FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 50

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

116k

Users

255

Likes

3.2k

Frequent Posters

mizzraksha712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
hahahahah cute .. lol @ payal mausi n her genes .. superb job
noclapsplease thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!! i just read all the parts they were outstanding😊
u write brilliantly
update soon 😊

-ElmoFuj- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Okay so i used to read this SS, like regularly! And comment too! But then after the 5th update, i thought you didnt update! Can u believe it, i missed all of thisss! 😭 And then i got a pm from you regarding this SS and saying i was hocked seeing CHAPTER 14 would be an understatement!!!


My God! How did i miss it all this whileee?

Anyways, lovinnggg iiittt! Love baby Ashar and now in love with baby asmara too!
Arent they the most cutest? <3
Ashar is more like his dad, no? Love himmm! šŸ˜†
Love your sense of humour too! Lovelyyy!!
Please pm me whenenever you update and please update sooon!
I read from chal 5-14 in one go and now cant wait to read more already! šŸ˜†

Do not forget to pm me pleaseee, i dont wanna miss it againnn!
Edited by Fan_ipkknd1 - 13 years ago
SmileyStar thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbarunsanaya6

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#FF0000">woow
brand new baby sister, compared with a world cup, n she is a baby n not ur laptop...!!! I liked it
n Payal mausi's son needs to cry a lot
Ashar allergic to babies similar to Arnav allergic to agarbatti n Akash allergic to chameli ka tel...!!
Dad place the order n so she resembles Khushi
wooow
this is sooo goood
I'm so in love with him,...!!!
</font>



Awww Glad to hear your thoughts and sooo glad that you enjoyed this update as well! Thanks for commenting hun 😳
SmileyStar thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum



Hahahaha 🤣 I'm pretty sure when Arnav finds out where Ashar learnt about C Section from, he'll come and strangle you!! But I hope that doesn't happen cos then I'll die of jealousy that you got to die in Arnav's arms and I don't 🤣

Hehehe! Yes Oscar's cute but I don't touch dogs šŸ˜† So I just watch him from a distance and run inside the house when he starts coming towards me šŸ˜†

101 ways of getting my daughter back from the laad governor? 🤣 🤣

OMG! Call 911! Ashum's a terrorist!! She has got all sorts of weapons in her comp and she always threatens to use them against me! 🤣

SmileyStar thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aartzz--

aww i loved it! allergic to his siblings hahah!!

So cute!!
Thanks for the PM!



Originally posted by: mistyrains

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Payal and her sobs *sigh*</font>


<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Then Anjali and her thaal, sheer love Fari, you are too good.</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Great entry, loved it :DD</font>



Originally posted by: sejaldegadwala

Hillarious as usual... badi der kar di but awesome update



Originally posted by: lwfw

this is the first time i am commenting, love the way you blend the character characteristic with kids talk,šŸ‘





Originally posted by: sanjeewi15

another superb update... poor anjali, the way ashar think about her... :D





Originally posted by: bhaktiii

It's really tooo good.. Out of the world!! I was rofling



Originally posted by: darkangelp

šŸ‘aw!! u keep writing better n better by the day...such a lovely chaptr!!!!šŸ‘



Thank You! Thank You! Thank you guys for leaving such awesome comments! A hug for you all šŸ¤—
Avi64 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Dear Diary,

It was pretty hard being happy for my family when my family was studiously ignoring me and busy jumping up and down at the sight of my brand new baby sister. Everyone crowded around my dad and then took turns holding her like she was a Cricket World Cup while dad fretted about, squeaking, "Careful! Be careful!" And I felt like screaming, 'Stop freaking out Dad! She's only a Baby, not your precious Laptop!'

the line in blue was damn good but what cracked me was the one in red! even my love understands that his hand has something for his laptopšŸ˜† i guess his next line would be "I never thought my Dad was capable of loving so many people... anjali bua, his laptop, mum, his laptop, me, mum and his laptop and yeah Asmara, mum and his love of life laptop"

The sight of Dad holding someone other than me, made me want to cry. I hadn't thought of him capable of such treachery. Controlling my tears, I quietly made my way to my mum and was relieved to find that atleast she remembered her son as she showered kisses all over my face and for the first time in my life that didn't annoy me.

thank you khushi... at least you didn't let Ashar feel left out...

As I cuddled into my mum, I was shocked to find her stomach deflated. The hospital people had succeeded in doing what I couldn't. And that was puncturing her stomach! With those large needles called Injections I guess. I felt my temper rise. Who are they to touch my mum? If only I could see the doctor who had done this, I'd give him a piece of my mind.

you have definitely inherited your dad genes, haven't you? you have a right of puncturing your mom's tummy but if any other person dares touches her... no damn way! i'll kill you!šŸ˜‰ TYPICAL ASR!

Well, I'd scream 'What The' at him, I'm sure he'd understand.

awww... your dad will be so proud of you! *tears of happiness!*šŸ˜†

Akash Chacho entered at that moment, carrying another devil, Ummm I mean baby. And Payal Mausi was rolled in behind them on a really cool bed with wheels. I wanted to have a ride on it too but Mum wouldn't let me.

hmmm... you should have bellowed like your dad! "mai apni kismat khud likhta hoon aur meri kismat mein likha hai that i'm going to ride this bed this very moment!"šŸ˜†

Anser started crying then without warning, shocking Akash Chacho terribly but I was already ready for it. I mean, Hello? He's Payal Mausi's son! Crying buckets of tears is in his genes!

