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enrique305

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Posted: 13 years ago

#661

wow!!!

awesome update

i was waiting 4 it like hell

awesome part

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Beautiful_King

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Posted: 13 years ago

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this aint fair u totally leave me addicted...i rlly wonder how to not read ur wrks again n again...loved waise love is a small wrd...i'm totally addicted seriously...thnk u soo much deetha ye update ke liye i was soo waiting...

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kriyansh19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#663

Loved it ..!
It was very hot n romantic ..!
Awsome work !

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#664

It was Breath-taking update... smoking hot one... d train scene was just ravishing...Rey's apprehension abt train journey + his fight wid swayam+ d secne when kriya came nd boys teased rey was so cute... 😃
I really liked naughty rey ven he said main shaadi se pehle hi honeymoon par agaya...😉
In short ohhh so lovable update...❤️

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Kesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#665

Update fast na...pleash...* babyface *

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Shailja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#666

OMG !!!!HAWT HAWWWTTT !!! DEETHA DARLS LOVE U YR... ITNE SENSOUOS IDEAS KAHAN SE LAATI HO ???? BUT JAHAN SE BHI LAATI HO I LOVE IT TOTALLY... EK DUM KHUSH KARDIYA MUJHE TERE UPDATES SE... YAYYY

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#667

Hey deetha really such a hawt update yaar loved it.plz update asap.

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Rucha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#668

awesome update dear

love kriyaansh always

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#669

its all about tonight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

r: baatcutter!!!!!!!

k: haan rey????

r: how much tym baby????

k: oye mr linecutter aadat dalo iski...im gonna take my own tym...

r: atleast let me in na baby!!!!! mai tera koi help kardoonga...😉

k: rey!!!!!!! haawww!!!!!!! waise kya help karloge??? *sarcastically*

r: u know itne saare dresses try karke thak gayi hogi na...i may help...really i can baby!!!!😉*he spoke slowly against the door sure that she was just beside the door to hear him*

k: rey !!!!!!!! badmash!!!! chup aur wahi khade raho...

r : baby sab mujhe alien ki tarah dekh rahe hai...ye kya corridor mei???

k: rey...isiliye bola washroom mei khade ho jao...

r: nahi!!!!!! *he scowled* yahi theek hun... he said to himself cursing himself for not taking double bedroom suit...

finally she opened...

r: aahhh!!!!!!! finally baby!!!!!!!!!! chalo jaldi its 8:45 and hume brea...k...fff...damn!!!!!!!!!!

he looked her from top to bottom twice...
...

r: baby tumara ye goa dressing style ko seriously lena mujhe pasand nahi aayi...

he said with wide eyes...

k: kyun acha nahi hai????

she said with a pout...rey looked at her face...

maine kuch nahi dekha...kuch nahi...rey hatao uski chehre se nazar...

r: u look...umm...umm...out of the world baby but yaad hai hum yaha...umm...kaam karne aaye the...

k: haan yaad...haww!!!!!!! aapka matlab kya hai ???yahi na ki mai kaam nahi karti????

r: arey aisa nahi hai...umm...hmm/...ok comedown fast for breakfast im waiting...

he said as he rushed out...in the lift ...

r: kriya ki universe ji plzz aap hi meri help karna apni haath apne aapk tak rakhne mei aur mujhe kaam pe concentrate karne do plzzz plzz plzzz..

he was murmering looking up and

when he opened his eyes he saw all looking at him weirdly...he made faces and looked away getting embrassed...

*silent snif* mujhe kyase kya banadiya baatcutter tune...reyaansh singhania THE DUDE banke jee raha tha...aur ab...rey THE fool banadiya...tere peeche kutte ki tarah gumarahi ho...*silent snif* universe ji sab aapki wajah se...aap ke saath saath mujhe bhi fool banane ki kya zaroorat hai...khud fas gaye aur mujhe bhi kheech liya...

he was cursing universe ji when she entered in white dress with pink shoes (:P)

he got lost in her smiling wide lyk a fool...then he came to senses...

chodunga nahi aapko...

he said looking up...

and then looked front at the beauty...correction...his property...

my personal property

he smiled at his thoughts...she sat before him and asked him to give the order while talking to sharon on phone...

sharon aur kriya enemies hi ache the...

baat karo donon aur mai waiter ki kaam karoonga...huh...

he went to the counter ordered food and took the breakfast to their table...

the whole way to the location kriya was just doing chapar chapar with sharon...

