Is It love FF (AK)updated pg 34

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meme25

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

hey
i just started reading ur fan fic and it sounds awesome
keep up the good work and hey update soon!!!!!
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#22

wow superb gr888888888888 do con soon

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candyprincess

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Kripa got into her black sports car and drove to the club wehn she got there she was looking for prithiv but did not see him she was about to leave when her cell rang it was blinking prithiv
K-prithiv where are u
P-sorry krips i had some work at office so i got out late i am just coming okay
K-okay then
kripa went to the bar and got herself some juice and was looking at the dance floor when her eyes fell on angad
K-(to herself)what the hell is he doing here oh god now if he see's me he is so going to bug me
Just then angad comes over to kripa
A-whats a pretty girl like u standing here alone
K-(to herself)god what happen to him why is he acting like that
K-umm angad are u okay
A-how do u know my name
K-will how could i not know u ur, my jiju's yonger brother
A-what are u talking about kripa's sister is getting married to my bro and
K-and
A-ur kripa
K-yes i am god ur so stupid
A-(to himself)god thats kripa OMG she looks so hot
A-wow u look beutiful
K-yeah yeah
When angad was about to ask her to dance he saw 2 strong arms come over kripa
Guy-sorry krips
K-prithiv i am not gooing to talk to u
Angad felt a rage of burning come over him he felt like punching prithiv
P-not even if i give u ur favorite choclate
K-okay ur forgiven
kripa was about to take the choclate when
P-first give me a kiss then i will give u ur choclate
K-prithiv thats not fair
P-no choclate then
K-fine
Kripa gives prithiv a kiss on his cheek and the lipstick mark was left on
P-thank u
K-my choclate
P-here
Angad was even more mad seeing this
P-kripa lets dance
K-okay
K-see yeah later angad
A-yeah later
kripa and prithiv went on the dance floor and poor angad left back mad mean while on the dance floor
P-kripa whoes that
K-oh thats angad
P-who angad
K-my jiju's younger brother
P-oh
later on angad was getting just was like kripa won't go home now will she will then i am leaving and he left kripa was having too much fun too notice

guys i hope u liked it and i don't know if i can post the next part tomorrow and any thought on what will happen next

Edited by candyprincess - 18 years ago

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

great loved the part write some more soon

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candyprincess

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Later on when kripa and prithv decided to leave they saw that it was raining really hard and kripa's cars tire was popped
K-god this tire had to go now
P-kripa i don't think i can drive in this rain so we should get rooms in the hotel(the club is in a hotel okay)
K-okay lets go
Kripa and prithiv go in and to the front desk
P-can we have 2 rooms
FD-sorry sir we have only 1 bedroom
P-umm..wait a second
P-kripa they have only 1 bedroom
K-then book it we ahve no other choice
P-okay
P-i take the room
They walk to there room
P-umm...kripa i'll sleep on the sofa and u sleep on the bed
K-prithiv i trust u so u can sleep on the bed too
P-are u sure
K-yep
(by the way prithiv went out in the rain so he's wet)they were about to go to sleep
K-prithiv u should take off ur shirt since its wet
P-yeah ur right
So prithiv takes of his shirt and puts it on the sofa when they were about to lie down kripa just remebered that
K-prithiv hold on let me tell aunty that i am staying at a hotel
P-okay
kripa gets her cell from her bag and dails auntys number
K-hello aunty
S-kripa where are u
K-aunty i'm staying at a hotel since its raining really hard an my cars tire popped
S-okay take care
K-okay
S-also i will sent angad to pick u up tomorrow
K-no aunty i will come with a friend
S-none sence ur my bahu's sister
K-but..
Before she can say anything the line was already cuted.Krip went and laid on the other side of the bed
P-what she say
K-that angad will pick me up tomorrow
P-but i could drop u
K-i know i tried telling her that but she did not listen
P-okay
K-prithiv i feel cold and there is no other blakets
P-umm..how about we just bundle up in the blaket if u trust me
K-prithiv don't worry i trust
So prthiv put his hand around kripa and soon as they were talking they fell asleep

