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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#971

Awww...Swats...*hugs*
How are you? Missed you...:(
This was a beautiful chapter...i loved their first kiss...it was absolutely another way of expressing ones love and not just to make the update hot...the kiss was needed...
I adore Arnav and Khushi...Arnav's impatience, Khushi's shyness , their longing to be with each other and their concern for each other is absolutely droolworthy..
You already know how much i wish i had a mentor like Arnav...
Thanks for the PM...

Love you..
Take care...

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#972

They kissed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

I liked d whole sexual tension u ve described so subtly... d way u said he wil see her crunchin her nose.. when no one is lookin... d way she wants to always make him proud...d way he felt bad abt not droppin her til home though he knows it is rt... may be tht smal thought in it dat someday he wil rightfully drop her home... i always love d way u put things!

n d best part of d update has to be undoubtedly d way u described d kiss... it is so new for both of them... new n scary but u stil wanna trust n soothe each other... suddenly feel u r meant to be there... absolute WOW moment❤️

n abt Lance Armstrong... i really looked upto him when u wrote abt him as inspiration here.. n when suddenly i read abt dopin next...i was shook up for a sec but like u i believe u love a good thing in a person than d whole person..i believe in learnin good things from everyone n his resilience wil always be somethin i wil look upto

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#973

that was awesome

luv it

updt soon

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#974

awesome update...

love their teasing

and finally they kissed..

thanks for the pm

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#975

Wow! Such a beautiful update. Their conversation was funny. Love a worked up and red-as-tomato Khushi! Lol! ;-) You did full justice to their first kiss. Wonderfully described! :-D

Excellent. You've come a long way with your writing skills. It's amazing. Keep up the good work. :-)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#976

You updated after a long time, but the update was worth waiting for. Loved the text messages and kiss was decribed beautifully. In short, loved the update.

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#977

Hahahah two things her mouth is good at, I loved that.

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#978

They kiss 😳
Awesome update
continue soon please
and thank u for pm me

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#979

Next thread coming soon... Waiting
Khushi's interns are going to stop soon.. Now its difficult for them..
They already missing each othets company... What will they fo then
superb
thanks for pm