mujhse baad mili use aur mujhse jyaada pyaar karne lagi...ladki ko kabhi believe nahi karna chahiye...huh

finally they reached the venue...kriya was still talking when rey pulled the mobile...

rey: sharon yaar kaam karne do teri behan ko kab se chapar chapar kar rahe ho dono...im irritated...

sh: rey...tum apna kaam karo...aur meri kittu se kya kaam karwarahe ho???? usse koi bhi stress diya then ur dead MR. Reyaansh...aur tum yahan kya kar rahe ho kriya ke saath...mobile kittu ko de aur apna kaam karo...😡

r: literally throwed the mobile to kriya and went away shouting...

karlo baat apni...kittu se...

krisha chuckled...after 10 mins they ended their call and kriya went to him...

k: kya karna hai...

r: aap baitiye kittu ji mai karta hun...😡

he said and went away...she followed him...she tried lot but he was still angry...she silently pulled him into a cabin which was supposed to the changing room for boys (built with wood...)

she closed the door...

k: rey plzz meri baat suno...

r: kriya bohut kaam baaki hai...

k: rey par...

r: kriya hato aur jaane do...

he showed her hand and moved front...but she came front and pushed him back to the wall...he balanced himself sticing to the wall and looked up...she moved forward slowly...

mujhe jaana chahiye warna pata nahi ...nahi nahi...not here!!!!!!

he was abt to move when she kissed him hard...banging him into the wood...he caught her for balance and the sudden attack...she moved her hands on his chest finally making him take the lead in the kiss...he kissed wildly ...finally pulled back...looked at her took her lips again and bit her lower lip...and pulled back...

r: baby plzz let me concentrate on the work ...

he said ans he passed his hand through his hair making it neat and hers too...

they went out and did the work seriously ...really????/ no and then he used to take her glances and some tym pics of her cute expressions...when she was biting the back of pen pouting not able to understand the budget...narrowing eyes when the workers did wrong even after her yelling...biting her lower lip and moving her head to the music of her ipod while checking the designs of the stage etc etc...

( i love those expressions...😳)

finally the day ended ...they were hell tired...rey ordered the food to the room and they ate silently in each others embrace feeding each other and talking all sweet lovey dovey talks...and took rest in each others arms...it was the most beautiful day for them...just them ...o one to tease disturb etc etc...3 days passed with hell lot of tyring wor and finally both brought everything into track...the budgets designs etc etc...

when they were returning they saw a cocktail party taking party ...its been days since they danced...their legs itched on seeing the dance floor...dancer ke saamne dance floor ho aur wo kahi aur...ahh!! its painful...they held each others hands looked at each other grinned and ran to the stage...they pushed all and went to the centre pushing and laoghing all the way...they just moved their head s to the beat...the DJ stopped

DJ: enjoying guys???????waise where the tempo guys rock the floor...and here goes a new fresh track for u ppl...especially the love birds of goa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cheer up.!!!!!!!!!!! yo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

he shouted and played a track...

kriya totally went into trance and moved lyk mad with swinging her head madly...rey looked at her surprised...ppl around her stopped to look at her...she forget abt everyone...she looked at himand circled her hands around his neck...he grinned wide...he clutched her waist and throwed her up she screamed out of fear...he caught her in his arms...she looked at himlaughing and shocked too...he again throwed her up...this ty she shouted loud...all stopped looking at them...

k: rey down!!!!!!!!!!!

she shouted as she reached his arms...

r: haha...kkk baby!!!!!!!!!

he laughed loud and placed her down...they were too lost in each other to notice the eyes on them...they moved lyk mad jumping and swaying to the music looking at each other laughing...soon all too joined with a new energy...suddenly all gasped as chilled water made its way...

yes...rain DJ... ( hamare hstl mei yahi hota hai...they use large pipes for the water and sprinkle...

all breathed hard and gasped tymes as the ice cold water touched their skins..but all were laughing hard and heartily enjoying lyk hell...and these two love birds...as soon as water made its way kriya pulled his shirt and dug her face in his chest gasping when rey embraced her tight both laughing hard...finally after sometime after getting used kriya pulled back but his hands remained circled around her waist...her hands went around his neck...the DJ spotted them and called them on the stage...they galdly grinning wide went o the stage (oops...rey same outfit of blue jacket in goa epi) they danced ther whe the DJ handed them shampain...rey took it and opened it and poured high on the crowd...(u can imagine ri8 i cant explain how) he was handed back to back bottles...he sprinkled 2-3 bottles and the third one he just poured into his mouth leeting half on his body...he totally forgot that they were together ...just forgot what he was dng...he asked another bottle and drank half...when he was full and over as he almost drank the half of the before one and half of this he just held the bottle in left and spread his hands shouting and jumping...she looked at him shocked at the way he just drank the half bottle...she took the bottle from him...he didnt sense that and jumped clapping his hands up cheering the ppl ...she drank the half and called him...he looked at her and then he reaised she had already drank the left half...she spoke something...he went near her to listen and she shouted...

