FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 65

Hey Fari, *large hugs*

Gosh! I feel like a jerk to have not even read this part, don't know which rock did I actually hit these days but whatever it was, it definitely was not a good one.


So sorry for being this late, *hold her ears and sits up and down*, I just had completely forgotten to comment, in fact I just read the update too.:/


Anyway, I will cut my stupid blabber short and come directly to the update, as always it was just the most simplest yet all the more hilarious update like all others have been.*throws her head back laughing mad*

Hahahaha, the invitation card do reminded of my younger brothers first birthday, my dad had the same thing written on the card just that the names were different. I was four back then, and man the amount I grumbled seeing the card, apparently I was a good reader so i knew how to read.:P I felt like punching dad right in the face, because well I was not a tad bit happy with having a sibling I was so much better alone. But then it got worst five years later, when i was eight, my younger sister was born, and on her welcome party they wrote mine and my brother's proud invitation, and since the two of us were old enough, we kept complaining day and night about how mum and dad could throw her somewhere. It happened so that she was too fiesty and always doing things that got the two of us in trouble. *sigh* The times we had.:P


He wouldn't even go to take a shower until mum threatened him that If he started smelling like he did when he got home from the kidnappers, she won't come near him for a week. Dad looked horrified on hearing this and ran to the bathroom, taking Mum's clothes with him in the hurry.


This just made me go more insane than I already am.*holds her stomach from aching any more*, when they got back home and I was like the danmed banyan or whatever wouldn't go away I was like man she is hugging and kissing him in that danmed ghanda masota banyan seriously? What is it with her, is her smelling sense dead or something? Glad you added it in here!


Hahhahahah,:P The entire Asmara-Ashar conversation was more than hilarious. *rolls down on the floor laughing*, the usual sibling banter, just that toddlers are a tad bit smarter. Reminds me of this show on Nickelodeon which use to air when I was small, 'Rugrats' it was, where similarly toddlers use to chat with each other.:P And more surprisingly, their households were more crazier than the Raizada clan.:P


Payal Mausi was busy doing some 'Chicken Kaari' work. I didn't get it. Chicken Kaari sounds like a dish and Payal Mausi was sitting with a piece of cloth and a needle. I didn't ponder too much over that. A lady who can cry 22 and a half hours a day can do anything!


When for the first time they talked about Payal and Chicken Kaari, I actually thought it was dish, in fact I think it is, I do eat it anyway, but well when I came to know it had something to do with cross stitch work or something, I had this wide eyed expression,and everybody in my household kept muttering 'Pagal hain' around me.:P


The Anser-Ashar coversation just made me wanna go hug the two babiess.:D Such a very very convincing xerox copy of Arnav-Aakash they are! Btw I have considerably noticed, these days Aakash is acting mature in the show, like a man, and not a teen like he use to before, and he has even reduced the use of 'Bhai' to a very considerable amount. :/ Smitten Arnav doesn't enthrall him any more I guess.:/


Dad spends half his day playing with Asmara. I didn't know he was capable of loving so many people! Mum, his laptop, Anjali Bua, his laptop, Me, bluetooth, his laptop, plants, his laptop and Asmara too now? Wow!


OMG! This is one part I am not forgetting in a long time now, like seriously, laptop? :P Whoever gave the idea to the CV's to make him so obsessed with it, I half think knowing Barun he probably kills time playing khelo cricket games.:P Instead of naming the show 'Didi KI Saut' it should have been 'Laptop ki Saut', at least that would have sound more catchy and reasonable.;)


Overall just an amazing, almost closing update, I coudnt really ask for more, really I coudnt.:D


Though you say you aren't contented with this part, i would certainly object that this this part has definitely made it to my top 5 most favorite parts of this SS.:D


Once again, hats off to you for such a overwhelming, hilarious and splendid update. *claps her hand furiously*


Thankyou for the PM. (I don't even seem to remember if I did get one.:/)


Love ya!