Love you for this one!šŸ˜†

A very flabbergasted Akash Chacho took his son to Payal Mausi to find her already drowning in a puddle of her own tears, opening and closing her mouth like a Goldfish while no sound came out. Finally she managed between sobs, "Akash Ji, Ab hum kia karain ge? Humara Munna ro raha hai Akash Ji" before succumbing to tears again.

who made her a mom yaar?! she needs a mom to take care of her! vaise sorry wrong ques! i know whose act of crime this wasšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜›

A low 'Bhai' escaped Chacho's mouth as he started towards my dad holding his screaming baby but seeing him already holding Asmara he stopped short, running his hand through his hair in helplessness as he just stood looking here and there before Manorma Daadi stepped in for the rescue, loudly exclaiming "Why fear when Manorma is there?" and finally everyone heaved a sigh of relief.

Hello hi bye bye!😊

Dad, on the other hand was completely oblivious to his surroundings as he just stared at Asmara mutely as if she had a laptop screen fitted on her neck instead of a face.

Laptop again! šŸ˜†

His lack of speech or to be more precise, his lack of 'What The' made me wonder if he had slept with the mosquito repellent again and hence lost his voice.

no baby! your dad can also be overwhelmed with emotions at times... ask us... we've seen him fall in love with all mom along with all the rabba ways in between!šŸ˜†

And thinking of allergies, It clicked me then that I had finally found what I was allergic to! These two new babies!

Same way as a mosquito repellent makes dad lose his voice and Payal Mausi's Chameli ka tail makes Akash Chacho sneeze, these two infants made me want to cry! That would explain why I've been feeling like having a good cry ever since I entered this ward but had controlled myself cos I can't very well cry in front of my baby sister, can I?

no no you can't... well no worries we understandšŸ˜†

Sure, its a little weird kind of an allergy but strange allergies do run in the family. I should know, I've become an expert living in my house.

Dad was still busy staring at his 'Little Angel' and that annoyed the hell out of me. Were there less staring sessions in Shantivan without this new duo? But I was relived to find that Asmara was sleeping peacefully and wasn't reciprocating the stare like mum did and that is what encourages dad to stare at her even more. But having a staring competition with a sleeping baby looked so boring! Don't know whats wrong with dad!

cracking lines yaar!

Finally Dad noticed me sitting next to Mum, walked towards me and lowered the bundle of blankets in front of my face as he softly introduced me to my sister saying, "Ashar, meet your baby sister, Asmara" like I was too dumb to figure it out myself.

no ashar! sometimes your dad has a tendency to act dumb...šŸ˜‰ but i'm so glad you left those genes fo your mom and dad behind!šŸ˜›

I looked at her closely and I had to give it to the hospital! They had done a really good job at manufacturing her. She resembled Mum to a startling degree!

Manufacturing her?! šŸ˜† fine... from this age he can only think of factories and production... bless him! he'll make a very fine ASR himself! (pun intended!)

And that helped me guess that it was probably dad who placed the order for my sister and got one made just like Mum. No wonder he feels inclined to stare at her face too!

Have you ever wondered why your mom absolutely dotes on you?šŸ˜›

But there was a difference in his stare I had noticed right away. Dad stares at mum like a lunatic without a properly functioning brain but he stared at Asmara with so much love in his eyes that it was a little unnerving! And he blinked quite frequently to stop his tears from falling too, something he doesn't do with Mum. And there was the sweetest smile on his lips which isn't there when he's staring at mum cos his mouth hangs open a little.

well observed! and the nobel prize for this very scientific observation goes to junior ASR!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜›
šŸ˜›
We went back home together to be greeted by Anjali Bua and her Poja ki thaal. That woman seriously needs a new hobby!

totally agree with you! why don't you teach her something?šŸ˜›

She waved it in front of both babies and then applied some red colour to their forehead although it wasn't even Holi. And So, my new siblings were welcomed into Shantivan.

Precap: Siblings Interact!



loved it totally! so instead of you know commenting and mentioning things i liked I kind of quoted your post... ab mai itni aalsi hoon to koi kya kare!šŸ˜›
ArhiDeewani thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy :) I loved this part so much!! Some really hilarious line that I absolutely loved:

'Stop freaking out Dad! She's only a Baby, not your precious Laptop!'

The hospital people had succeeded in doing what I couldn't. And that was puncturing her stomach!

He's Payal Mausi's son! Crying buckets of tears is in his genes!

Sure, its a little weird kind of an allergy but strange allergies do run in the family. I should know, I've become an expert living in my house.


I looked at her closely and I had to give it to the hospital! They had done a really good job at manufacturing her. She resembled Mum to a startling degree!

We went back home together to be greeted by Anjali Bua and her Poja ki thaal. That woman seriously needs a new hobby!

You did an AWESOME job! Damn good update, can't wait for the next! xx

Sweet_Ashum thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar


Oh! He wouldnt have to strangle me...the moment he will be right in front of me i'll think I died n went to some Paristan where he is the head Pari šŸ˜†

U r scared of dogs? šŸ˜† Just like my friend...

911???? That doesnt apply in India šŸ˜† N babes u have no idea abt the weapons I've got...Just wait n watch šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†

Sweet_Ashum thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tash10

OMG someone really said that?🤣 Now, I wonder who did this calamity🤣
What does cheating mean?😲 *rushes to see the definition in the dictionary for concise definition*
Cheating means to break the rules in a game, examination, or contest, in an attempt to gain an unfair advantage!🤣
But I guess everything is fair in reserving the first place like it is fair in love and war!🤣


You can ask me...I came to know who did the calamity...
I'm thinking abt letting her meet my chainsaw...Fari's already had a meeting n she absolutely loved the meeting as my chainsaw fell in love with her with a vengeance šŸ˜†
Unfair advantage? Hmm..I wonder what it means šŸ˜‰

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

The Secret Poet ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A college romance where someone...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

a year ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ā–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".