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Praniiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

I read it all in a go...lovely story...you are a great writer...

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tanvi_arshi

@tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

I read ur story in one go... N its awesome...loved it...superb...keep writing...

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Lvely story

Really loved it

Thanks for giving us a such good one

Edited by smileyhug7679 - 12 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Read it all in a go
absolutely loved it
u r a brilliant writter

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@.Boss.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Wow! That was an amazing and soulful story! Absolutely LOVED it! The way you played around with the words made it feel so exquisite! I've read numerous amounts of stories about ArShi, and this the best story ever! Just the right amount of pain teamed with passion! Just perfect!

Looking forward to read your other FF Desert Rose, which looks equally promising! Keep it up!

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amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Bookmarked...

So looking forward to reading this...

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Kavi at the end of Himalayan Magic last evening i told you, you have a *New reader Alert*

Well now i want to change that status to *Pankha alert* No scratch that make it an *AC alert*

What did i just read...The thoughts that come to my mind right now is Damn What the hell was i doing all these months and the fact that i am a year too late in making an appearance in this thread.

God this was IPK for me. ❤️ The IPK that i fell in love with. This was the KKGSR that i fell in love with and this was the ASR that i drooled over.

I could see very very clearly right in front of my eyes. Arnav and khushi doing all that you wrote in this story rather than what shit the CVs made Arnav and khushi do towards the last few months.

This is going to be my IPK from now onwards. Thank you Kavi for writing such an awesome story and giving us an IPK dream and ending that we all wished for.

True to his nature and character ASR and true to her nature and character khushi and you know what the best part of the story was you did work along the lines of what was shown in the serial (the near death experience, Arnav's stay at Gupta house) but what you wrote was much more believable and palatable than what i saw on TV.

What do i tell your writing i don't think i am prolific enough to appreciate it with my words. You are incredible amazing and a wonderful author.

I can't thank Disha and Shree enough for sending me here.

Off to read Desert Rose ...

I have been told that i will die for this Arnav. 😳

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amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

That was just fabulous ...loved this story...all the way through from Himalayan Magic...to this DND...

Just awesome... I loved the way Arnav lived tin Lukhnow for Khushi...like a new beginning...

Very well written...Kavi..loved it so much!

Thank you...

Your work is amazing...just amazing...love all your stories...

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: kondhili
Kavi at the end of Himalayan Magic last evening i told you, you have a *New reader Alert*
Well now i want to change that status to *Pankha alert* No scratch that make it an *AC alert*

What did i just read...The thoughts that come to my mind right now is Damn What the hell was i doing all these months and the fact that i am a year too late in making an appearance in this thread.

God this was IPK for me. ❤️ The IPK that i fell in love with. This was the KKGSR that i fell in love with and this was the ASR that i drooled over.
I could see very very clearly right in front of my eyes. Arnav and khushi doing all that you wrote in this story rather than what shit the CVs made Arnav and khushi do towards the last few months.
This is going to be my IPK from now onwards. Thank you Kavi for writing such an awesome story and giving us an IPK dream and ending that we all wished for.

True to his nature and character ASR and true to her nature and character khushi and you know what the best part of the story was you did work along the lines of what was shown in the serial (the near death experience, Arnav's stay at Gupta house) but what you wrote was much more believable and palatable than what i saw on TV.

What do i tell your writing i don't think i am prolific enough to appreciate it with my words. You are incredible amazing and a wonderful author.

I can't thank Disha and Shree enough for sending me here.
Off to read Desert Rose ...
I have been told that i will die for this Arnav. 😳

Hi Liza!

Good for you that you like this Arnav. Desert Rose Arnav and VOF Arnav are already taken !!!! 😆

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iris_iris2

@iris_iris2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#320

Wonderful story buddy! I finished it in two days reading. The story was excitingly different from the original show IPKKND yet it had all colours of the original characters of ASR&Khushi. It was nice to read a kind of wrap up of all loopwhole left in the original story writing.

But above all I have to tell you buddy your work was well organised into each chapter especially the links given at the end of old chapter made it easy for me to catch up with the chapter. Your thoughts were organised although you used to give lots of details but even then I was not distracted or confused with lots of characterisation or undue details.

All in all it was treat to read your writing. Keep me updated if you can for your future ventures.