Kriyansh SS: Touch Of Love (Ch10+Epilogue Pg71) - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
rey's bro and kriya related to each other
and kriya died a year ago but hws this possible??
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
man WTH!!!!!!! i am was like mouth opened wid d last sentence 😲 utter shock dude dis got to be biggest shock for me in any of d writings related to kriyansh 😭😆😆 is nt it funny bwahhh lol

i have million questions 😒 i think his bro tried to kill kria was almost kille but saved herself nd now came back to take revenge but his bro dnt know dat she is alive stil ? nd dats d reason kria choose rey room to live :P just a random guess

plz update ASAP my 2 sweeties plz cant bear d suspense
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if it was real ki she dead no i dnt think rey touched her kissed her :P 😉😆😆

update plz
thanks fior d pm 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update
kria attacted rey's bro?? bt y?
n his bro told tat she s dead, cant bear so much of suspense
waiting 4 nxt part
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updateee...
lloved itt...
damn got a big shockkk wt kriya died or she be alive cozzz of some
help or she is twin of another kriyaaa😕..
update soonnn..
thnx for pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...!!!

Totally shocking update...😲😲

But loved it, so much twist and turn in each paragraph...

Rey was living but his heart was with her...😭

He was missing her so much, but what happen next..

Kriya is try to hurt Rey's Brother... 😲

And then kriya is dead... how can it be possible,...

i guess something is there...

waiting for next update...
thnx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW

AMAZING

kya baat he ap dono ki

totally rocking update

the attacker is kriya...

i think his brother did something bad to her..

this was such a surprising update..

thx for the pm meow di :)

again..

what an amazing update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was amazing and terrific


but the last thing was bit shock


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Posted: 13 years ago
ausm but wats d new twist m wiating 4 d upgrade
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Posted: 13 years ago
WWWAAATTT...?????

KRIYA'S DEAD...???????????????????

WAT U SAYING DUDE...???????????????

I MEAN... YEAH I KNEW DAT SHE'S WIERD ND HAVING SOM TERRIBLE PAST etc... bt... DEAD... R U KIDDING ME...?????????


OOOMMMGGG...


I WONDER HOW REY IS GONNA REACT TO THIS...

ND WHEN HE'LL SEE KRIYA AGAIN... THN WT WILL HAPPEN...


DUDE... NEXT UPDATE JALDIII SEEE... I WANT TO READ IT NOW AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

Chapter 5

Kriya stayed in during the night times unlike the days before. They used to talk a lot but related to all the things in the world except their personal matters. As a matter of fact, both their ideas and thoughts matched up very well. They loved the company of the other. They would hang out together, share some time and sit talking long in the presence of moonlight. It was the similar day of the season, she got up as the sun beamed amidst the certains wakening her. She obstructed its view and turned around hiding her face with the bed. After some hours of sleep, she eventually got up and came out after becoming fresh.

"Good Morning Rey", she said watching Rey who was in a haste. "Good Morning", he greeted her back. "Where are you going??", she asked him. "My brother is coming...I have to receive him in the airport", he answered. "Would you like to come??", he questioned her back to which he got no response. He gave her a jerk making her troll from the thoughts. "I asked you something", he said. "What??", she said astonishingly. "Will you come with me?? You would rather feel bored staying alone right", he concluded. "I know how to keep myself occupied..dont worry and I wont be in the home tonight", she said briefly. "Why again??!!", he questioned her disappointed. "I have some work", she said sternly avoiding his gaze. Rey's cell started ringing making his actions more faster than before. "Ok Kriya see you tommorow in the morning..Bye", he adduced. "Bye", she replied. He vanished from the spot after some time.

Rey returned the home that night, as told Kriya was not in her room. It was locked from outside so he was clarified. He missed her voice and her innoncent face all the day long. He wanted to talk to her, feel her presence beside him. He hadn't a slight idea of where her work would be. She wouldn't be comfortable enough to share it with him so he didn't insist her to tell him. Of all he known from her, he had only her number to keep in contact with, to tell if they are mingled in any sudden events. He went to the balcony, staring at the lonely sky he called her with a wish to hear her voice. In no time he came to know she left her mobile in her room. He could hear the sound coming within. He gave a discomfort sigh kicking his leg to the rod, made his way to his room and fell on the bed.

He rubbed his eyes after a deep slumber of sleep. He had a long lasting sleep to relieve him off the workload he had the before day. This day was a busy package too, he hated his schedule but he had to, after all his brother's engagement was on the day. He had to be their all the time to take care and settle down all the work. His first thought was of her, he silently wished he could see her today. He dropped off his bed and headed out. He so badly wanted to see her atleast once before getting assigned to the day's work. To his happiness, Kriya was back in home. The lock was no more there on her room door. He wasted no more of his time, he immediately freshened up and came at her door. He knocked on the door twice or thrice, he tried opening it but it was locked from inside. He called her name aloud the enth time. He finally got to hear an answer from her. "Rey Im sleeping", she said. Her voice seemed very pale and was lacking the strength. "Kriya are you Okay??!!", he asked her concernedly. There was a reply after a few seconds. "Im totally fine...just little sleepy!!", she said. "I will see you in the evening Rey after you come..bye", she continued. "Bye", he said in a very low tone, mostly a whisper which was sensible less to him too.