k: i want this more...

r: par...

k: plzz...

r: kk...

he took aother bottle she drank 1/4th when she had more than enough she placed the bottle back in his hands...he just sprikled it on the ppl who were in the rain dance now...they winked at each other and went down to dance...and started dancing but this tym it was totally different as they danced all sticky sticky sensing each other totally lost in senses...finally as the dj ended they headed to their hotel laughing and enjoying themselves chasing as the hotel was at a walkable distance...

when they were entering the room a worker of the hotel who always packed the food and handed him called him...kriya just went in and fell on the bed chanting "dum maro dum "in total drunken state and was moving her head lyk mad...

rey said they dnt need but paid for the food and closed the door and went in...but what he saw was not something he expected...she was totally wet making her dress almost tranparent and she layed there sidewards in a very sexy position and singing song and moving her hand and head...even he was drunk...to be precise more than her ...he just went to her and stood beside the bed...he just traced his hands over thigh...she moaned loud and turned to look at him...as soon as she saw him she gave her sexy smile lost in his mascular body which is wet and his hair making her go crazy...both looked at each other fr sometym...

k: kya dekh rahe ho come...

she pulled him by jacket...he was too weak to balance himself and resulted on her and fell beside...

k: u look sexy...she said as she passed her hand through his hand and kissed his chest...he was taking her image ...she closed her eyes tracing his mascuar body with her lips and taking his manly smell...his eyes were becoming heavy...he pulled her closed and caressed her body with his hands...she moaned in result and bit him on his shoulder...

its the heights of his patience...he just wildly pulled her to him kissing her nape ...she too was in no less state as she took kissed him...they kissed each other competing each other ...this lead to some thing and and ended as they made love finally totally completeing each other and lying naked under the sheets ineach others embrace sleeping...

as the light made its way rey opened his eyes his head paining hard...and once his eyes opened totally he realised how they were and was shocked...he felt the world stopped and a hard rock hitting his head continously...

what if she get s up and comes to know what happened...

he got up...took a cold water bath as tears also accompained the drops...he was shaken to root to face her...he finally opened the door and got rooted...she sat on the bed covering herself with the sheet and knees pulled close.head rested back and looking up...expressionless...he is sure she realised what happened the previous night...

he stood there for some tym...he finally gathered himself and called her name slowly...no reply...

he called thrice again...still no reply...he wanted her to shout beat him but not this...silence was killing him to death...finally breaking down he ran to her and hugged her knees and cried his heart out...finally when she felt the jrk she came back to senses...she looked at him and was confused...

k: rey aap ro kyun rahe ho????

she asked totally tensed and concerned...he looked up and hugged her...

r: sorry kriya...kal raat jo bhhi hua...mai...mai kya bolun...sorry bhi kehne ki layak nahi hun...maine ...mai itna out of control...

k: rey stop it...rey...

she pushed him back ...

k: rey i know kya hua and im fine with it...aakhir ek na ek din hum donon ko ek hona hi tha...aur wo din kal tha...

she said really tensed for him...she never after that day of her confession of past she saw him cry like this...

r": i know kriya mujhe guilty na feel karvwane keliye tum aisa bol rahi ho...

k: rey shut up...im serious...

she knew he is feeling hell guilty.

she went to him and placed her head on his chest...he was feeling so guilty that he felt he now was feared to touch her...

k: hug me dammit...

she scolded him...
he followed her...

k: rey...

r: hmm...

k: rey im really fine...aapko guilty feel karne ki koi jaroorat nahi...i know ek ladki keliye ye bohut imp matter hoti hai aur mai itni easily le rahi hun...but its just becoz i trust u...i believe that u will never leave me alone and betray me...

she looked up innocently...

itna trust???????? maine bhi kabhi itna nahi kiya baatcutter tujhpe...kyun itna pyaar karti ho mujhse??/

he looked at her as a tear escaped and his grip tightened...finally he stood up and spoke...

r: mai lock karke jaa raha hun...breakfast leke aajaunga...aaj kaam cancel karvadeta hun...kk???? tum fresh hojao...

