FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!! congrats on your new thread..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey congratzz for new thred ...
AWeesum prt ...updt sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazinggg!!! Pls continuteee!!! LOOOVE IT!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am really sorry for not commenting on your SS for a preety long time,But for starters, now that I feel like going on a roll commenting on my favorite works, so here it is,
A BIGGG Congratulatioons to you on a new thread! SS, dont usually make it to a new thread but your did! Thats a milestone like seriosuly, you should know that you doing absolute wonders with this idea of a diary for JNR ASR🤗
Coming to the recent update,
Well, have you ever failed to have me ROFLing to the ground with Ashars' blabber? No a BIGGG NO! This was absolutely hillarious, I dont seen to know which line was I not smiling while I was reading it, this was just too adorable to contain myself from not commenting on it!🤣 That Dahej thing only in the beggining was itself a cracker.🤣 And then Anjali's marriage, and Ashar's though regarding it, were dead going to crack my brain open.🤣
Arnav feeding Jalebis to Khushi, and on top of that making it for her without as much as grumbling, was super adorable, I cna only imagine and laugh over such a possiblity.🤣 Khushi being all whiny, over her having a second child, and the impilict and explict meaninings to 'swelling' literally had me rolling on the floor.🤣 I have to say that was preety commendable witty work right there, to make the thing look like ROFL and happeningly real at the same time.😳
'Chootay Ka Chootay?', I was hoping for some dialouge from our baby Ashar like 'When is Anjali Bua's Chootay Ka Chottay, going to get Chottay Ka Barey, atleast that would look a bit classy'.🤣 Though, just my idea, I love giving suggestions when I love something to the core.😃
Overall, and absolutely amazing job you have been doign with this SS, I wish it woudnt have to end, but then still I am waiitng for the time it does,and after allt he laughter that you have spread, I woudnt mind crying a bit just remembering how something that I loved ended.😳
P.S: Did the idea of naming the baby Ashar come from the 'Ashar' in 'Humsafar',? Just curious, you are a Pakistani, so was wondering if you are a Humsafar freak too.😆
Anyways, Thankyou for the Pm.
Love you,
Batool.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Can i pleeeaaassseee pretty please adopt ashar?
He is the THE most cutest kid ever...
Chotay kay chotay...woowww😉
Oh how is he gng to react when he becomes the big brother!

Ashar you rock!

Ok i m done😳

C ya soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Can i pleeeaaassseee pretty please adopt ashar?

He is the THE most cutest kid ever...
Chotay kay chotay...woowww😉
Oh how is he gng to react when he becomes the big brother!

Ashar you rock!

Ok i m done😳

C ya soon



Hahaha! Half of the forum wants to adopt Ashar but I'm afraid he isn't up for adoption 😆 Otherwise I would've been the first to adopt him 😉

Awww Glad to hear you enjoy reading it so much! Will update the next part today Hopefully 😳
Edited by SmileyStar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srain10

congrats on new thread👏really enjoy reading ashar diary n his comments on hisparents😆



Thanks Hun! Glad to know you enjoy reading it 😃

Originally posted by: sval000

awesome update!!! congrats on your new thread..😉



Thanksss 😳

Originally posted by: drshazialnh

Awesome. Awesome. Awesome.



Awww Thank Youuu 😳

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

hey congratzz for new thred ...
AWeesum prt ...updt sooon



Thanks and I will soon, Inshaa Allah😊

Originally posted by: ArhiSuryaRanya

Amazinggg!!! Pls continuteee!!! LOOOVE IT!



Hehehe! I will! Will try updating the next part today Inshaa Allah 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nav_bat

<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">
I am really sorry for not commenting on your SS for a preety long time,</font>

</div><div>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">But for starters, now that I feel like going on a roll commenting on my favorite works, so here it is,</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">A BIGGG Congratulatioons to you on a new thread! SS, dont usually make it to a new thread but your did! Thats a milestone like seriosuly, you should know that you doing absolute wonders with this idea of a diary for JNR ASR🤗</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Coming to the recent update,</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Well, have you ever failed to have me ROFLing to the ground with Ashars' blabber? No a BIGGG NO! This was absolutely hillarious, I dont seen to know which line was I not smiling while I was reading it, this was just too adorable to contain myself from not commenting on it!🤣That Dahej thing only in the beggining was itself a cracker.🤣And then Anjali's marriage, and Ashar's though regarding it, were dead going to crack my brain open.🤣</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Arnav feeding Jalebis toKhushi, and on top of that making it for her without as much as grumbling, was super adorable, I cna only imagine and laugh over such a possiblity.🤣Khushi being all whiny, over her having a second child, and the impilict and explict meaninings to 'swelling' literally had me rolling on the floor.🤣I have to say that was preety commendable witty work right there, to make the thing look like ROFL and happeningly real at the same time.😳</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Chootay Ka Chootay?', I was hoping for some dialouge from our baby Ashar like 'When is Anjali Bua's Chootay Ka Chottay, going to get Chottay Ka Barey, atleast that would look a bit classy'.🤣Though, just my idea, I love giving suggestions when I love something to the core.😃</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Overall, and absolutely amazing job you have been doign with this SS, I wish it woudnt have to end, but then still I am waiitng for the time it does,and after allt he laughter that you have spread, I woudnt mind crying a bit just remembering how something that I loved ended.😳</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">P.S: Did the idea of naming the baby Ashar come from the 'Ashar' in 'Humsafar',? Just curious, you are a Pakistani, so was wondering if you are a Humsafar freak too.😆</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Anyways, Thankyou for the Pm.</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Love you,</font>
<font color="#006600" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Batool.😳</font>



OMG!! How could I forget to put your name in my speech at the start of the thread?! *banging my head on the wall* ok, I've edited it now! Sooorrryyy! Its just that you didn't comment on my last update so I guess you flew out of my mind. Sorry, my bad!

