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Posted: 13 years ago

PART- 5

Guys thank u 4 completing my demand this time. Thanx 2 those who commented and liked and Special thanx to mish ,cookie and suchi'.u guys are really devils in spamming ha'.but I like it'this update for all u guys'.

Enough of my bak-bak and here starts the update'.

Taani was all into her thoughts when she noticed that she is standing outside computer room and there was nobody. Suddenly she heard something or I say someone in the computer room. She looked from the window and saw shivam standing there with 4 boys.

T- shivam yha kya kar rha hai'aur yeh ladke kon hai'humare college ke to nhi lagte

B1- shivam jabse tu gya hai na king rangers chod kar kuch mazza hi nhi aata yar

B2- ha yar jab tu tha to kitna acha lagta tha

S- guys mujhe bhi tumahare saath acha lagta tha

T- oh to yeh shivam ke purane college ke friends hai'shivam inhe miss karta hoga isliye inse akele me baat karne aaya hoga' mujhe inki chup-chup ke baate nhi sunni chahiye'I should leave

S- par kya karun guys badla bhi to lena hai in louisans se

Taani was about to leave when she heard badla and louisans' so she stopped.

T- louisans se badla'???

S- us Sharon aur swayam ne sabke samne mujhe insult kiya. Us restaurant me mujhe shivam ko thapad mara , juice giraya aur kya-kya nhi bola. Unhe to main chodunga nhi. Aur upar se jab is college me aaya to unsabne milkar mujhe aur mere friends ko mara. Us rey, swayam aur Sharon ko abhi mujhe jo kehna he kehne do , baad me main unhe btaunga ki shivam kya cheez hai. Aesa haal karunga ki bechare jindigi bhar regret karenge ki unhone shivam ko insult kyu kiya.

Hearing this taani was shocked. Her mouth fell open and she was dumbstruck.

B3- par shivam tu us behenji taani ke saath kyu itna involve ho rha hai. Uske saath kyu itna gud boy ban rha hai. Wo behenji humare kis kaam ki?

S- wo behenji swayam ki behen hai aur swayam apni behen se bahut pyaar karta hai. Swayam se badla lene ka best tareeka.

B3- wo kese?

S- taani mere liye tissue paper ka kaam karegi

B4- tissue paper?

S- ha'use and throw tissue paper. Usko use karke main swayam ko hurt karunga. I will break that behenji's heart into pieces. Aur agar behna tutegi to bhai bechara kya karega'poor bhai. Aur bas aese hi us taani ko use karke in louisans se badla lunga main.

Taani was shocked till her spine. Tears started rolling down her eyes but there was more to come for her.

B4- par shivam yeh plan kaam karega kya?

S- kyu nhi karega'.shivam ka koi plan kabhi fail nhi hota.

B2- nhi shivam wo to hume pta hai'par kriya wala plan bhi to fail ho gya tha na.

T- kriya wala plan'.???

S- wo wala plan fail nhi hua tha bas thoda sa late kaam kiya tha.

B1- matlab?

S- guys maine kriya ki mom ko phone karke uske dance ke bare btaya aur kriya ki mom us kriya ko college lene gyi aur wha kriya aur rey ko saath dekh liya'.nd as per my plan gusse se pagal ho gyi. Bas use wha elimns me last time dance karne diya'mujhe lga tha kin hi karne degi aur weaklings disqualify ho jayenge par koi baat nhi late hi sahi wo use Mumbai se le to gyi. Aur bechara rey tut gya.

Shivam and all the rest boys laughed out loud.

On the other hand it was enough for taani. She cant hear more. She wanted to cry out loud but controlled herself and ran from there. She found rehearsal hall empty. So she got in the RH. Whatever shivam said was echoing in her ears. She broke down and cried her heart out.

Here the update ends. Hope u guys like it. I know yeh update thoda sa bore tha par next update would be fab I promose. No demand kyunki pehle mujhe confused feelings ko update karna hai par iska yeh matlab nhi comment nhi karoge. Please btana kesa lga yeh update. Waiting for ur comments.

Edited by dazzlingmanavi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaay 1st to comment

nice update

argh that cheapo shivam kabhi nai shudhar sakta

good to know atleast kisiko toh sach pata chal gaya

hope taani KR ko milayegi

thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part 😃...
Yeh Shivam na kabhi nahi thek ho ga 😡...
Acha hua Taani ne sab sun liya 😃...
Ab plz Taani kuch karo aur Rey aur Kria ko mila do 😳...
Aur us Shivam se acha revenge lo 😈...
Thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago

nyc update dear..

i hate shivam huh..!!

update soon..!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Achi baat hai taani ne sabkuch sun liya good god ye shivam be na😡 It is really a rocking update, but chottu. Plz jaldi upate karna and I loved reading it. Thanks so so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Shivam is seriously cheap
Taani heard everything yayy n she also play cupid to reunion kriyansh
Hope rey came to knw the truth
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
A,mazing update.
Loved it..
this was sup[erb.
Us Shivam ki tho mai😡
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
asa hai tani ka rone kk alwa kam hi kya hai ..par kabhi n kabhi toh himmat karni hagi... sooo come on tani be breava now...
it time To action ..😊

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