more, who was is wife? who is this new girl?



AHAHAHH! Thank you! :D 😃

Originally posted by: Aveiro

Very intriguing loved it :D



Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update jaldi na!? ..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
What strikes me about all of you is the way you lot encourage me. I do feel upset some times and then read your comments. I love ALL OF YOU! now this is a short update, but it needs to go up. I'm sorry for not responding to all of them, its half-past nine here and everyone is giving me dirty looks.

Do let me know what you think 😃

Chapter 2 : The light.




"Are you blind or something?" He asked the flying menace, but his breathing stopped, his molten brown met sparking greys, the individual specs of blue seemed to blend in with her pupils, the iris of her eyes not defined but melted into a mesh of dark blue. The smooth breeze that was flowing undisturbed was now circling them, her ebony hair flowing with the gentle wind. Arnav slowly began to appreciate her features, taking in the radiance of her skin, the sheen to her hair, the upturned lips.




And the eyes.




His anger melted away, like ice to a flame.




But those words "I could ask you the same thing" Her voice was sweet, soft but splintered, the cold shards piercing through that bubble of attraction, bringing him back to the real world, he swore at himself, angry at his thoughts, with his uncontrollable hormones.




She side stepped him and walked away, her pale pink dupatta skimming body, her anklets signalling her exit.




He strode away, his footsteps harsh, beating the soft ground beneath him his shoes as he walked towards the food-stand, hoping that a cool soft drink would suddenly soothe his parched throat.




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An hour had gone by and Arnav spied through the whole fair, looking for his sister when he saw her again.




And if it wasn't for the first time, Arnav wouldn't be able to tamp down that desire that suddenly coursed through his veins, wouldn't be able to pass off that rapid beats of his heart as a way to release excessive body heat. But one thing he couldn't pass off was the way his eyes suddenly roved down her body, skimming in every detail, painting the picture into the canvas, capturing her with the camera in his eyes but one thing was odd.




Throughout her conversation with his sister not once did she look at her, she was looking above her, behind her but never at her.




Was something wrong with his sister? Why wasn't she looking at her?




He began to take angry steps towards the pair, when he heard her tinkling laugh.




Arnav was not a die-hard romantic, even with his first wife but when he heard her soft giggles the wind around him lifted to push itself through his hair, his eyes closed breathing in her laugh, drinking in that tinkle.




"Oh Anjali you know how to make a woman laugh" Her voice sweeter then honey. He blankly recalled her late wife's voice, it sounded coarse, un-refined in comparison to the suppleness o




"You flatter me Khushi," His sister returned.




Khushi.




That was her name.




And what a beautiful name it was.




He reluctantly opened his eyes, gazing softly at the woman called Khushi, appraising her lithe body encased in the pale pink, her tucked in waste the gaping hole at the back revealing more of that oh-so-smooth looking skin.




'Stop it Raizada' He warned.




He looked at her again, and suddenly the penny dropped.




She was blind.




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I would like to say this FF is most dear to my heart, my Nani was blind and my nanaabu wasn't he loved and accepted her just the way she was. I believe that is real love. To accept, understand and only give in return is real love.


So how was it? Do let me know! 😃 If you would like to be added on my PM list heres the account.


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There we go :D


-Aashifa

PLEASE DO NOT COPY UPDATES TO OTHER SITES, THIS UPDATE IS MEANT EXCLUSIVELY FOR INDIA FORUMS MEMBERS
Edited by curledup - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Res

*EDITED*

Aashifah, You legend! I LOVED it.

What a beautiful twist, Khushi's blind<3 Aww so cute!

Arnav. Your words cut like ice.. Ice cuts?! LOL snow, hailstones, anything! 😆

Beautiful update, It's adorable<3 Fantastic 🥳

Do update soon and thanks for the PM! (:

Love it, Love it, Love it.

Seriously? How do you write so good.. 😳
Edited by -JollyJabeen- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
That was a lovely update! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
ohhh!! Oh she is the new one!
The "cant you see" comment was in bad taste on his part though LOL

But this seems like such a interesting read!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
amazing
wonder how he found out thats shes blind
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so he had a wife...n she is blind...INTERESTING...ur stories are alwez damn awesome...such an effective storyline
hats off to u...
tthnx for PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Ohmygawd! Aashifa I never said this to you before but I love you! Sorry if your creeped out ;)


The revealing of Khushi's blindness made me gasp! But the funny thing is that I didn't feel sad about it! I too feel that true and pure love happens from the heart! Our vision and body sometimes just happens to hinder it with physical attraction or lust!


I am seriously excited about this update because I would love to read of how Arnav and Khushi build up their love and relationship!


Continue soon :)

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