He was weak by the time he returned home. He was happy for his brother whose engagement finished just a few hours back with the girl he loved so far. He also thought of a faint image or a dream to say, Kriya and him to be in the respective places. He drove back soon in a hurry making the very good time from his activities. He smiled all the way and came to the house. He opened it slowly so that it doesn't make even a pin of noise.

It was late in the evening when Rey came out of his bed. He had come and just hit the bed to get some sleep. He has been hell tired and after a day or two all the marriage ceremonies were about to begin and he knew then he wouldn't be able to catch even a pinch of sleep. He had been excited for his brother's marriage owing to his importance in his life but lately a change had come in his list of importance in terms of things precisely people. From the past days all he wished was to spend more and more time with the girl living in the next room. Call him crazy but he was about his growing fondness for her. Whenever he was away all he could think about her he was with her all he wished was to make the most of it. Whenever she went away he felt his life hanging and all he hoped she didn't need to go anywhere and strangely with him around she would be staying in the house. This made him excited that might be she may also be having feelings for him and the effect of his touch and proximity on her wasn't gone unnoticed by him.

As Rey came out he saw Kriya sitting on the couch comfortably reading something with a smile playing on her face - the sight he had been longing to see from days. From the look of her, it didn't seem that she would leave that night and also the weather wasn't that favourable. He just then came and sat down besides her and started browsing though a magazine but prominently looking at her. He never did realize that the magazine was upside-down. When Kriya lifted her gaze Rey immediately went back to his pretense. Kriya thought of ignoring but saw his magazine upside-down. A mischievous smile crept up her face. She went to him and bent near him so that they were sharing an eye-lock and asked very sweetly and sexily, "Rey, what r u doing?" He was startled seeing the closeness and was about to answer watching u but then got back to his senses and answered, "I.. I...wa..was just reading". " Oh realllyyy!!" Kriya dragged and it took Rey hell lot of self-control for not pulling her into him and answered brokenly, " ye...yes..." Kriya then raised her eye-brow and then came more close and asked, " Would u plz also teach me to read upside-down?" still raising her eye-brow and then Rey came back to his senses and saw the magazine resting in his lap. Kriya pulled back and started laughing hysterically, "God!!! U r so easy!!!! U shud have seen ur face. ( laughing) Ohh! Wish I had a camera." Rey made an annoyed face and got up and sarcastically answered, "Well it doesn't matter. Nothing changes in this world so u can read however u want. All in all same thing. Now will u stop laughing?" Kriya then stopped laughing. Rey then asked her, "Whats ur agenda. Am getting bored here." "Me too", Kria agreed. " Then lets play something at random and whoever wins in the end gets to make the other person do whatever they like." He then added, "Unless u r scared that u won't win at all and forfeit in front of me", smirking. Kriya then stood up and said, "Lets get started."


For the next few hours they played cards, eye contact, treasure hunt and so many. Rey was a clear winner in most of the making Kriya dance according to his wishes. With every passing moment she was getting edgy as she was getting very few opportunities to get a payback from Rey. Rey was having the time of his life seeing her expressions - pouting, fake crying, rolling eyes and what not. He just wanted to gather her in his arms and kiss her breathless and never ever leave her. The last game was won by Kria and it had started to rain outside. Kria got a mischievous idea. She turned towards him, smirked and said, "You have to go out and dance in rain." "Are u nuts?" Rey retorted, "its freezing outside. I am not gonna do it." "U have to", Kriya insisted and dragged him outside and pushed him in the garden. Rey did some steps along with cursing her as it was freezing there. He then got a mischievous idea. Kriya was laughing seeing him dance. Rey took this opportunity and slowly slid towards her and pulled her with him. Kria shrieked as it was very cold outside. Rey was laughing out loudly but it then came to an end as he took a look over her. Earlier in the evening he had been a hard time controlling himself and now it was next to impossible. The water droplets were flowing down her face. Her soft hair sticking to her face especially the strand sticking to her lip was turning him on. The water droplets flowing down her lip which made it look more enticing and sent him straight to heaven or more precisely his personal hell from where this creature had descended to ruin everything that they had built till now. The sight made him gulp in anticipation and adding to that she had worn a white shirt which due to the rains highlighted her oh so sexy figure as if he wasn't already smitten by her. He couldn't take it anymore and then covered the remaining distance as this sweet torture had become unbearable for him to tolerate. He then pulled her towards him sticking their bodies. Kria stood numb as she didn't know what was about to happen. Rey then started kissing her on her neck. She was shocked as she didn't expect that to happen. She knew that the guy had feelings for her and vice-versa was the case. She was very sure about what she felt but she never wanted to act upon it as she knew the consequences of the situation. She wanted to shove him off but couldn't as she found herself getting lost in the moment. The minute his lips came in contact with her skin it burned providing the perfect antidote to the freezing weather. She just closed her eyes taking in the sensation. Rey on the other hand didn't want to think about her reaction and continued kissing her on her neck and kept on tightening her hold pulling her more into him. What brought him back from his frenzied state was Kria responding to his actions as she titled her head giving him more access. He pulled back and stared at her face waiting for her to open her eyes as he couldn't believe what was happening. Kria opened her eyes wondering y an abrupt pull back as she didn't want him to stop. Rey stared in her eyes and what elated him that the pain he had been seeing for so long and he so wanted it to eliminate it had been completely removed only to be replaced by a pool of acute desire. He then kissed her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks then went along the jawline having his feast. He nipped at her neck and then bit it making her moan which triggered him more than ever and he started delivering them frequently along with the kisses. He didn't care about anything. At that moment she was the most important thing to him. Meanwhile Kria's hands began exploring him as she moved them over his body feeling every inch and then came over his shoulder and slid her hand through the borders to feel his frame. He felt his desires reaching its peak and more. His hands slid inside her top feeling her waist and then slid out to travel up to open the top button of her shirt sliding the shirt to expose more area to be caressed. Her fingers dug in him making him go more wild and then travelled up and he took her mouth into his - the part he had been desiring so badly. Kriya tightened her hold around his neck more pushing him in and granted an easy access to him inside her mouth. Rey's feelings reached their peaks and it became hard for him to control them. He broke away trying to get a hold over himself. He looked at her and after the events she was looking more enticing, more beautiful and above all more than perfect. Her face was flushed and she was panting holding her stomach and the sight turned him on to no extent. Her lips were shivering due to the kiss and the cold and Rey then realized the effect of weather. He then swooped her into his arms and carried her inside all the while staring at her petite frame in his arms while she was trying to avoid his gaze as much as possible. He stopped in front of her room keeping her down and came close to her ears and murmured, "Go and change fast" and pecked her cheeks and went away to change.