First of all, Thank Youuu for such a looonngg comment as always! I love reading them 🤗

Hahaha! And yes, This SS is gonna end soon! Don't wanna drag it out too much! I know I've said this like a million times now but everytime I think of ending it, some new ideas pop in my head and then of course I've to write them down 😆

And yeah! The chotay k chotay wala part could have been more classy I guess... Didn't come to my mind before 😉

And yeah! I used to Looove Humsafar (still do!) So I stole the name from there as I love Fawad Khan and his character as Ashar was absolutely fabulous! Did you watch it too?? 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Everyone, 🤗

Thank You Sooo Much for all your Awesome Comments! They mean the world to me! I Love you all! ❤️

I was feeling too lazy to write an update today but Iqra forced me to as she was really 'craving' for an update of this SS and I had to give in! Hope you like it girl 😳

Dear Diary,

I'm seriously getting worried about Mum and Payal Mausi. They seem to be having a contest to see who reaches the size and weight of a baby elephant first! I mean, they just don't know when to stop eating! Both of them have put on so much weight that it seriously has me worried that if they continue like this, a time will come when they'll just explode! I've seen it happening in cartoons so many times!

I've stopped trying to understand what the other family members are trying to do by encouraging them to eat saying IS HALAT ME you both should eat whatever you want! Mum has started eating Jalebies everyday while Payal Mausi eats half a dozen baisan kay Laddo's daily! I'm afraid if she continues on like this, she's gonna turn into a gaint laddu herself. Come to think of it, she's already half way there!

So who's responsible for their this big fat halat?! They've got no one to blame except themselves! And I swear I feel like banging my head on the wall hearing 'Is halat me ye, Is halat me wo' about 42 times a day!

And to top it off, both of them have stopped working! They just sit around and order Akash Chacho and Dad to get them whatever they want to eat. And the worst part is, My Dad and Akash Chacho act like their personal servants and obediently fulfill their every craving as soon as the order leave their mouths. Those two are seriously doing more work than OP and HP these days.

My Mum and Payal Mausi don't even step in the kitchen anymore. Poor OP, who doesn't even know how much masala to put in a dish, has to cook all by himself. Before that the only kitchen work he used to do was to cut onions cos I've heard that my Dad couldn't stand tears in my Mum's eyes so he had ordered that Mum would not cut onions. At first, Payal Mausi would but then Naani had given the responsibility to OP cos then it would seem like Payal Mausi had spent the entire day crying! This way at least she only cries 22 and a half hours a day!

***

Dad's been taking Mum to a hospital every 2 weeks. I asked Mum and Dad why do they go there and Mum answered, 'Doesn't my Raja beta want a little sister?'

This was the first time they had asked me how I would feel about having a sibling. I had quickly shook my head vigorously and Mum had looked at me for a whole minute with her mouth hanging open like I had just declared that I was running off to become a ballerina before bursting into tears. She's so cranky and whiney these days-always on the verge of tears.

Dad tried to calm her down while mum started freaking about how they hadn't thought about me before having another baby, how I would react to another sibling.

And I was thinking, Ok, Calm down Mum! I may not be the nicest guy to get along with but I won't eat my own sister!

Dad finally got her quiet by saying, 'Is Halat me rona acha nahi hota!' Again, Is Halat!! I had to clench my jaw and ball my fists to control my anger. While mum had said that this halat of her was all Dad's fault.

How is this Dad's fault?! He didn't ask you to stuff yourself like this till you reach this 'halat' that you can't even see your toes!

Anyways so the point is my baby sister is going to come from the same posh hospital where I was born. And I think thats why Dad and Mum are visiting it so much cos Dad's probably striking a million dollar deal with the hospital to get a baby daughter.

***

Today all the family members sat and discussed names for the 2 new comers. I must say, it is getting a bit exciting! I'm looking at the positive points, I'll have someone to order around, yell at and tell them what to do! I'll be a nice change.

Dad chose the name 'Asmara' for my sister meaning 'A beautiful butterfly'. I think it will suit her very nicely cos the way mum will dress her, she'll probably end up looking like a butterfly anyway! But I think Ashar and Asmara Singh Raizada will go very nicely- I like the sound of it.

Akash Chacho and Payal Mausi have decided that they'll be getting a boy from the hospital (I'm damn sure having a boy was Akash Chacho's decision! He looks up to my dad so much that he wants children in the same order as well!)

They've chosen the name 'Anser' for their little boy. Akash Chacho had said that if they were having a daughter they would've named her 'bubbly' earning a death glare from Payal Mausi. I don't know who she is but the way Payal Mausi looked outraged, I'm guessing she's probably some relative of that Shyamo Monster!

***

OMG!! Dad has totally lost it! He has started calling my Mum's fat tummy 'Asmara'!! He even talks to it sometimes while mum just grins like a fool! I don't know what's happening in this house anymore!!

***

LIKES AND COMMENTS PLSSS 😳
Edited by SmileyStar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res.

*EDIT*

*yAAay* i am first

* Mum has started eating Jalebies everyday while Payal Mausi eats half a dozen Laddo's daily! I'm afraid if she continues on like this, she's gonna turn into a gaint laddu herself. Come to think of it, she's already half way there!*🤣 i was laughing lyk an idiot whn i read this part😆, btw thank u fr updating😃 was stalking this SS since quite a long tym😳
Edited by smarty94 - 13 years ago

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