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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

oh woow!
amazing update!!

amans reaction was human, what he did was wrong, he shud have been more supporting and mature OR mahek shud have gone and talked to him but she is right in her own plc, she felt betrayed!!!

khushi and arnav r too cute!
stubborn and filled with ego :P

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Ultimatewishes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Wonderful Update

Loved how you told Maheks story ...it was sad yet unique and explained alot..

I think Amans reaction was alien ...especially being a boy and If she was 16 he was 2 years older and would have been 18...I don't think an 18 year boy would have been so scared but I hope everything is sorted between them :)

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Liked the way Mahek behaved. She seems to be an extremely matured girl! Fact that her mother undergoing Alzheimer's made her grow up along with the rejection by the person who sired her, cant call him dad!!

Aman's quite understandable, infact a normal, typical teenager hewas. Mahek was all grown up at that time!

Wonder what is Anjali upto??

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livy

@livy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

that was a great update. thanks for the pm. i can totally relate to this story as my mother is going through this. she is in the early stages. she remembers family right now, but she has no clue about anything else.

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Superb chapter . Infact Mahek's story was very well written . instead of the same old teenage love gone wrong , this was so refreshing !!!!! Aman's reaction was typical of a teenage boy when faced with such situation !!! Seriously 🤣 about the bromance between Arnav and Aman ...

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Superb chapter!

Mahek's past was brilliantly written...and Aman you really can't blame him...Glad that they have sorted out their differences...

Continue soon!

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9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

WOW!!!
I am so glad I came upon this gem!!
First off, though I've come across stories based on "office romance between Arhi" this one is really different. I love how you incorporate other characters into this so well. It's not just Arnav and Khushi but their friends as well. Also, I love the pace of this..I really dislike it when somehow Arnav and Khushi fall in love within the second chapter. It happens slowly, and I really like how you are showcasing that!
I just love Khushi!! She's so not afraid of Arnav! I love how she always catches him when he's embarrassed, and she always asks the right questions! (Ha I love how he has been ignoring all of them too..answer her Arnav!) She's just so full of life, and she's just so awesome!!! I love the banter between the two, and you describe their lust (LOL) so well!

Arnav, wow is he a douche or what? Still gotta love him though. He will shout at her but then he will save the damsel in distress without a thought. Tease her but act like a 14 year old teenager at the same time. And oh dear the jealousy! I just love it from him hehe.
Samar is so cute! Wonder whats going on between him and Arnav?
Aman is the best, I really enjoy his character.

Wow. The last chapter was great. It was really emotional and it made a lot of sense as to why Mahek was acting that way. And I really just feel so awful for her, hope Aman helps her through this and makes up for those years. ...oh gosh I feel like Im blabbering on

Looking forward to many more chapters!