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amandadsouza95 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
@-Fizz-: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
fizzi...

update kar de isse...

and even MSF...that fiance one... kab se waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
All I can say is hang in there people. Not sure when I'll update but won't abandon for sure :')
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
cont soon
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago


oOo


Riddhima woke up to see a beautiful morning. The sun rays were peeping through the window as the curtains were drawn neatly to a side. A small smile adorned her pretty face as she sat up on the bed and stretched. As soon as the memories of last night came back to her, the smile vanished as fast as it had appeared.

She looked around but didn't find him in the room. Obviously, screw his effort to make himself worthy of me! Must've gone for work leaving me back. She thought over the obvious and got off the bed but her feet didn't touch the floor beneath. She felt something soft. Roses?

She looked down and saw thousand of rose petals adorning the floor waiting to be graced by her beautiful feet. She smiled slightly and walked where the rose petals took her..to the living room. She didn't find him there either. Just as she was about to call out his name, she saw him appear from the kitchen with a tray in his hand. A Steaming breakfast awaited her.

"Oh! You're up! Already.." Armaan looked down disappointed.

"So you wanted me to sleep for the rest of my life? With no interruptions whatsoever?" She added as a taunt.

"Interruptions? What? NOO! Come sit."

He held her hand and dragged her to the couch, making her sit comfortably. She noticed the dark spots under his eyes. Was he serious when he said he was hurting without her? But today, even with those ugly dark circles, his face looked serene. Like he had won an award or something!

"Taste this. I cooked for you!"

"Armaan are you sure? You couldn't even put on the gas earlier."

"I know! But I've come a long way from there." Asad said softly.

Riddhima ignored his comment and tasted the pancake with cherry sauce.

"Mmm..this is actually not bad Armaan! Looks like the bitch taught you a lot!" She couldn't help but taunt him over and over again.

Armaan was deeply hurt by her comment. But he let it go, he deserved it.

"Okay so I've decided, we'll go to your favorite place for lunch and then go for a movie and then for a walk in the park and then for dinner and then a long drive and-"

"Armaan! Why are you doing this?" Riddhima said suddenly.

"Why am I doing this? Because I want you back. The real you! Not this woman who won't look at me ever!"

"I'm not changing Armaan. I've tried being a good wife, but apparently good doesn't work in your case."

"Riddhima you agreed to give me a chance! You can't snatch it back from me just because you think I can't get your forgiveness. You can't think that way about me without even letting me prove my innocence."

"Innocence? Really?" She raised her brows.

"Fine. Not innocence. But lemme just prove it to you that I truly am sorry! Gimme a chance Riddhima! Let me in! I promise I'd make you the most happy woman on earth."

Riddhima looked at his face and saw genuine hope and a certain desperation. She would try this. Maybe it would make a lot of things clear to them.

"Okay. But just today. After 12 am tonight, I make my final decision. Deal?"

"Deal." Armaan smiled.


oOo


Yep this is a short one. Please bear with me for now! Please! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
me...

so finally u updated...

whoppiieee...

loved the update...

but it was so small... but loved how u gave out the last part.. my expectations sky-rocketed..

so loved how u r shaping the whole thing...

ridz lying and then ammy trying everything... the taunts are so well placed...

waiting for next part eagerly
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wheee... Armaaan is going to win her back. Lets c wat happens. Itni jaldi armaan ko jeetne mat dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my goodness u updated???????????
well that was a chotu one but a nice one...
armaan is really being a sweetheart now...
i hope riddhima would give him a chance nd would come back to him...
now i am really luking forward to more...
i know its greedy😛 but update the next part also na ,just can't wait to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. update was awesome..
pls complete it soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
great part dear
do continue soon

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