her kissed her forehead and left as she just looked at him smiling heartily...a tear escaped realising the guilt he felt and the pain he felt...he never cried lyk this...but today he feared whether he hurted her...she smiled and recalled the ni8 and blushed on realising how wild their desires were towards each other...she blushed more and went to freshen up...when she came out in her simple frock...she wanted to be herself today...the real kriya...when she stepped out of the washroom she saw him leaning back to wall sitting on the bed ...food all ready on the table and he was just flipping the tv channels...she blushed on seeing him...seeing him just reminded the nights events to her...she went to the dressing table and was dryng her hair and it was when he came out of his thoughts...he looked at her...his angel...smiled wide as she blushed seeing him in the mirror and bent her head down...

he smiled and got up and went to her huging her from back...

"my dear soulmate can u make it fast im hungry..."he said...

she blushed at that...he turned her to him...kissed on her cheek and took the dryer and dried hrr hair...and ruffled her hair and kissed her forehead...he looked her from top to bottom smiled...she hsivered...she was expecting something when he jus went back to her bag...she wasconfused...he came back after two mins o searching and stood before her...she looked at him confused...he pinned the clip which HIS KRIA ...loved to put on...

r: perfect...

he said looking at her...she smiled at him...

he took her to the bed and sat for breakfast...she pulled her legs on couch and leaned onto his chest when his ri8 hand embraced her...

k:rey

r: mmm...

k: aapko mai kyun pasand aayi???? i mean starting mai sirf ek middle class ladki ...

r: shhh...i always wanted a simple girl ...and god sent u...

k: toh ab toh mai waise nahi reh rahi hun...toh ab mai aapko pasand nahi??????

she asked making a babyface...he laughed and pecked her lips...

r: mai sirf tumse pyaar karta hun...tumhare milne ke baad meri qualities nahi teri qualities important hogaye...i love u baby...chahe tum kaise bhi ho...

she smiled...

r: waise kal raat jo bhi hua uske baad bhi tumhe aisa laga?????/ he asked teasing her...

she blushed at the mention of the night...

she sat straight...she was abt to go when he spoke seriously quite dissapointed...

r: u know kriya...kal raat jo bhi hua nashe mei...i dnt remember...

she blushed hard at this...

k: rey!!!!!!!!!!

she punched him and hugged tight...he laughed and hugged her tight totally taking her into his lap as if stealing her from world...they enjoyed the whole day with each other ...just each other...at night on the bed...

both were sleeping on their own sides...finally she called...

k: rey...

r: hmm...bolo baby...he turned to her...she was too close and slipped into his arms as soon as he turned...

k: wo...

he waited she was struggling to say...he lifted her chin up...

r: kya hai baby...let it out...

k: i want u...

she let out closing her eyes...he was shocked...

r: baby did u realise what ur talking???

she opened her eyes looked down...

k: rey...im complete now...u completed me yesterday...but i wanna feel it...i wanna feel the completeness...she let it out...

its not that he was not dying to feel that completed feeling...but he was feared thinking abt her reaction...

r: baby are u sure...i dnt want u to reget later...

k: rey shayad ab na bolne se baad mei regret karoongi...u will be always with me na??

r: ofcourse baby...

k: then??????

rey sighed...he can anymore...he too wanna feel that pleasure...he finally gave up pulling her into embrace...unlike last night she was too shy to take the charge...and he took the charge and and made love with her ...

the last four days were just a dream for them...they worked throughout the morning and releaved their stress making love with each other...they never got enough of the other...finally they headed back to mumbai all blushy blushy and with a new closeness...

the gang noticed a different closeness b/w them...

sw: sharon dnt u think ye dono kuch jyaada hi close hai...

ne: what u meaning swayam...

neha asked as everyone were in the reharsal hall and rey and kriya were just working on some file laughing and lost in their own world...

sh: swayam is ri8 guys...dnt u see some different closeness b/w them???????/

one day boys blocekd rey and girls kriya...

sw: chal kya raha hai???????/

k: kya chal raha hai????????

ne: tumhare aur rey ke beech...

r: u kno it guys...

nil: we know ur a couple but tum donon ke beech kuch alag closeness hai...

vish: haa ...wo bhi jab se goa se aaye tab se...