Batool

Originally posted by: claireDD

u r impossible...
im telling u girl...U R IMPOSSIBLE ON EARTH !!!!!
amazing lovee...im jumping on my chair...wooohooo..

the bed wetted itself...hahahahaha...
and anser 'bhai' ing him every now and then...
and and hez got an image to maintain in front of sarah...!!!!!
and and and the SUV ending up like the rusted helicopter in sheesh mehel...

🤣

this is freaking awesome...
when will u ever learn to be confident with ur work?😡 (with regard to da note below the update)
u r kinda insatiable Fari...

i adored the whole update...
an absolute knockout to be frank...

love u...🤗

Originally posted by: ASR12

<font color="#9933FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Fari!!!!...how are u???!!...
well,wat can i say apart fantasticalisticawesome about this,huh??!!!!...amazin as usual!!
i really liked it..i'm cursin miself for not seein it yesterday now!..hihi..
ROFLing about ashar...he is soo funny and with soo much attitude!!..hahahah...
i'm quite sad seeing that its cuming to an end but i can understand u...
well,i'm off again to read other OSs from u!!..😉</font>

<font color="#9966CC" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">oops forgot ur small gift..its a habit now..hihi..😆</font>


<font color="#FF6666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">love butterflies very much..soo wanted to share one wid u..😃</font>

Originally posted by: Avi64

Aviii!! Omg! You wrote such a long comment that my poor cellphone had to cut it off to quote 😆

Awww yes, I was thinking about ending this series but now I'm not so sure cos literally everyone told me not to! So i'm really confused! I think I'll just follow your advice... Take breaks and write whenever I get ideas 😉

And you loved this one too? You always do! I think its cos Ashar's your Love so thats the main reason behind loving each update 😉 I'm thinking about writing one today... Don't have any good ideas really, but I think I'll come up with something once I sit down to write it Insha'Allah 😳

Anyways, Thank Youuu for the absolutely wonderful and awfully sweet comment! I seriously enjoyed it way more than my update! Love youuu hun!! And can't thank you enough for the love you shower on Ashar! 😛

Originally posted by: Fan_ipkknd1

YAAYAYYY! You updatedd!!🥳

Okay so it was sooo adorablee!! I mean Asmara's such a cool kid, i wanna hug her!!😆

Anser is cuteee tooo! Im so glad Ashar is here to make him a good kid amd mot like his father *Phew*! i mean who can tolerate the whole family of three crying all the time? Aaahhh!

Asmara ans to be a drama queeen afterall! She's Khushi's daughter!😆

Btw you cant be serious about ending this are you?😔

You could do so much, the sibbling fights, Ashar taking care of asmara, parents fighting and kids cutely making them make up w/o them knowingg! Don't end this ! I love this! 😔

Or if youre uncertain and want to end this on a good note, you can end this and start another SS with asmara, asher, arnav, khushi, even akash payal and anser! But well its upto you so ofcourse! I just lovveee thiiiss SS, its just soo cutee!❤️Makes me awww all the timeee!!

Originally posted by: pakpearl

.A great post...Asmara is really d carbon copy of my khushi😳... n Anser is Aakaash p-2😆...n as we all know ...Asher is d real Raizada of Shantivan😛... o Fari,u r ending this wonderful SS of urs😕......but u n Ashum r not allowed 2 discontinue d amazing series of ASHER-ASMARA'S OS😃

Originally posted by: highonshows

awww man,...fari...

dont be saying tht,...Asmara is smart n anser with his bhai antics...so cute...U can do plenty with this kids...

They are getting so much popularity...honeslty ddont close it...

Ashar can go to preschool...

Asmera and Anser first food feeding and then them going to certain wedding...or picnic...

Ashar can go for swimming lessons n also make La's daughter come to visit finally...

This is getting really fun pls...dont stop...

Asmara's ear pierce...u can do plenty of things with kids...

Dont close it,...pls...

I m totaly loving it...i absoultely lover Ashar and Asmara's conv...n him admitting she's smart...

Anser with his bhai bhai...was too cute...

U can also show Asmara and Anser's chemistry like Khushi and payal's...it would be totally awesome...

Pls reconsider...as i shall really miss these kids...they are not just the lead's kids...but now have their own indivuality...and i m totaly in love with ASR jr...plsss

Avni