FF: Suicide Attempt:Completed 7/2/2012 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
update soon hun.. this is so gud...
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
OMG what wicked plans r u making for the nxt update ?
i wanna know that 😉
it was again a fab update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
well this should bring his world down
i actually am glad that he will never see her again because like i said this is the perfect punishment for him
she will be safe from him and not be ruined any further with his words or actions
man i must be going evil if i want khushi to die but maybe it will be better if she doesnt survive to punish arnav
pls dont be annoyed with my harsh comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
I am nervously waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Wow! loved part 2 as well - waiting for more 😃 and please continue your style - I would like to read that more - we can have a semi happy ending - not too dark not too filmy 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

OK so now I have decided to go my evil ways, I hope u still enjoy but this part should satisfy a good variety of readers and as always thanks for the love. will send PM later, gotta run somewhere important work wish me luck!

To set the mood i would recommend watching this VM i made that suits the situation. but totally your call. I give u two choices
If u prefer Desi Vm
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPGfGUNeI4Y[/YOUTUBE]
If u prefer English VM
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rEXwx1ShkXw&feature=relmfu[/YOUTUBE]
Chapter 3: Her Beating Heart

As the knife sliced through her wrist, the excruciating pain spread to her entire body. She led out a loud painful scream, not due to the gush of blood but due to her burning heart. She felt someone had squeezed it so hard not letting it go, not letting her leave. Her head fell to her side as her face crashed into the cold marble white floor. She bled and curdled into a fetal position. She wept as her body slowly became cold as the warm red blood drained from her rosy pink skin. Her face was now pale, she was finally free of pain, and she continued to stare at the starry night sky as if speaking to someone there and she whispered '.Arnav ji!

Hearing the loud cry from the mandir the Pandit Ji (who lived in the small cottage attached to the shrine), came running out. The grotesque and painful image he saw shook his mind; he ran up to the lifeless figure lying on the floor. He moved his lantern closer to her face and instantly recognized her, yet his mind refuse to accept that it was her. The same khushi who defined her name was now front of him in agony. Pandit ran around and gathered some more people and called the ambulance. The road was vacant but they finally saw a white Highlander pass by, someone was about to run towards him for aid but the driver drove by too fast.😭

People stared at her with sympathy and pity

From the crowd came cries such as "bechari, she is not gonna make it"

...

Arnav reached the mandir he leapt out of his car and climbed up the stairs. He saw the crowd gathered'he was now terrified, he pushed through the crowd to make way to the center.

By now he realized there was no night ceremony going on.

He noticed a body on the cold floor; he noticed a hand and his world began to shake. He pushed the person in front of him with immense force that he slipped to the side. His eyes finally made way to his loss'

Arnav instantly fell to his knees to land in her pool of blood. He felt the world spinning, the earth shaking, he felt his head burning. The image of his dead mother played before his eyes, he had gone through this before but the pain he felt now made him feel numb. Trembling with fear he worked the courage to place her limp head into his lap and led out the most painful cry the world had ever heard, a cry that reached as far the seventh sky, which shook the plinth of God. He moved his hands to her pale check that felt like ice next to his warm flesh.

No, no Khushi, no '.he said like a child. Please no, whyyy???????

God, no kill me not yourself, please no. His hands now out of control now ran havoc through her whole body. He also heard the whispers coming from the crowd

"Maybe she has no one in the world." "bechari shayad ghar walon ne ghar se nikal diya" (maybe her family disowned her)

"mar gai ha shayad" (she is already dead)

Arnav turned around and yelled "SHUT UP!!!!" nothing is going to happen to her, save your pity she is MY KHUSHI, my wife my world and I am not gonna let anyone take her away from me.

The ambulance from the nearest government hospital had reached the mandir and the EMT came forth with the gurney. He yelled at the EMT don't touch her, she is no ordinary girl she is my world and I am enough to save her.
Everyone stood in shock and and assumed that the man was absolutely hysterical.

His hands ran with terror to search for a pulse'.he put his ear over her collapsed chest and heard the faint beating heart, his heart, he felt alive. He ripped open his shirt and tied it against her wrist. He picked her up and walked out of the mandir. He kept looking at her face which was so lifeless,

He wanted to look into those hazel eyes and wished it was all a bad nightmare which would end upon waking. He wished he could wake up once again into her arms like he had that morning he left for London.

He placed her into the back seat and drove fast towards the hospital'

OK guys just fair warnings don't anticipate happy reunion for the next part because Arnav is gonna get a run for his money heheheheh 😈

Lots of Love,Belli
Edited by Carabelli5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
OMG! he came right on time.

It is a heartbreaking story. I can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
It's ur story so do whatever u feel is right.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Simply super update was waiting for it for a while was so glad to see it and read it. Please do continue if you can pm when the next update is out.
Thanks a million!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
loved it yay he saved her
but u r right he should redeen himself before she forgives cant wait

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