(guys boys and girls in respective locker rooms...and just imagine the dialouges for their partners...i mean if wrote sharon then it means sharon asking kriya nd the same qsn asked by swayam to rey)

k: aisa kuch nahi hai guys...

sh: kuch toh ahi...

r: what do u mean hum saath nahi reh sakte...u wanna see us away from each other???/ rey asked (nautanki😛)

sw: arey maine aisa kab bola chal chod chod...class jaana hai...

k: tum log jao rey aur mujhe rdx sir se milna hai sir ne bulaya...

gang: kk...bye...

kriyaansh rushed to fire exit texting to each other and banged into each other...as soon as they realised whom they banged into rey pulled her into fireexit and said her what the boys asked...kriya too said the same ...they burst out laughing ...rey suddenly got lost in her...

he went to her and took her in his arms...she blushed and looked down...he kissed her cheeks and took her lips ...

they came down as legs gave up sat on the stairs and kissed passionately ...

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sh: kuch nahi unke beech...she said mockingly at swayam

sw: arrey toh mujhe laga tha aisa...he pouted...

sh: teri wajah se i doubted my kittu...

she faked anger

sw: sorry...

he ran behind her manaofying her...while the gang some where busy romancing some fighting and some looking here and there and talking...

END

wait for the epilouge...😛

kahani abhi baaki hai mere doston😉

stay tuned😆

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#670

EPILOUGE

k: rey aap aise kaise kar sakte ho???

r: kriya ...kaise kar sakta hun matlab????

k: aap mujhe chod ke kaise jaa sakte ho rey???

r: c'mon kriya its not a big deal...

k: big deal??????what do u mean by it???? u promised me rey ki aap mujhe chod ke kabhi nahi jayenge yaad hai???

r: ohhh god!!!!!!!! are u serious kriya???? *he gave a short laugh*

k: serious matlab????? rey u promised me...😡

r: ohh ...*phew* he looked at all ...

she was sitting in the middle of reharsal hall on the stool ...he in front of her and all the gang and rdx and nicole around them...h e looked at rdx...

rdx throwed his hands up saying "i m out of this "

he took a long breath nd bent to her...and looked around...all looked away as if couting or checking something on the wall...

r: baby!!!!!

all looked at him with expression... "ooo" :O

rey gave a uncomfortable smile and called

r: kriya...

all looked away...

r: kriya ...areu serious??? mai toh sponcers se baat karne jaa raha hun tum ho ki aise bol rahi ho jaise mai tumhe hamesha keliye chod ke jaa raha hun...u know na baby i cant...

all again looked at him...rey now glared and soon they looked away...

sw: sharon waha wall pe kuch laga hua haina???😆

r: baby plzz...zid mat karo...

k: rey ..mujhe bhi aana hai...u know i always wanted to go to that restaurant...

r: baby...mai leke jaunga na...specially leke jauna...aaj nahi baby...

k: nahi rey mujhe aana hai...

r: SHUT UP KRIYA!!!! mai itna mana raha hun fir bhi apni hi zid mai padi ho???

all were shocked he never shouted at her...all went to them...kriya sat with a pout fuming and water ready to make its way out of her eyes...

sh: rey...aane do use akele hi toh jaa rahe ho...

r:u better dnt come in this sharon...itna laad pyaar deke bigada hai tumlogon ne ise...😡

sw: rey...dude ho kya gaya hai tujhe?? wo AGS hai she can come too...

r: ohh stop it swayam...tu kuch nahi jaanta...ye subah se weak feel kar rahi hai aur mai use ghumata rahun??she needs rest yar...

all: weak??????

sw: kya hua kriya????*tensed*

sh: ha kriya subah se hai toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya????/ maa papa ko bhi nahi???

r: sharon ye kabhi kuch seedha karti hai jo aaj karegi...hamesha khud ki man maani...and tum...tum aaj poora din koi kaam nahi karegi aur hamesha sharon ya swayam ke saath rahogi...got it...😡

kriya looked away...

r: got it?????

k: mujhe kisike beech kabab mai haadi nahi ban na...

r: *he was fuming now...* *sigh* sharon...swayam aaj keliye meri kriya ko tum logon ke beech haddi ban ne ki permission doge??? *sarcstically*

sw: c'mon dude she is my bestie...meri jaan hai...tu jaa i willl take care of her...

sh: aur meri behan hai...we willl take care rey...hum sab haina...tum jao...tension mat lo...

r: thanks guys...he said and swayam gave a side hug...

r: suna tumne...tum inke saath hi rahogi...😡

he said and left...

a tear rolled her cheeks...all looked at her...they cant control her now...if they disturb she may burst out...they looked at the door where rey is leaving...but rey stopped at the door...sighed...he came back ot her and hugged her...

