Originally posted by: highonshows
wow...just read chptr 1...n i must say i m loving this better than the other one...
Love how u have dialogue in hindi and u've written keeping the characters in mind...i could totaly visualize the whole scene infront of me...
BTW...So Was Arnav the whole time in the conversation in the TOWEL????
eheheheheheheh cuz u never wrote he put some clothes on ...or maybe i was too busy visualizing that way that i forgot to read the part where he actually put some clother on himself eheheheheh
Damn i loved that scene...
And he will investigate...finally a sensible Arnav...going to chpter 2
BRB
Avni :)
oh!!!
this was my very first ff😊
glad u liked it...😃
i know why u think its better than the other one,coz it lenghty,right??😳well,i had ample time in writing those days,as i dint know much how to find good fiction stories on IF and how to like and comment...😳
thnks for complimenting me for dailogs...
i luv writing hindi dailogs..😃😃😃😛😛😛😆😆😆
glad u can visualize scenes,i guess am not that bad for a starter...😆
well,u can say that yes,Arnav was the whole time in towel,i really don't remember what i had in mind too!!!it was long back...😕
yup,u can always imagine him shirtless or MUCHLESS THAN THAT TOO,atleast we can make use of our imagination here...nothing else except imagination is in our hands...😆😆😆
glad u loved it...
enjoy and dont stop commenting...really happy to read them...😳
yup,ASR is sensible...😊
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