KR FF- Stewing Temptations; # 1; Ch 1 to 8

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

jaldi update karo yaar ,,,,,,,,, chapter one...

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aishwarya

@arsha_luver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

hey i realy love ur work plz update soon

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Woaaah! a part B to it? *dances on some random song and gets back to the screen*

Tish, you are amazing! :)

I loved this part a lot and the most beautiful thing about the way you write is that it is so very natural! :) That's the way I describe your writing style. So natural and easy to connect to.

Rey is definitely smitten by Kriya and he is just standing there adoring her frame and how beautiful she is. That was cute!

She tripped and he held her in his arms, so adorable!

But then comes his girlfriend Taani to ruin the moment. She is undoubtedly jealous of Kriya who though is an ugly duckling but still manages to grab his boyfriend's attention.

I hate it when she kisses him like that and it hurt when Kriya saw them in this position. I wonder what was inside that box. It'll definitely be something special though not so pricey, but good.

Feels really sad when Kriya felt rejected and just left the party. :(

The precap tells me that you would probably take some leap and then show us that Kriya has completely transformed to a beautiful swan.

Great story!

plz update soon...plz plz plz plzz...!!!!!!

thanks for the pm

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

wow tish... pehle Arsha... nd now Kriyaansh FF...

wow... nd both the Prologue's... dey were just awesooommm... xcpt dat stalker... 🤢

damn... she kissed him... 😡 .. KR fans r def gonna throw juttas n chappals on you for dis... 😡 😛

bt ovrall... mind blowinggg...

m seriusly lookin 4wrd for ur dis FF...

loved it Tish...

All the very best to you...

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

amaznig update i feel so sorry for kriya cant believe i cried reading this

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sujana

@sujana9

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was out of town did not read both d parts
dis was hell lot of surprise to me

u came up wid ff dat to my kriyansh tightest hugs gal me loves u ...!!!!!!!!

nd cmg to d ff i read both d parts KRIA MY KRIA omg!!!!!!! she was freaking awesum

i really really loved d concept ...!!!!!!! its amazing omg i have no words

god save me after writing my comment i am gng back to read it again
dis is heaven i totally enjoyed d 2 parts

taaani is hell **** i dmt like her hate @@@@@@

rey 😲 he is werid u see😉 but but his slight feelings for kria my kria wow amazing
!!!

totally u r bang on feaking good dude

i am lacking words to describe my feelings yaar
tish u r totally good at writing 👏👏👏👏LOVE U ❤️

chapter plz i need d update asap plzzz understand my postion yaar plzzz :)
thanks for d pmes

update REAL SOON PLZZZ