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PART-6

Guys I am continuing but please comment and like. As I told u if I will not get good response then I will discontinue.

Lets begin'

Fire exit's door slash opens and rey enters and closes the door. He is very sad.

Ok guys I m trying my hand on a song for the first time so please bear with me. Plz. Btana kesa lga.

PLEASE PLAY THE SONG GUYS-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1eYObCDCyXc

Music

He closes his eyes and saw kriya's beautiful face with her most beautiful smile in the world. A tear rolled down his cheek.


Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu Sukke Sukke Sapne Vi Pijj Gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rove Palkan De Kone Vich Neend Meri
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Hanju Digde Ne Chot Lage Dil Te
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut Birha De Badlan Di Chhaa Gayi

He comes down some steps and then sits down like a body without soul making his way to his hair moving his hands in them streaching them back. He touches his tears which till now occupied his face compleately.

Kaali Kaali Khaali Raaton Se
Hone Lagi Hai Dosti
Khoya Khoya In Raahon Mein
Ab Mera Kuch Bhi Nahi

He stands up again and touches the wall of fire exit and closes his eyes remembering the moment when kriya said that rey is more than a friend to her


Har Pal Her Lamha, Main Kaise Sehta Hoon
Har Pal Her Lamha Main Khud Se Yeh Kehta Rehta Hoon

He shouts as loud as he can.

Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh,
Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh
Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh
Phir Kyun Teri Yaadon Ne
Mujhe Rula Diya.. Oh
Mujhe Rula Diya .

He sits down again like a body without soul, without life, without breath and remembers the pre-valentines night scene and the cries his heart load. Tears continuously rolling down his masculine face to his neck.


Teri Yaadon Mein Likhte Jo Lafz Dete Hai Sunaai
Beete Lamhe Poochhte Hain Kyun Hue Aise Juda.. Khuda,
Khuda Mila Jo Yeh Faisla Hain
Khuda Tera Hi Yeh Faisla Hain
Khuda Hona Tha Woh Ho Gaya
Jo Tune Thha Likha

He stands up and goes up few steps not breaking touch contact with the wall and remembering all their fire exit moments and then keeps his both the hands on his hands.

Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh,
Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh
Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh
Phir Kyun Teri Yaadon Ne
Mujhe Rula Diya..
Mujhe Rula Diya .

He tries to step forward but loses balance and trembles down few steps but controls himself pulled himself back and tries to whip the tears.

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu Sukke Sukke Sapne Vi Pijj Gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut Birha De Badlan Di Chhaa Gay

He imagines kriya coming forwaed to him and then kriya whips his tears.

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu Sukke Sukke Sapne Vi Pijj Gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut Birha De Badlan Di Chhaa Gay

Kriya cuppes his face as if asking not to cry and then that her million doller smile for which he can sacrifice anything. He touches her face but as soon as he touches her she disappears.

Dol Pal Tujh Se Juda Thha,
Aise Phir Rasta Muda Thha,
Tujh Se Main Khone Laga,
Juda Jaise Hone Laga,
Mujh Se Kuch Mera

He tries to find her here and there with those paining eyes of his showing an utmost desire to see her but she was nowhere. He realized that it was his imagination and falls down on the second step in a half sitting and half fell down body.


Tu Hi Mera Liye Abb Kr Dua,
Tu Hi Is Dard Se Kar De Juda,
Tera Hoke Tera Jo Main Na Raha,
Main Yeh Khud Se Kehta Hoon,

He sees up and folds his hands. Then he puts his head down, mean while covering his face with his hands.




Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh,
Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh
Tujhe Bhula Diya, Oh
Phir Kyun Teri Yaadon Ne
Mujhe Rula Diya.

He shouts again his heart load and then makes a strong fist and punches the wall with his full power making his hand bleed quite badly. He then murmurs sobbing "I love u kriya'I love u'. I love u very very much."

Rey was just sitting there without any soul and life remembering his soul , his life ' kriya when someone continues calls and messages disturbs him. finally after much time he sees his cell which showed 13 missed calls and 5 messages of TAANI.

R- ab ye taani mujhe itne calls kyu kar rhi he'koi mujhe meri baatcutter ko yaad bhi nhi karne deta

He reads one message which read-

Rey jaldi se RH aajaiye'plz jaldi kariye'bahut urgent hai.

R- kya urgent kaam hoga ab ise..???

His cell rang again'it was none other than taani. He picked up the phone this time.

R- hello taani

T- thank god apne phone udhaya'kha ho aap'pta hai mene apko kitne phone kiye.

R- ha dhekha mene'message bhi pda tumhara..

T- pda na'very gud'ab jaldi se RH aajaiye

R- par baat kya hai'hua kya?

T- aap bas jaldi se yha aajaiye'app jab yha aaoge to aapko sab pta chal jayega'jaldi aaiye 'ok

R- par taani'

And taani cuts the call

R- phone kaat diya'pta nhi ab is ladki ke dimag me kya chal rha hai?

Rey whips his tears and took a deep breath and then stands up and leaves for the RH.

He reaches the RH and saw whole gang sitting there and taani standing in the middile taaping her foot waiting for him. he goes in.

R- kya hua guys'tum sab yha kya kar rhe ho'whats the matter?

Everyone shrugs away except taani.

S- pta nhi dude'taani ne hume yha bulaya hai.

V- ha aur pta nhi kya baat hai'tu to abhi aaya hai, hum to yha bahut der se aye hue hai

N- aur jab bhi taani se kuch pucho to kehti he thodi der wait karo aur pta nhi itni der se kise call kiye jar hi thi.

R- wo mujhe call kar rhi thi aur shayad mera hi wait bhi kar rhi thi'hena taani?

T- ha rey main apka hi wait kar rhi thi'aur ab aap jab aa gye ho to main start kar sakti hu.

N- ha teacher ji please start kre'bore hogya main'

T-teacher ji?

N- ha teacher ji jese baaki sab bethe hai aur tum khadi ho tum teacher ji hi lag rhi ho.

Sh- stop it nil'taani baat kya hai ab jaldi btao?

T- sabse pehle to bhai rey nilesh and vickey'aap plz bedh jao

And they obeys her.

Taani closes both the doors of RH and took a deep breath and comes back to her position. Everyone were hell confused. She crept her hand in her bag and ''

ab tak tum sab ache se confuse hogye hoge because last update mene taani ke rone par choda tha and today I started with this total different thing. Saari confusion next part me clear ho jayegi. So guys do how was it'good or bad. Like and do comment. And mind it is baar mujhe ek acha response chahiye nhi to I will nt continue it. This time here is a demand, atleast 30 likes and next update will be on page no.45 , complete it and get the update.

Now ur work starts guys.

Edited by dazzlingmanavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

sleepy now will unres tom :)

for now awesome work :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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nice update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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chalaaa or n hi pata
hmmm next update kk inzjaar karna padhga😕
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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