r: baby plzz...itni choti baat ko itna seriously mat lo...i promise mai tumhe leke jaunga...plzzz ...smile for me na...

he pulled back...she pouted and looked away...

he cupped her face...and wiped the tear...

he held his ears...

r: acha sorry!!!!!!!!!!! plzzz...

she looked at him and smiled...she smiled wide and kissed her forehead...

r: apna khyaal rakhna...i will be back soon...

she nodded ...he left she called him/...

r: haa...

k: car dheere chalao...aaj swayam hai mera saath...dhyaan se...

rey smiled and nodded his head and left...

kriya was took her bag and and left ...the whole gang followed her...rdx and nicole smiled and left...

after walking some disstance she sensed all were following she turned back...gave a fake smile and turned around and walked...still they followed...

inko kya hua??? mera peecha kyun kar rahe hai...aur shar and swayam meri bodygaurds ki tarah kyun chal rahe hai...

the gang chuckled but followed...she enters girls loker room...boys turned around and stood at the door just lyk door keepers folding their hands.girls followed her...as kriya went to wash her face boys went to the other side of corridor and stood chatting and giggling thinking kriyas reaction...

kriya was washed her face and after freshening up she went out...soon boys joined the girls...she walked half but stopped in middle...she turned back hands on her hip and looked at them...all smiled at her...

k: kya kar rahe ho???

sw: Mr.Reyaansh Singhania ki orders mam...hume apni love life ke saath jeena bhi hai...kyun sharon wont u miss me if i die???

sh: ofcourse...

k: toh tum log mera peecha kyun kar rahe ho??? s

she asked girls...

sh: aap rey se kam thodi hai...inki safety keliye hum...

k: arrrghhh!!!!!rey!!!!!!!!! kaha fasa diya????

she turned and walked...all chuckled and followed her.she got a call from rdx so she went to office...nicole and some woman was sitting there...

rdx and nicole chuckled as the gang followed kriya and kriya was fuming...

k: rdx plzz...tell them to go...i m gonna kill them...

rdx: rey ki orders mam!!!!!!!

k::O

lady: rey?? uski orders????

all then noticed her...

rdx bit his lip...

sharon just flung upon her...

sh: priya aunty!!!!!!!!!! kaise ho aap?????itne dinon ke baad...

pr: arey chodo toh shar...i m fine tum kaisi ho???

all were confused...

sh: aap baat mat kijiye...2 saal hue aapke US gaye hue aur aapne ek baar bhi call nahi kiya...aur uncle bhi...katti hun aapse aur uncle se aur aap aapke bete ko nahi milsakte...

pr: arey aise kaise ...

sh: bas...maine kehdiya...ab manao mujhe tab jaake aap apne bete ko manao...

pr: arey sorry ...itna busy thi ki...

sh: bete ko aur mujhe bhool gayi???aapko pata hai kya kya hogaya in do saalon mei????

pr: kya hua shar...tum itni low???? kya hua beta????

she asked caressing her hair...

sh: beta bulane se maaf nahi karoongi...kal poori sunday mere saath bitao...

sh: waise in sab se milo...guys ye hai rey ki mom.aunty ye swayam , neha...etc...aur ye kriya...meri behan...

pr: matlab smriti??????/

sharn nodded...she caressed kriya's hair...

sh: aur aapki...

kriya glared at her...

pr: meri???

sh: ...

pr: waise tum log kya bol rahe the???? rey ki orders???kaisi ordrs???

nicole: kriya ki dhyaan rakhne ka...

kriya glared at her...nicole giggled...priya looked at her...kriya was looking down biting her lips...

pr: toh rey tumhe pasand karta hai???? uski baatcutter??????

kriya was shocked...but soon she felt sick...she ran to girls locker room and puked twice ...she came out ...

all were asking qsns when she everything blanked out and she fell down.

swayam quickly lifted her in arms and all rushed to the hospital...sharon informed her mom and dad...they too came in no tym...

ne: babu u calling rey and telling him...

sh: no!!!!!!!!! he is at other end of city...pagalon ki tarah chalayega gaadi...

sw: yeah...khud ki dhyaan nahi rehti...agar ye suna na ki kriya hsptl mei ..toh paagal hojayega...

ri: toh kya kare???

sh: just wait guys.doctor ko toh aane do...if its serious we will inform him...

all agreed.soon the doctor came out...

sh: doc tor wo kriya...