Rey changed and proceeded towards her room while his mind made him wander over the things that happened in the garden. He was sure she felt for him and he wasn't gonna lose her for anything. Meanwhile Kria had changed and was gonna dry her hair when Rey entered. He came from behind and hugged her tightly and lightly kissing her on her shoulders while Kria felt herself losing it again. He turned her around to measure her reaction. She surprised him by taking his lips into her and then leading the kiss while her hands were working on the buttons. She then slid his shirt out and started moving her hands on his chest while they were busy playing in each other's mouths. As soon as her hands started roaming around Rey's hands slid in to feel her soft skin. Both of them kissed, nipped and gave lovebites to each other while their hands were busy feeling each other. Rey then started walking pulling both of them and fell on bed with their bodies intertwined together and them still kissing. Finally both of them drifted off to sleep with each Kria cuddled into his chest and Rey's arms protectively wrapping around her.


The next morning Rey woke up but he didn't want to open his eyes with the fear the last night would turn out to be his one of the wildest dream. He eventually woke up due to the sounds that were coming from outside. As he woke up he looked around and found himself in Kria's room and a heavenly smile spread upon his lips as he realized that last night was indeed real and not his fantasy. He turned hoping to find Kria beside him but was disappointed. He wanted to see her face first thing in the morning and kiss her. Nevertheless he got up hoping to do the desired once he came out of the room. He freshened up and couldn't help just think about the previous day's event. He was finally able to remove those pains from her eyes. The emotion that had transpired through those eyes gave him the clear indication that the feelings were mutual. He just wanted to let her know his feelings and vice-versa so that they could proceed towards a relationship. He already had a rosy future planned in his mind. He inwardly laughed at his thought as those thoughts were normally undertaken by the girls and here he was doing it. He grinned realizing the depth of his feelings. He never wanted to let go of her.


He was feeling strange as he thought that something was missing in the room. Nevertheless he came outside to receive the shock of his life. Kriya stood there all ready seeming that she was about to go somewhere. He held his breath in anticipation hoping his thoughts weren't true and proceeded towards him to gather her in his arms but was surprised when she didn't return the gesture. "What's wrong?" Rey enquired turning her to face him. "U going somewhere?" She just nodded a yes. "Again..." he sighed. "Okay but before u go I want to tell u something. I cannot wait till u return", he said excitedly. "I am not gonna return", she said stealing away glances. Rey was taken aback. He thought she might be joking. "It isn't a joke. Don't ever say like that." Kria took a deep breath, "Rey its true. I'm leaving and if possible I will not return. It is better that way only. Trust me." Rey retorted, "What do u mean by that? haan.. I don't know anything. U are going to return back in the evening here to me." He cupped her face and continued, "I know u have feelings for me and if u r scared then don't be as I will always be there with u. I promise." Kria pushed for a distance, "Rey u don't know anything. We cannot be together. And when u'll come to know the truth u'll hate me." "I can never hate u. If fact I lo.." She stopped him in middle, "Don't make it more difficult than it already is. Just forget we ever met. U will find someone better". She didn't give him a chance to say anything and took her back and left leaving him shattered.


Precap: Kria's mystery revealed.



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