Arhi: Dark Night Dawning Epilogue updated pg 23

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Ohhh noo i cnt blv this is the last part of my fav story[:'(] i ll miss this ff very badly,...btw last part was briliantly super...their realization,their old memory,their love,their making love all were absolutely awesome...u portrayed each n everything very well..thnk u so much 4 giving us this beautiful story :)

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

I am speechless no words 👏

Sad 😭 that this FF had ended

Looking forward to the epilogue

U did justice to the ending the flashbacks their confession but I am still sad that its the end

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Very nice and appropriate ending...

Epilogue should be after 10 years... We have lots of Arhi with toddlers.. And Arhi wih older kids...

The epilogue can be with kids who are 9 , 7 and 6 years old...

That can be the base for ur next story..😉

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

oh no you are ending this???

so sad!!!

i loved this update

waiting for more from you

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sonia jangotra

@abraxos

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

this is for you👏. it was a fantastic ending

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Super sweet ending.. Loved it that they talked it through.. It was beautiful to walk through past events so beautifully.. Really enjoyed the story..

Amazing work..

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

wow! loved the end! loved how both of them reminisced abt their past moments. arnav had a hard time tryin to tell her abt his feelings but finally he did it man! n loved how he did it.😊 omg finally this journey has ended.feelin really nostalgic. loved the entire journey startin right frm himalayan magic to this one. now m jus recommending it to anyone n evryone here. congrats to u n also a big thank u🤗 for giving us such a fantastic story. the situations here have a grt potential to be made as a tv drama.

n hey i just loved the last lines u added at the end.so brilliant. r they frm any film.?? if yes then can u pls tell me frm which film?

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

that is the cuestest fight i have ever came across... it was hilleriouas how she was going on and on blurting out everything ... loveeed the last past ... how he had finely dicided to let go of his past...