doc: rukhiye rukhiye...pehle inki pati ko bulayiye...

sw: pati...i...

doc: acha yaha nahi hai...tohkk..ye gud nws aap hi unhe bol dijiyega...unki wife pregnant hai...

all got a big blow!!!!!!!!!!

all were hell shocked...they never thought that it would be reys child and were shocked thinking whose child is that baby...

sh: i think rey ko bol dena chahiye...

sw: haan .mai ...mai abhi bolta hun...

sw: hello rey.

r: haa dude bol...kriya kaisi hai???

sw: yaar wo...

r: kya hua swayam...

sw: wo...

r: swayam bol kya hua???

sw: tu pehle idhar aa sab ache se batata hun...

r: kaha?????

sw: city hospital...

r: hospital???????😲 kya hua kriya ko?????/

sw: rey she is fine tu bas jaldi aa...

r: abhi...abhi aa raha hun...

he came running...shocked on seeing his mom too...the gang ,her family...even his dad was present...

(priya called ranvijay as only he could control rey in extreme situations...)

he was shaken...he went to swayam and asked...

r: kya hua kriya ko??

sh: rey actually wo...wo..

rey was restless...he saw nurse coming so he asked her;...

r: nurse...kriya...meri kriya...kya hua use??

nurse: arey aap itne tnsion mei kyun hai??? good ews hai...ur wife is pregnant...mai abhi doctor ko bulati hun...check up karni hai unki...

rey fell on his knees shocked ...all gathered him...swayam pulled him up...

sw: rey i know how ur feeling...par wo bacha...

r: bacha...bacha...bacha!!!!!! swayam.bacha...baby!!!!! my baby!!!!!!!😃

he held swayam by shoulders as his smile grew wide each second...

its a different feeling for him...

r: mera bacha...dad..mai dad ban ne wala hun...yeah!!!!!!!!! yippe!!!!!!! yes yes yes!!!!!!!

he was jumping and shouting...nurse came and said him to be quite...all were shocked...

ye sab shock ki wajah se toh nahi na...

swayam thought😆

rey was jumping lyk mad...he asked the nurse whether he could see her...she said yes...he hugged her and kissed her cheek and ran in...the poor old lady stood shocked...all followed him...kriya was lying there eyes closed...as soon as entering rey stopped he slowly went towards her...

r: baby!!!!

he called with all the love..

she oped her eyes and next sec she was in his arms...

r: love u baby love u a lot...mera apna bacha...i mean apna...thanks a lot baby...thanks a lot...

.he kissed her forehead and face several tymes expressing how happy he is as she grinned wide...

doctor came in ...

doc: aap inke pati hai???

rey looked back...

r: pati...ji...ji haan...

all looked at him shocked...

doc: ahh...kk...sabse pehle congrats...lag raha hai aap bohut khush hai...waise ek problem hai...

r: kya?????/ * rey was feared...*

doc: arey itna tension mat lijiye...just dat ki bache ko effect ho sakta hai agar aapki wife aise hi rahi toh...i mean wo weak hai...shayad dieting wo sab karti hai...par jab tak baby ki birth nahi hoti forget abt dieting...

r: thanks doctor...aaj se mai khud isiki food aur necessities dekhunga...

doc: grt...then aap inhe do ghante yaha rakhke baad mei leke jaa sakte ho...once again congrats...

r: thanks doctor...

as the doctor went out...

ranvijay: rey ye sab...

sw: sorry uncle but one min..rey

he went to him...

sw: tu jaanta hai ye bacha kiska hai????

bechare pregnancy ki baat se itna effect hogaye ki unki dimaag ki batti ab tak nahi jali...

r: wat???//😡

sw: haan yahi ki ye bacha kiska...

rey grbbed his collar...

r: what do u mean...kriya ki baby hai toh obvsly mai hi uska baap banoonga na..😡

sw: kya?/

rey left his collar...and swayam stepped back scratching his head...

sw: i mean...tu...

nahi...wo...

nahi nahi wo bacha...

nahi...tu aur kriya...

nahi kriya aur tu...

nahi nahi...tu aur bacha...

uhun...bacha aur kriya...

nahi nahi...

he shaked his head...this was a big blow...he is not able to understand the truth which is blowing him continuously...

sw: mera matlab ye bacha tum logon ka hai...

r: haa ...

sw: kab??

sh: kaise???

gang: kyun???

r: kyun matlab???

sh: chuk it chuk it...ye batao tum log...

i mean tum donon...

she is not abe to tell her point...

i mean ye kaise...

