Taarey FF: I'll Mend Your Broken Heart ~Complete~

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox
Chapter 14

I am too late na????😆😆

Acha now coming back to the update...who said that it was boring????It was so damn good yaar...i could feel the footloose competition taking place in front of me only...beautifully written sanju👏👏

I loved the sister bhai bond of Taani and Swayam...😳 it really show's us how Swayam is a perfect brother for her who will be by her side whenever she needs him😊

"Yeah thanks Swayam for bringing her smile back to her face." awww i seriously loved this dialogue of Rey...he loves her sooo much😍

Then their dance performance,they totally rocked it👍🏼 hahahahaha thanx for inserting Arjun-Arohi there for me😆😉

Yipeee both Taarey and Swaron came first together

Now am off to read the 15th chapter😉

always late 😡 😆😆

thanks i thought it wuld be boring b/c it was all footlose not really couple based 😳

i really love the bro sis realtionship they are so cute 😳

😆 i was wondering i was like i need two names and then i wnt on our AT and sw that u were the last response and saw arjun arohi and was like of course so just for you 😆

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox
Chapter 15

Oh my it was the last chapter?????😭😭 i am gonna miss it so very much yaar...why did you end it????😒

I loved the update sooo much sanju...😍

Starting me the Taarey scene where Rey brings her roses and Taani gets angry coz he was late was so cute😳

Swayam and Sharon again fighting!!!!🤣🤣 and then they again started fighting to decide which side would Taani be in😆😆

Haye ladai ke beech bhi Taarey were lost in there dreamland...the eyelock!!!😳😍

The last part was sooo hawt!!!!!☺️ am blushing...😳

Loved this ff sanju...thank you sooo much for this wonderfull ff🤗

😆 last cht 😳 thanks so much for liking it 😳 im really happy that you guys liked this ff i'm gonna miss writing it 😳 i still cnt blv its over 😆

swaron fighting and pulling taani to each side 😆😆 a cute bhai-bhabhi-behen relationship

and of course taarey lost in their own world...show mein kab hoga 😍

thanks so much sreeja like i said in the note if it wasnt for u, such, mannu, ritz, christy, and neha this wouldnt have been possible 🤗

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: AlinaD
That was a nice and cute update. So sad you ended it soon.

thanks so much alina 😳 i will miss writing it 😆

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Ana_Taarey
Sanju..!!

🤗

thank u so much fr d update..
Amazing work sanju..

thanks so much aaisha 😳😳😳

sooo happy you liked it😳

🤗

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: iamursforever
Haye!...it ws beautiful!!!!!:)))))

thnks so much dear 😳

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: nikita.aarons
This FF was totally brilliant👏!⭐️ 5 stars!!!!
Just perfect... Everything was perfect! So proud of you😊

Love you TaRey!☺️❤️

thnks so much nitika 😳 really happy u liked i t😳 thnksss 😳😳

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: hotarsh
Awww love u too sanju
the part was awesome
end to this ff is best
they kissed 😍 hmmm
love the whole ff

thnks so much neha!! 😳 srsly though credit for me even starting this ff goes to u guys. u guys encouraged me too and thnk you sooo much for that 🤗 love you neha 🤗

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: lovelypriya
😛osam n fabulas really it was a nice ff on TAARE our lovly couple hope this all also come in d3 one day or other bt i m sure every one on this forum had read ur ff n would have heartly thank you to u as u have given then an osam osam n osam ff which wwe would have never thought aur have heard so thankyou so so so so very much to u t isour one n only famous ff writer desigirlx5 love u n thank u 4 osam ff that what i can say,,,,😊❤️👍🏼

thanks so much priya 😳 its such a big compliment to recieve this type of comment i cnnt even tell u i feel like im on cloud nine 😳 🤗 thank you so much 😳

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sreelu094

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Posted: 13 years ago

#319

super update😃

.good job yaar.

but it was the last chapter 😭 oh nooo😭😭😭

well from the beginning to the end it was a very sweet and nice ff👏

i just loved it yaar

waiting for ur next ff 😆

🤗

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: fatima_tr
I CAN NOT BELIEVE IT HAS COME TO AN END :'(
I am really going to miss this. It was an amazing ff by an exceptional writer. :)

This update specifically was cute and simple. I loved that you kept it so clean and simple. Them at the coffee shop, then the eye lock in between a fight and finally the end. It was extremely cute. I had a huge grin while reading it and ting-lies went through my body. I think I have read this 10 times already.

I am a huge fan of your writing Sanju so I have a request. :) Please make another ff soon. I would literally wait for your update everyday and I want to continue doing that. :p

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING US AN AMAZING FIRST FF OF TAAREY! 🤗

thanks so much fati 😳 i still cnt blv that this is over i keep coming back thinking i have another update to write 😆

im so happy that you guys liked it 😳

😆 i wanted to incorporate everytihng since the beginning of this ff teh swaron parts with taani, the gang, and of course taarey's cuteness 😍

i will make another ff real soon just working out the initial story line for it 😳😳

thanks so much for alawys supporting me fati love you 🤗