okay guys the part was boring and any guess what is going to happen next

Edited by candyprincess - 18 years ago

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candyprincess

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Posted: 19 years ago

#26

hey guys i don't know when i will be able to contuine maybe today

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candyprincess

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

The next morning angad is coming down teh stairs is looking at teh dinning table and searching for kripa
A-(to himself)where is this kripa now
When angad got to teh dinning table hsi mom started speaking
S-angad u have to pick up kripa
A-from where
S-umm that hotel that has a club where u go to
A-Rock side hotel(guys i don't know any hotel in india)
S-yeah that
A-okay
saying that angad ate fast and got out and ran to his red sports car.When angad was driving he felt like so eager to kripa
A-(to himself)what si happening to me why do why want meet kripa oh god whats happening to me
Soon angad reached the hotel adn went straight to the front desk
A-excuse me do u know what room kripa sharma is staying at
FD-umm room # 608
A-thank u
Angad got into the elvator and was standing and when it got to the sixth floor he was the first one to get out.
On the other hand u see kripa and prithiv still sleeping. Anad is walking though the halls looking at the door number
A-room 605
A-room 606
A-room 607
A-room 608 here
Angad slowly started knocking on the door and in the room u see prithiv slowly getting up and going to the door
and angad thinking
A-(to himself)what happened to me why am i keep on thinking about kripa Is It Love or somethig
and finally the door opened and was standing in front of him was prithiv
A-umm i think i got the wrong room
Then he hears a voice, a girls voice, a voice that was he knew
Girl-prithiv who is it
Now the girl walks to the door and kripa and angad come to face to face angad is shocked

guys hoped u liked and i will try to post the parts sooner since i am going to my country for the summer and i might not be able to contuine that soon.And what do u guys think angad is thinking in his head and kripa

Edited by candyprincess - 18 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

omgggg i hope he isnt thinking something wrong..continue soon its an awesome fanfic

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Milly

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Posted: 19 years ago

#29

that was nice continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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candyprincess

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Posted: 19 years ago

#30

Angad stood there shocked seeing kripa come out from the back
K-umm angad come in
A-yeah..okay
Prthiv moved aside from the door and angad came in when angad came kripa closed the door from behind angad. Angad looked around the room and just found prithiv's cloths on the sofa he felt strange standing there in that room and seeing this when he looked at prithiv angad saw that prithiv just had a regular expressiion on his face also kripa from behind kripa came and put hand on his shoulder angad felt a chill go throw his body
K-angad sit down
A-okay
Angad went to the sofa and sat down and looked at the shirt next to him feeling why did i leave kripa last night and did not stay till she left
K-umm..u 2 talk i'll go freshen up
P&A-okay
With saying that kripa went into the bathroom leaving angad and prithiv with nothing to say to each other
P-umm let me put on my shirt
A-yeah okay
Prithiv went near his shirt and picked it up angad was just cofused with what he saw that they act so normal
P-(to himself)god what should i talk about to him kripa get out
A-(to himself)wow kripa and prithiv look so normal after what i saw kripa should be scared that i don't tell her parents or even my mom
P-will soo umm how do u know kripa
A-she's my soon to be bhabi's sister
P-u mean misty is going to get married to ur brother wow misty di never told me that
A-yeah will it was decieded just so fast
P-yeah okay
Both boys sit there quitly to think of some thing to talk about will not for angad he just wanted to know why does he feel like something just ripped his heart apart when prithiv was about to say something he heard the bathroom door open and both boys look that was and find kripa in wet wavy hair wearing jeans and a pink tantop they both were awwwed by how kripa looked
K-umm angad we should get going
A-yeah
Angad was happy to be leaving or happy that kripa was not near kripa
K-prithiv aren't u going to leave with us
A-(to himself)oh god
P-naa either way i have a meeting here
K-okay
Angad went to the door and opened it but when he looked at kripa he saw her give a quick hug and kiss to prithiv when angad saw this angads hands formed into a fist but he held him self back

guys will thats all i could right for now

Edited by candyprincess - 18 years ago

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