i mean kab hua ???

kriyaansh passed a crooked smiled to each other...rey scrratching his head replied...

all the parents were too shocked to react...

r: wo...wo goa trip...

he said and looked at him bitting his lips...giving a uneasy smile...

all loked at him with wide mouth...

sharon grabbed his collar...

sh: maine kittu ko tere saath dance fest ki arrangements keliye bheja aur tu tum logon ki bache ki arrangements karke aaye??? she was shocked...

rey gave a stupid smil and looked at kriya who was now blushing to core...

sh: tujhe toh mai...

she caught his neck...

k: sharon...

sw: tu chup reh...abey tu idhar aa.

r: mai????? he asked innocently...

sw: nahi tere baap...

ranvijay looked at swayam...swyam realised what he said...

sw: i ..i mean tu hi bey...

he said eyeing ranvijay and gulping hard...

rey went slowly towards him/...

sw: jab humne poocha tumlogon ke beech kuch alag lag raha hai toh tune kya bola???

r: arey toh mai aise thodi sab ko bolta phirunga ki hum...

sh: bas bas..

rey looked at all...he knew...what their parents were gng through...he went to kriya ans hugged her sidewards ...

r: we are sorry...i know aap kya soch rahe honge...par i wanna keep my point...

kriya clutched his hand...she was tensed...he looked at her...smiled and placed her head on his chest and tightened his grip...

r: shaadi keliye do dilon ka milna jaroori hota hai...par hum toh ek hi hai...hum kabhi alg nahi ho sakte...ek baar humne dekhliya ek doosre se door rehke hamara kya hoga...aur agar ab mai khud bhi isse dhoor gaya toh mai jee nahi paunga...hamareliye shaadi koi maayne nahi rakhti...coz hum ek hi hai hamesha se...plzz...dnt take us wrong...aaj tak hamne jo bhi stp liya wo sirf ek doosre pe aur apne pyaar pe trust ki wajah se hi kiya...par i know aap kya soch rahe ho...soceity kya sochegi and all...i swear...aap log jab bolenge tab shaadi karne keliye ham tayyar hai...

parents can understand what he said...kriya was clutching his shirt tight...after talking to them he looked at her...he just clutched her hand kissed her head and whispered ...

r: kriya mai hoon na...dont worry i willl handle baby...

by seeing them they can say whatever he said was true...

ranvijay: toh hum shadi ki tayyariyon ki baat kare????

all nodded and left...they were abt to leave the room when they heard kriya shouting...already both wre lost in each other...

k: rey kya kar rahe ho??? she scolded showing his hand fro her top...

r: arey mujhe apni baby ko dekhna hai...

k: wo 9 months ke baad...

r: nai mujhe abhi dekhna hai...

k: kaise.?????

r: aise...he lifted her top slightly and kissed her tummy.

my baby...come out fast im waiting...

kriya smiled wide at this...

he pulled back and said...

r: kriya 9 months mai baby aajayega na...toh mai kal hi intrview keliye jaata hun part tym job toh kar hi sakta hun...aur jab tak hamara baby hoga,...tab tak mai itne paise gather karoonga...

he said opening his arms...

r: agar ladka hua toh mai use cars ye wo...aur ladki hui toh cute cute frocks khareedoong amai apni babay keliye...

k: rey abhi tym baaki hai sabkeliye...she said laughing...

r: nahi kriya just think...after nearly 9 months mai apni hands mei apni baby ko uthaunga...i mean 1-2 mei koi mujhe papa bulayega...mai bata nahi sakta mai kitna khush hun...

k: but mai samaj sakti hun...she said passing her hands over his heart where she felt she was safe in it..

he cupped her face...

r: thanks for giving me my life's biggest happiness...

k: my nahi rey...our... she said looking down and blushing.

he made her look up and leaned front...all qquickly turned front and rushed out not wanting to see their private moments...

ther she cuddled in his arms as he was just caressing her hair and after 2 hrs rey took her to her house on his bike and left her in her house..both were sad when they said ...

sm: aisa udaas mat raho .kal tum logon ki shaadi hogi church mei aur rakhna tumhari kriya tumhare paas hamesha...

kriyaansh smiled wide...

both were on full excited mode ...they were just lying on the bed and were just smiling to themselves thinking finally officially they will be called a couple...a MARRIED COUPLE...they blushed at this and drifted to sleep...

kk guys this is the end...khatam

im gonna miss.it...

love u all

but not to fikar...

mere baaki saari works mei milenge😉

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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