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Part-14

Kriyaansh were drowned in their ocean of love. They were swinging to the rhythm of their hearts. There was no music but still rhythm was heard aloud. For kriya, she was feeling like a sleeping beauty who was in a deep slumber of death and her prince-her rey is making her feel alive again.

This was so beautiful until and unless the door's knob twisted and here entered the witch of this sleeping beauty- jhansi ki rani.

Smriti shouted "kriya" giving kriyaansh a mini heart attack and making them jump apart.

Sm- kriya kar kya rhi ho tum...

Kr- ma ek baar baat to sun leejiye...please

Rey- aunty...sirf ek baar just atleast listen to me.

Sm- ahhh...i am fed up of this...bolo kya bolna hai sun rhi hu main

Rey- thankyou...dekhiye aunty main kriya se bahut pyaar karta hu...main...

Sm- toh?

Rey- toh...toh ye ki main usse humesha khush rkhunga...and I will always be with her and...

Sm- and I will always care for her and blah blah blah...(moving towards kriya) kriya baby ye bilkul tumhare papa jesa hai...ye bhi chod dega tumhe...I don't want ki tum meri life jeeyo...everything comes to an end and so does love...baby love humesha khatam ho jata hai...ek din iska pyaar bhi khatam ho jayega...phir...phir bachega to sirf pain...tumne mujhe dekha hai kriya main nhi chahti ki tumhe whi pain mile.

Rey- shayad...shayad pyaar khatam ho jata hai pr agar wo true love ho na toh us love ke baad sirf pain nhi bachta...balki understanding aur trust bachta hai...you can never be always haapy...there are ups and downs in life...par trust and understanding keeps you together...and I know as far as kriya and I am together, we will be happy.

Sm- aesa kuch nhi hai kriya...ye sirf kitabi baate hai...real life me aesa kuch nhi hota...be practical. True love jesa kuch nhi hota...hota hai to sirf aur sirf attraction or may be lust. Please understand it sweety. Yeh to ek college boy hai...you need a guy who gives you security in life.

Smriti was again and again proving rey wrong and rey was defending his love for kriya and all this while kriya was quiet...she was not crying, neither silenty nor loudly...may be her eyes' water bank has finished now...she was just trying to control herself, control her temper, she was trying her best to not to outburst but her mother again accused rey to be like kriya's father and that's it she can no more control herself.

Kr-rey leave.

Rey- kriya...I really love you...I swear I would never leave you...I don't know what your father exactly did but I promise I am not like him...people are different.

Kriya- rey I am not doubting your love...i can never do that...I am just telling you to leave

Rey- lekin kriya...

Kriya- (shouting) jaiye rey...samajh nhi aata aapko jaaiye...agar aapne kabhi bhi mujhse pyaar kiya ho toh us pyaar ki kasam hai aapko chale jao dehradun chodke...I beg of you...leave

Who says mard ko dard nhi hota. This mard was crying. His eyes were red. He would have never left but that stupid kasam. He doesn't believes in all these idiotic things but his kriya does. The juniour rani laxmi bai is begging to him...no...that's not right. He cant see her that weak. As said by him, when love drowns trust and understanding swims. He trusts her that she loves him and is not doubting him and understands that there is something from which she wants him to be out of. She wants it to handle herself. He will do whatever she wants.

Rey-I love you...

He just spoke these words and left from there sobbing silently.

And now there was only kriya and smriti left in that war place. She knew it that if she lost it she will go out of her senses but this whole scenario has itself created the tornado which is ready to destroy anything coming its way.

Sm- acha kiya beta...your decision is absolutely right.

Kr- are you happy now...khush ho aap ab...mujhe sari jindigi ke liye apni jesi pain deke.

Sm- kriya baby maine tumhe kaunsa pain...pain wo deta jab wo chod jata tumhe tumhare papa ki tarha

Kr- ma aapko samajh kyu nhi aata...papa aapko is liye chodke gye the kyuki you never loved him.

Sm-kriya kya bakwaas kar rhi ho...

Kr- ma you yourself told me that there was a boy who loved you but you left him for papa who gave you that security in life...the truth is you still love that boy of your college. Aapne kabhi papa se pyaar kiya hi nhi aur wo jo pain hai na wo papa ke jane ki nhi hai balki aapke regrets ki hai...you still regret your decision. You still love him aur isliye aapki cupboard me kapdo ke niche papa ki nhi balki us ladke ki photo hai...

Sm-KRIYA!!!

Smriti raised her hand to slap kriya but withdraw it and started to leave when kriya spoke from behind.

Kr- sach bola na maine ma...

Smriti left the room for a sleepless night.

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Taani was moving to and fro in front of kriya's flat. She raised her hand to ring the bell but never rang it. She had two diaries in her hand. She didn't knew what to do with them. She didn't knew weather she should ring the bell or not when suddenly the door opened. Smriti was standing there shocked to see taani.

Sm- tum...tum toh us rey ke saath ho na...

Ta- ha...main wo...aap ro rhi hai???

The question was baseless...it was obvious that she was crying. Her eyes were red.

Sm- none of your business.

Ta- ya...sorry

Sm- tum yha kya kar rhi ho?

Ta- wo actually kriya ki yeh dono diaries mere paas hai. Rey is adament ki kal hum sab yha se ja rhe hai...koi jana nhi chahta par noone can disobey rey. So yeh diaries I thought to return them to kriya. Aap please unhe yeh de dengi.

Sm- ok...(she took the diaries from her hand) when are you going?

Ta- subah-subah 5 baje

Sm- hmm.

Taani was leaving from there when she turned and spoke.

Ta- I don't know ki aap lago ke beech kya baat hui hai but I want you to know that rey only loves kriya. Wo kabhi kisi aur se pyaar nhi kar payenge. Even I myself proposed him but he told me that noone can take that special place in his life.

Taani spoke this and left from there leaving a confused smriti.

Ok guys that's it for now.

I know it was a bit bore and short as compared to my other updates but this was important.

Don't expect any update of any of my works anytime soon because its my 10th and my preboards are going on and then boards will start and I am not atall prepared so please adjust for some time. As soon as my baords finishes I will update all my works very much regularly.

But but but mission kriyaansh's next update would be on its next thread. So, complete this thread fast.

And I think all of you had guessed till now that kriyaansh would be together in the next update.

Please tell kaisa laga and don't forget to like.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Mannu...phle ye bata tu kaha gayab h ajkl...
Anyways...nyc update...mom's truth was devastating...
I hope smriti ko akal aye or wo inhe jane se rokle...
Hoping for the best
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum update

loved it..

haye hate smriti err..why cant she understand..

poor kriyaansh..

haye i hope now toh smriti understands rey..nd his love fr kriya.

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
smriti aunty ko samj mein kyu nahi aata yr...badi jiddi h woh
smriti aunty ka truth toh bahut bura tha yr

i hope woh rey ko jane se rok de...

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Posted: 11 years ago
update was really nice...

bechara kriyaansh...



all the best for ur exams...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...continue soon
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